Sunn Mere Dil (GEO) #10 - Wahaj Ali, Maya Ali, Hira Mani - Page 139

Originally posted by: hypnotoad

that was weird. it was haseeb again completely misunderstanding what masala entertainment means. making ur cktr do creepy things that doesn't fit the cktr or situation is not masala.

But he doesn’t write the dialogues. KRQ put the Faraz line.

Originally posted by: 2RsFan

But he doesn’t write the dialogues. KRQ put the Faraz line.

Originally posted by: hakanturkey

I can say that most of the lines and dialogues in this series are very simple and meaningless. They don’t seem like they were written by a screenwriter. Dialogues should be somewhat philosophical or poetic. In my opinion, most of the dialogues were written by the director just to prolong the series. However, the model house that Bilal gave as a wedding gift and the note inside definitely contain the words of the screenwriter.

Lots of people have said it doesn't seem like KRQ's writing. The misogyny is all his but a lot of the dialogues are way too pedestrian. What if he hired some junior writer to write this script and sold it in his name? Like it's written in his style but lack the craft, punch and pukhtagi his writing had. Many writers in ptv do that.

Originally posted by: 2RsFan

Did Bilal act out of character or its cos he was drunk ? First he asked if Faraz looks like him and the constant invasion of Hamsha’s personal space.

Originally posted by: unicornhugs

The invading personal space was a drunken issue. They probably also want make us suspicious that this may go somewhere. I thought the line asking if Faraaz looks like him was a bit weird too. Maybe because Humsha mentioned that he was her ex. Bilal response was that he’s her ex but still visits her. Maybe he feels he’s a one-sided lover just like him. That’s the only thing that makes sense. Otherwise it’s like he’s trying to scope out her type 😕

So Bilal's a tharki when he is drunk Explains the leering at Sadaf crossing the road, Annie you're gorgeous Maybe that's why Humsha wanted him to drink in e19 because it will activate his libido What about when Bilal told Rameen there's no point for her to come as he is not drinking. Does this mean Bilal has performance issues when he is not drinking

Originally posted by: kuhelidebbarma

Even I have the same thoughts...the direction of the scene wasn't good...some of BA's actions actually looked cheap..I mean even if he was drunk in starting episodes it wasn't that cheap..but him walking...leaning towards Humsha everything was really uncomfortable to watch...and not needed at all.

"Here’s a line from our series... a marriage proposal."

"By the way, a man says these words while showing the ring in his hand."

Male lead (marriage proposal):
"Feride, you are the only woman I want to spend my life with. If it's my destiny to become a father, my prayer is for you to be their mother. My final wish is for you to hold my hand when Azrael comes to my door and my soul is being taken."

Female lead:
"Me too, Salih. Me too. This is my only wish from fate. I've been praying for days for us to be written for each other. If you’re waiting for an answer... Yes, I want to build a family with you."

Let me know if you'd like further adjustments! 😊

Originally posted by: hypnotoad

So Bilal's a tharki when he is drunk Explains the leering at Sadaf crossing the road, Annie you're gorgeous Maybe that's why Humsha wanted him to drink in e19 because it will activate his libido What about when Bilal told Rameen there's no point for her to come as he is not drinking. Does this mean Bilal has performance issues when he is not drinking

The problem is though that Humsha isn’t an escort. She’s his employee but I guess we have to ignore that part. He’s never hit on her before but suspect that he usually isn’t that drunk when he’s around her. He’s probably with an escort.

The only time he was super drunk at work was in the first episode and he told Annie she was gorgeous. But even then he didn’t say anything to Humsha 😂

Just editing because I was just jokingly exaggerating about some things. If they showed Bilal even with an escort now, I would buy it. He wouldn’t try anything with Humsha and I don’t think he is here either. He’s lonely and depressed and is just seeking out her friendship. He just goes close to her when he’s asking about her own experience with love. He wants her perspective and not anything more in my opinion. We’ll see though

"A policeman on an undercover mission cannot even reveal his real name to the woman he loves... Meanwhile, the woman is a judge.

'Making love is a promise, Feride. I cannot promise you as Salih. Let my mission end, and if you still want me, I will love you with everything I am, until the end of my life. With my real name.'"

Originally posted by: cooldreams

I found Bilal's intoxication scene today really strange. I don’t know if the unusual portrayal was due to director's creative decision or the screenplays narrative, but I found the scene weird. What prompted BA to engage in excessive walking while heavily drunk in that scene? The whole intent of the scene was to emphasize Bilal's hopelessness and defeat. However, his actions of rising from his seat and walking around while tipsy seemed contrary to it. For me that scene would’ve made more sense, impactful & enjoyable if BA was stay put on a chair in a reclined position. I must say, Wahaj looked completely stoned in that scene and believable👏👏

I know what you’re saying about the standing up, sitting down, walking around. He was struggling to stay put. He was very fidgety. Maybe it’s representing his uneasy state of mind. He would walk over to Humsha then back to his alcohol, back to Humsha, hover over her, sit beside her, back to his alcohol, back to Humsha….