MG-Ankhiyan Gulaab-(Ch-4 & Epilogue-Pg-7)-27/12/25.

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congrats for new story

interesting n emotional

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Hi there

welcome back

Congrats on the new story


P.S will you updating your other stories?

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Captivating prologue... finely written

what secret did Geet discover?

of cos she was concerned about Maan

well Maan and Geet were getting married

but she had to leave for his sake

so she lied to him that she wanted out

as expected Maan was shocked.....

years later they meet under different circumstances

she will be working for Maan

Maan has clearly changed

that moment they saw each other stood still

not surprised that he wants to see her

he was indeed professional

he certainly taunted her

he naturally confronted her

he just wants answers

his anger was justified

he was really hurt by her actions

was this the only way for her?

he is now determined to know the truth

Geet's fears and thoughts were reasonable

will she be able to protect him?


update soon

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Omg how intense and oh so different

Waiting eagerly to see the conversations and destructions like geet thinks amd knows will happen

will she be able yo protect him ??


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Interesting prologue. Waiting for the story to unfold.

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Originally posted by: aparna3011

congrats for new story

interesting n emotional

Thanks a lot. I am glad you liked the concept.
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Posted: 1 months ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi there

welcome back

Congrats on the new story


P.S will you updating your other stories?

Hello thanks a lot for loving the concept.

I hope I can update them… I can’t promise right now.

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Captivating prologue... finely written

what secret did Geet discover?

of cos she was concerned about Maan

well Maan and Geet were getting married

but she had to leave for his sake

so she lied to him that she wanted out

as expected Maan was shocked.....

years later they meet under different circumstances

she will be working for Maan

Maan has clearly changed

that moment they saw each other stood still

not surprised that he wants to see her

he was indeed professional

he certainly taunted her

he naturally confronted her

he just wants answers

his anger was justified

he was really hurt by her actions

was this the only way for her?

he is now determined to know the truth

Geet's fears and thoughts were reasonable

will she be able to protect him?


update soon

Thank you so much for your detailed review of the prologue.

I hope I can continue this story further & finish it off.

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