SnakeAlien FF: World Domination! Pt2/Pg6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys! I've been working on this for aaaaaaaaaages. I wasn't to sure about posting this but it's going to be short anyway. Basically its an ff on our very own Snakealien, Anil Nagpal. Just wanted to say a big thanks to Shwetha and Opti!🤗 @ Yas i FINALLY posted it!

Disclaimer: This ff is not ment to hurt anyone. I hope no one takes offence. Anil Nagpal, if you're reading this then PLEASE come up with something worth while watching.

Pt 1/Pg1

Pt 2/Pg6

World Domination!

Part 1.

The ground was dusty red for miles around. Only a tall, large white palace on a lone hill surrounded by a just visible city was a blot on the landscape. The sky was a dark indigo blue highlighting the white marble. The emperor of Kraptopia stood on the balcony of his room mulling over all that had happened that day. He looked human enough except for his eyes; they were acid green with black slits that had the most frightening effect on everyone. He wore a high collar coat in midnight blue embellished with blood red embroidery. The Emperor was known for his temper. "If only people would just do as they were told!" He fumed. His empire spanned over 5 different planets in his galaxy. He was on the verge of taking over another planet but somehow his army of snake alien's had messed up on a vital attack that would have allowed him to take over easily. Now his army had been severely affected and forced to retreat. He had been in meetings all day with his advisors.

"I want to know what, how and why this happened." The emperor said, anger coursing through each word. He was already in a bad mood; it did nothing to help his state of mind when no one spoke.

"NOW!" He boomed. They all cringed.

"We...well...um, the main missile that was supposed to have been the decoy that the enemy were expecting was accidentally swapped for the real missile that was supposed to be for the eastern half of the planet. So as you can see they were ready and they destroyed it mid air. It also damaged some of our spy ships in the air that were supposed to tell us of their activities. We've lost a third of our spy ships in that area and little over a half in the south." The snake minister of military said whispering the final few words. The look of pure fury did not escape everyone around the table.

"Does anyone have anything to add to this?" he hissed.

Everyone looked down. The minister of military spoke in a timid voice, "We've also lost half our soldiers on the northern half due to the fact that it was tough to get all the soldiers there and the people there were stronger than we anticipated."

"What are the current situations for the western half?"

"The spy ships have been very good in collecting information in that region, your highness. Here is a list of their main findings that you'll find important." The minister of military said, his voice regaining its normal strength.

The talks, ranging from finance to the next strategy, continued for the rest of the day.

Meanwhile, on the outskirts of the city, the snake alien, Antral Nagz, sat at his desk pouring over the numerous files and books. Antral was a strange snake alien. He rarely ventured outside and he was really quiet from a young age. He had pale white skin and striking dark brown eyes. His face looked normal except for his nose which was flat, like he had run into a wall.

His girlfriend knocked on his door. "Can I come in?"

"Yeah, whatever." He replied not looking up from the book he was reading.

"An, what are you doing?"

He didn't reply. He was too engrossed in the book he was reading. It was on a planet called Earth.

"An, I'm leaving you."

"Yeah, goodbye." He said not looking up from his book. He hadn't been paying attention to what she was saying. This book had all the answers he needed. This was going to make him famous.

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Shabz. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 that was hillarious 😆 i love the title!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ahahahhaahhaahahahaha.🤣 🤣 ..on Mr. Snakeman...gotta read this.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh Bhav 👏 👏 ....A ff on our very own Nagpalji!!! Damn that man is as famous as michi!!! LOL] 😆
U have written it very well and I found it so hilarious, his girlfriend is leaving him and he is thinking about getting famous. 😆 So he is coming to planet earth??
Loved his flat nose too!!! 😆
Continue sweetie...I had a blast reading it!!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆

Bhav...a FF for Nagpal...god that guy is famous....I think its the first time I ever see a FF on the writter....hope he reads it

Continue soon hun...can;t stop laughing
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Posted: 17 years ago
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BHAV!!! Grr you didn't even tell me about it...I'm gonna kill you!!! I'm so excited!! whooo hooo 😆

Go bhavvvvvvvvvvvvvv!!!! 😃

**SNAKE ALIEN!!!!!😆...Who would touch him...LOL...bechari girlfriend...😆😆😆

That was fun reading hun...I wanna know what you'll do with him next...😉 Chop his head off....

THANK YOU Bhav *muah*

Edited by zcbcc34 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 ...Loved it..! It was hillarious...!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This is so freaky, I had just written a 'World Domination' line in my FF when I saw this post. I was talking about soccer and Man Utd and you being the Arsenal fan should understand. 😆 But back to your FF, absolutely hilarious. 😆 So is the emperor Voldemort to Antral Nagz's Harry Potter ? 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heehahahahha 😆 🤣
okay that was funny... world domination... hahaa! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh!!! Lord...Bhagv!!! you have actually made the guy famous!!!! 😆

An FF dedicated to him! 😆

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