Beqaraar Dil ~ TalRosh TS | Part 3 (Last) - Pg 9 - Page 6

Love it, Minakrish! 🫶🏻

Look fwd to reading the next part... ❤️❤️

Originally posted by: minakrish

Thank you so much Tulip.🌷

I’m glad you enjoyed reading it. Working on the next part. Hopefully I’ll post it tomorrow.❤️

Finally...

Finally got the time to sit and comment on this!!!!!

Now, coming to the OS, Mrinu Di, THANK YOU FOR GIVING WINGS TO OUR TALROSH IMAGINATIONS

Their roothna manana is soooooooooo cute!

I could literally picture every single expression of theirs as if it were in the show itself!

Talha giving Mohid ki dhamki to Roshi in the beginning Our man knows how to bring out his guns

Also, Talha asking Roshi to thank him for saving her from Shariq I think he really is looking for more trouble... that too when Roshi is already pissed off

Roshi's emotions are all over the place now. Gusse mein dhang se soch nahi paa rahi hai, bechari. Talha Ahmad, yeh kya haal kar diya tumne Roshi ka

And I love that despite her anger, Roshi still acknowledges the depth of her feelings for Talha

THE RING SEQUENCE!!!! OMG!!!!!

Bechara salesman had to witness their back & forth when he just wanted to do his job

And of course the ring would fit perfectly, just like how TalRosh fit into each other's lives perfectly!

I badly want Talha put a ring on Roshi's finger now I know ki shaadi ho chuki hai... phir bhi, a small moment between them, where he puts the ring on her finger, and says that people will now know that she's taken Is it too much to ask???

I LOVE LOVE LOVE THE OS MRINU DI

How do you manage to write such beautiful stories is beyond me! Bohot talented ho aap! And I love that you and I share a lot of common favourite pairings and shows (ArSh, AsYa, etc.,) so that I can keep reading your works

Can't wait for part 2!!!!!

Jaldi de do

Love,
Niya ❤️

Originally posted by: LadyWhistledown

Finally...

Finally got the time to sit and comment on this!!!!!

Now, coming to the OS, Mrinu Di, THANK YOU FOR GIVING WINGS TO OUR TALROSH IMAGINATIONS

Their roothna manana is soooooooooo cute!

I could literally picture every single expression of theirs as if it were in the show itself!

Talha giving Mohid ki dhamki to Roshi in the beginning Our man knows how to bring out his guns

Also, Talha asking Roshi to thank him for saving her from Shariq I think he really is looking for more trouble... that too when Roshi is already pissed off

Roshi's emotions are all over the place now. Gusse mein dhang se soch nahi paa rahi hai, bechari. Talha Ahmad, yeh kya haal kar diya tumne Roshi ka

And I love that despite her anger, Roshi still acknowledges the depth of her feelings for Talha

THE RING SEQUENCE!!!! OMG!!!!!

Bechara salesman had to witness their back & forth when he just wanted to do his job

And of course the ring would fit perfectly, just like how TalRosh fit into each other's lives perfectly!

I badly want Talha put a ring on Roshi's finger now I know ki shaadi ho chuki hai... phir bhi, a small moment between them, where he puts the ring on her finger, and says that people will now know that she's taken Is it too much to ask???

I LOVE LOVE LOVE THE OS MRINU DI

How do you manage to write such beautiful stories is beyond me! Bohot talented ho aap! And I love that you and I share a lot of common favourite pairings and shows (ArSh, AsYa, etc.,) so that I can keep reading your works

Can't wait for part 2!!!!!

Jaldi de do

Love,
Niya ❤️

Haaye... Niyaaa!❤️

Dil khush kar diya tumhare comments ne. THANK YOU SO MUCH.

I know!! We have so many favorites in common and I think you have read most of my works.

Thank you so much for always boosting and encouraging my work. I love that aft3er all these years you still call me Mrinu di. Been a while since someone has called me "Di" here.

If you do wanna check out and catch up with my new stuff which I have written, check out my index whenever you get time: One Girl. A Hundred Journeys.

I would love to hear your views and get your feedback.

I am working on Part 2 now... hopefully after tonight's episode I will post.

Much love always,

Mrinu di

Beautifully written Mrina..it is a duel of wills with Talha having the upper hand by virtue of knowing and accepting things she still doesn’t know ..but she’s holding her own like the spitfire she is

Although I think it feels incomplete ..there has to be a third part, don’t you agree

Originally posted by: sharadrocks

Beautifully written Mina ..it is a duel of wills with Talha having the upper hand by virtue of knowing and accepting things she still doesn’t know ..but she’s holding her own like the spitfire she is

Although I think it feels incomplete ..there has to be a third part, don’t you agree

Thank you so much.❤️

You’re right. It is incomplete. I have another part in the works already.

Originally posted by: mysticltales111

Oh yes, please please please do write more

Posted another part. Forgot to tag you.❤️

Beautiful!! LOVED LOVED LOVED IT.

What I enjoyed was you stayed true to the characters and I could picture the scenes I was reading

thank you for tagging me

This was wonderfully written! Thanks for the tag, mrina

I haven't watched this show yet, yet I could totally connect with the characters and their current situation. Their banters are cute and through your writing, I can already see chemistry that's going to only intensify going ahead! Talha seems to be awed by missus and she too somewhere knows that but doesn't want to accept. Let's see ye inkaar kab tak tikega

Keep writing!

Behen tum ruk kyu gayi?

Mujhe aagey ka part abhi ke abhi chahiye.

Kab hoga inka patch up? I think it is wrong on Talha's part too, that he's not clearing the air between them. Even in the show it's been 8 days plus. He's talking about his woes, but not what misunderstanding they have between them.

I like the fact that you have covered the missing portions from the show, for example them actually buying the outfit for Walima.

I think she should need a female house help too. She's an alone woman in that household, if she ever gets into the situation where she needs personal help, who's she gonna ask? She's not even comfortable with Talha. Abhi toh koi salon wali would have dressed her up, suppose na hota, who was gonna pull the chains for such outfits... You can't do it alone.

I would also love to see from Roshi's perspective that though she's outwardly showing her anger, but what havoc is playing inside her with the kind of flirt he's doing with her. Though we saw a glimpse of it in this part, I'd like to see more.

Overall it was a beautiful update, but please bring the next part soon... I can't wait to read more...

You are one of my most favourite people on this forum, and I love your writings from a decade now. I'm always eager for you to post more.

Loads of love

Aazeen ❤️