The ink of shadows-An Arshi One shot-(Historical)

I really enjoyed reading The Ink of Shadows. The way you described the attic and the emotions Payal felt while discovering the letter really pulled me into the story. I loved how the letter connected the past and present, and the twist about Arnav’s secret life as a spy was gripping. The ending, with the discovery of the box and the sketch, was so touching.

As for suggestion, I think you could add a bit more detail about Khushi and Arnav’s relationship before the war. This might help us connect more deeply with their love story. Also, the part where Payal goes to Vienna felt a little rushed. It could be nice to include more of her thoughts or challenges while following the map.

Overall, it’s a beautiful story with a lot of heart, and I really enjoyed it!

First, let me congratulate you for achieving an appreciation post from the administrator himself, who is an avid reader who always appreciates innovation in all literary forms.

As I mentioned earlier, it is a narrative of a young girl who found her grandmother's long-lost, forgotten love story, which was brief but exquisitely penned. A well written OS.

Migrate it to FF Section, we will help you in migrating views and comments consequently.

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

First, let me congratulate you for achieving an appreciation post from the administrator himself, who is an avid reader who always appreciates innovation in all literary forms.

As I mentioned earlier, it is a narrative of a young girl who found her grandmother's long-lost, forgotten love story, which was brief but exquisitely penned. A well written OS.

Migrate it to FF Section, we will help you in migrating views and comments consequently.

Let me join you in congratulating Madhu Dii

Congratsss @Hakuna_Matata11 for receiving comment from Vijay I will be back with my comment too...hopefully soon There are too many wonderful OSes to read

And and, so nice of you to take some time off your busy schedule and encourage our members, Vijay - with your comments!

Originally posted by: vijay

I really enjoyed reading The Ink of Shadows. The way you described the attic and the emotions Payal felt while discovering the letter really pulled me into the story. I loved how the letter connected the past and present, and the twist about Arnav’s secret life as a spy was gripping. The ending, with the discovery of the box and the sketch, was so touching.

As for suggestion, I think you could add a bit more detail about Khushi and Arnav’s relationship before the war. This might help us connect more deeply with their love story. Also, the part where Payal goes to Vienna felt a little rushed. It could be nice to include more of her thoughts or challenges while following the map.

Overall, it’s a beautiful story with a lot of heart, and I really enjoyed it!

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

First, let me congratulate you for achieving an appreciation post from the administrator himself, who is an avid reader who always appreciates innovation in all literary forms.

As I mentioned earlier, it is a narrative of a young girl who found her grandmother's long-lost, forgotten love story, which was brief but exquisitely penned. A well written OS.

Migrate it to FF Section, we will help you in migrating views and comments consequently.

Originally posted by: Hakuna_Matata11

Thank you so much for your kind words about my story. It truly means a lot to know it touched your heart. Your support inspires me to keep creating!I don’t know the procedure of migration.

This is just amazing 👏🏼. I

reserved

will read it soon

Hi, HM, as I assured, your OS is migrated to FF Section, along with the views and all comments.

Best wishes dear.

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