Originally posted by: sadiltl
Hi, some of you might know me from ghum days. I still chat with some of my friends here about Mannat. I started watching it for Ayesha and followed it for a while before slowly switching off...now also I get sucked...only to see if this show survives for the sake of Ayesha. She is putting sincere efforts.
I read the updates now and then, mostly by my ghum friends Moor, Scar and Cooly. We all shared ghum trauma together and have discussed endlessly about redemption, worthiness and being accepted by their soulmate. Hence, coming for that space and to add my two cents to a badly crafted story. Not that I am an expert, but giving some perspective on how leads should be written based on my limited writing experience...
1. DK becoming negative will not make Vik better. If he proves even equal to current DK, he will look superhero. Making DK evil only means Vik gets everything by fate...not because he deserves it. Mannat and Vik can be both wrong. But coming from previleged place, vik abused his power and money. period. He is MORE wrong morally.
2. Given the reputation of the writers, who do not understand how to write real human characters who are mostly grey, they might spoil DK. It will be so toxic then because Dua will be collateral damage in this mess. The girl loved DK. Having a kid subjected to such a trauma shows the writers dont care about emotions!
3. The best possible way to bring back the focus on the leads is to kill DK while saving Dua. May be he can confess to Mannat before that....so Mannat will be heartbroken over DK's death. Not love, just indebtness. Then slowly make Vik stand by her and his kid. He might never be able to replace DK in Dua's life but the kid being only 7 years old and Vik shown patient with her....there is a hope and hence deep rooting from the audience to wish for his full acceptance from Dua. Mannat will anyway accept him.
Can these writers write such emotionally charged plots, I doubt. But they can try! For that to happen, first they have to somehow kill all the vamps in a bombblast. And let UV's OG parents come and take away UV. Vik will get some sympathy to start with and they can implement point 3.
and stretch it for an year...
If the writers are lurking here, please consider it. Trust me you will get more TRPs.
PS: Finally posted it! cant see the trauma of fans here. 
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