A Tale As Old As Time [COMPLETED] - Page 12

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Posted: 2 years ago

Never fear. You can not mess this up. Waiting to see what happens now and how they all make their way back.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Never fear. You can not mess this up. Waiting to see what happens now and how they all make their way back.

Thank you so much dear! smiley31

I'll be updating the next chapter shortly.

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Posted: 2 years ago

This story has been migrated to the FANFICTIONS forum...


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Posted: 2 years ago

Oh, wow, I didn't realize it's been so long since I didn't reply. I've been so busy recently that I haven't had much time for anything at all.

Anyway. This chapter had everything. And when we thought things would get better they become... worse. 😭😭 But I'm hoping they'd figure it out somehow because how could they not. I understand Ansh and his POV because after his encounter with Piya some time ago he'd want to protect himself. You make their reactions sound very natural. I wonder if Piya is going to feel hopeless and others will convince her it's a good idea to give up since her own health is at risk?

Either way, interesting times ahead, I guess. This chapter showed their love, pain, and conviction in the best way possible. It was both destructive and constructive.

Amazing chapter. ♥️♥️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Everything just got worse. Ansh is not willing to listen or come back. The allure to stay in the present world is too strong.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: HeirofSharingan

Oh, wow, I didn't realize it's been so long since I didn't reply. I've been so busy recently that I haven't had much time for anything at all.

Anyway. This chapter had everything. And when we thought things would get better they become... worse. 😭😭 But I'm hoping they'd figure it out somehow because how could they not. I understand Ansh and his POV because after his encounter with Piya some time ago he'd want to protect himself. You make their reactions sound very natural. I wonder if Piya is going to feel hopeless and others will convince her it's a good idea to give up since her own health is at risk?

Either way, interesting times ahead, I guess. This chapter showed their love, pain, and conviction in the best way possible. It was both destructive and constructive.

Amazing chapter. ♥️♥️

Thanks and no problem dear! smiley31


The fact that you still took some time out to read and leave your comment is all that matters. smiley4


I told you, Ansh would hit his rock bottom in this chapter so it was bound to be more intense. But Ansh is not only trying to protect himself. This entire catastrophe began when he started to question whether he was good enough for Piya or not. And now that he has seen her thriving without him, he doesn't want to jeopardize anything. Not to mention, the additional dilemma where his father and brother are alive.


As for Piya, it's not new for her. Even in the show, Ansh tried to distance himself from her once hoping to save her from Mohana. She's aware to which extent Ansh can go to ensure her safety. It was hurtful nonetheless, as he pointed out her greatest regrets, something for which she hasn't been able to forgive herself yet. So she's heartbroken but not entirely oblivious to his pain.


Lucky for both of them, their family members are genuinely supportive and they know what makes these two idiots happy. So neither Sharmas nor Rathods would try to create any problem, unlike our Nalayek KaMbaLa. smiley7 smiley7 smiley7 However, they won't be pleased as well considering Ansh crossed several lines this time. smiley24


The next chapter will be all about retrospection and their quest to find a solution. It'll be big but I hope you'll enjoy reading it. smiley1

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Everything just got worse. Ansh is not willing to listen or come back. The allure to stay in the present world is too strong.

Unfortunately, yes. smiley19 smiley19 smiley19

The good thing is Piya loves him too much to let him go and will fight back. smiley1

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Posted: 2 years ago

This story has been migrated to the FANFICTIONS forum...


https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/5310

Edited by Nush_Rat - 11 days ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

The words may have been spoken out of anger but they were spoken and heard. The effects will linger on long after that. Piya is now second guessing herself.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Hope this parallel dream world works. If not, don't know what they would do next.

Piya's talk with Adi was so needed. He will always have this memory.

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