Neil Pradhan ( An unexpected journey )

Chapter 1 :

Aaj neil bahut khush tha aaj usne apne school ke music competition mein participate kiya aur usne first prize jeeta . Neil jab prize jeeta to use laga ki jab wo apna prize apne baba aur kaka saheb ko dikhaaega to wo us par proud feel karenge lekin jaise hi woh ghar pahucha to waha to kuch aur hi hua :

Neil - Baba dekho mujhe music competition mein first prize mila hai. ( Neil said hopefully to make his father happy and proud on him ).

Vinod Pradhan - Neil ( in angry tone ) kitni baar kaha hai ki yeh sab faltu kaam ki jagah padhai par dhyaan do , yeh singing se kuch nahi hoga .

Neil ' s smile fainted and his kakasaheb came . Neil becomes little hopeful that his kakasaheb will understand neil ' s passion for singing .

Bhushan Pradhan - Kya ho raha hai . Vinod tum neil ko kyun daant rahe ho.

Vinod - Dekhiye na dada aaj neil kisi singing competition mein first prize jeeta hai to main use samjha raha hu ki singing mein dhyan na de aur padhai par dhyaan de.

Bhushan Pradhan - Neil tera baba bilkul theek keh raha hai. Tujhe pata hai na Pradhan parivaar ka koi bhi sadasya aise singing mein dilchaspi nahi leta hai . Tu yeh singing karna chhod aur padhai par dhyaan de.

Neil - Par kakasaheb main padhai par poora dhyaan de raha hu . Main singing ke liye padhai nahi chhor raha hu .

Vinod - Neil apne kakasaheb se behes mat kar . Hamne keh diya na ki singing chhor kar padhai par dhyaan de to iska matlab aaj se teri singing bilkul band . Hamari baat tujhe samajh aaya ya nahi.

Neil ( by bowing head down ) Samajh gaya baba main aaj ke baad singing nahi karunga.

Neil left the hall with tears in his eyes and went in his room .

Neel apne kamre mein apne haath mein trophy pakad kar ro raha tha .

Neil - Hamesha mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai jo cheez mujhe pasand hoti hai Baba aur Kaka Saheb mujhe wo karne se mana kar dete hai , lekin aai kehti hai na ki bade jo karte hai wo bachho ki bhalai ke liye karte hai , shayad isme meri bhalai hi hogi isiliye Baba aur Kaka Saheb ne mujhe singing chhorne ke liye kaha hai.

Neil consoled himself and put his trophy in such a place in his room that he cannot see it .

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Hi Divya

I have read the chapter. I like the fact that you're writing a story on Neil's childhood.

I will try to read this soon

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