Beqaraar Dil ~ TalRosh TS | Part 3 (Last) - Pg 9 - Page 7

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Originally posted by: Pori

Beautiful!! LOVED LOVED LOVED IT.

What I enjoyed was you stayed true to the characters and I could picture the scenes I was reading

thank you for tagging me

Thank you so much.❤️

I was honestly missing the boss Talha so I had to incorporate him with pookie husband Talha to create my own version of what I felt Talha would be.😅

I’m so glad that you loved it.🥰 Means alot!

Originally posted by: m4manju

This was wonderfully written! Thanks for the tag, mrina

I haven't watched this show yet, yet I could totally connect with the characters and their current situation. Their banters are cute and through your writing, I can already see chemistry that's going to only intensify going ahead! Talha seems to be awed by missus and she too somewhere knows that but doesn't want to accept. Let's see ye inkaar kab tak tikega

Keep writing!

Thank you so much for your comments despite not having watched the show!🥰 It’s means so much to me that you’d do so, Manju!🥹

Much love to you my friend.❤️

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Behen tum ruk kyu gayi?

Mujhe aagey ka part abhi ke abhi chahiye.

Kab hoga inka patch up? I think it is wrong on Talha's part too, that he's not clearing the air between them. Even in the show it's been 8 days plus. He's talking about his woes, but not what misunderstanding they have between them.

I like the fact that you have covered the missing portions from the show, for example them actually buying the outfit for Walima.

I think she should need a female house help too. She's an alone woman in that household, if she ever gets into the situation where she needs personal help, who's she gonna ask? She's not even comfortable with Talha. Abhi toh koi salon wali would have dressed her up, suppose na hota, who was gonna pull the chains for such outfits... You can't do it alone.

I would also love to see from Roshi's perspective that though she's outwardly showing her anger, but what havoc is playing inside her with the kind of flirt he's doing with her. Though we saw a glimpse of it in this part, I'd like to see more.

Overall it was a beautiful update, but please bring the next part soon... I can't wait to read more...

You are one of my most favourite people on this forum, and I love your writings from a decade now. I'm always eager for you to post more.

Loads of love

Aazeen ❤️

Aazeen!!! My dear dear friend. You are one of my most favourite person on this forum too and I always keep waiting for you to write.❤️

Coming to this part, I know I left it open ended with so much turmoil so yes, there will be another part, if not more. It completely depends on whether I can give an HEA immediately or if I need to write more…😅

I’m so happy that you enjoyed reading and I’ll definitely continue. I’m currently working on the next part but am confused on how to get Talha to confess. The scene by the swimming pool in the episode was so beautiful and pure but I wanted to do something different.☺️

I want to address not only that but also Roshi’s stupidity of agreeing to marry Shariq at the same time so I’m trying to figure out a lot of stuff for the next chapter and it’s likely to be a long one.😁

Thank you so much for your lovely comments and always being encouraging. It means so much to me dost.🥹🫶🏻

Loads of love,

Mrina xx

Originally posted by: serena_shadow

Oh man that was so beautiful 😍😍😍Talha being as always teasing and roshi suppressing her feelings. Best part was the ring & walima clothes shopping which they didn't shown properly in episodes. And the way it was written it felt like mere mind Mei already voh episode chal rha I can picture it all ....jaldi se next part do I'm waiting to read it 🤩🤩🤩🤩

Awww, thank you so much Serena!🥰

Haan haan, likh rahi hoon next part. Have a lot of things to work on so I’ll try to finish and post tonight.☺️

Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

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Ji.. aapke mere har OS pe reserve ke unreserve hone ka intezaar rahega mujhe!😅❤️

Mrinu, I'll think about something to help you write further. If you get ideas before that, well and good. Otherwise, probably my idea works.

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Mrinu, I'll think about something to help you write further. If you get ideas before that, well and good. Otherwise, probably my idea works.

Yha toh meem se party ho rhi hai🤩🤩🤩 collaboration of writing😍😍😍 thank you so much guys for writing cause it truly means a lot especially to me who was depressed cause msm was ending but you guys are saviour 😘😘

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Mrinu, I'll think about something to help you write further. If you get ideas before that, well and good. Otherwise, probably my idea works.

I have come up with an idea finally and have started writing. Let’s see how that turns out.