SnakeAlien FF: World Domination! Pt2/Pg6 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
A Najpal Ji FF 😆

I am loving this hun

Do cont
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anushka

A Najpal Ji FF 😆

I am loving this hun

Do cont

Thanks Anushka! Part 2's coming up.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2.

Antral lived in a small house on the outskirts of the city. He lived on the end of a small lane with big houses. It was an odd house compared its neighbours. For instance, it had no front or back garden, not that Antral cared. He was always inside. His house only had a few small rooms and everywhere you went it was filled with a multitude of books in every size.

It was late into the night and Antral was still at his desk, pouring over the same book. It had taken him years to acquire this particular book. He hoped the emperor would appreciate his efforts. The room was in half dark, the only light came from a small lamp on his desk. Various bits of papers and drawings littered his desk. A shiny black folder with all his notes and diagrams sat open. Antral was busy annotating his last diagram of the Earth. When he was done, he closed the folder carefully and put it away in his draw and locked it. He put the key safely in his pocket and went up to bed with a big grin on his face.

The next morning, Antral woke up very early in the morning and wore his best suit. It was a mouldy brown colour and he wore a dissimilar blue and white spotted tie. He took his shiny black folder and the book of Earth out of his draw and put it into his briefcase. He got the taxi to the emperor's palace and was met by the tall front guards.

"I have business with the emperor." Antral said, looking up, as authoritatively as possible but his voice wavered for a second. The guards just smiled.

"Of course you do sir, so does everyone else in his empire. Unless you have a signed slip by any of the ministers we can't let you through." Said the first guard.

"Well can I see the ministers then?" He was met by silence. "Fat lot of good you are!" muttered Antral and stalked off. For the rest of the day he hung around the palace and tried to get a slip by at least one minister. However that proved to be impossible as they were all busy and told him they weren't interested in anything he had to say. The day was a complete waste so a dejected Antral made his way back home, stopping at a near by shop to get some food. He hoped he would have better luck tomorrow.

The next day, wearing the same horrible suit but with a striped green and red tie, he headed back to the palace. Again he tried to talk to the ministers but again they all told him they were busy or not interested. By midday, Antral was frustrated and decided to go on a tour of the palace. Maybe he would meet the emperor on the tour. With this new found hope, he head in search of the north entrance of the palace where the tour started. He joined the large group of tourists that had accumulated.

The tour was very interesting. The tour guide talked about the foundations and history of the palace as well as interesting facts about the previous emperors and empresses. The tour was half way through when they spotted the emperor coming out of a meeting. Everyone stared with curiosity. Antral's face lit up with a big smile. He knew he would be stopped if he approached the emperor right now. Instead as everyone moved on to the next part of the tour, he quietly snuck himself behind a large red curtain that fell down to the floor. As soon as the coast was clear, he carefully crept out of his hiding place and went in search of the emperor. He decided to look in the emperor's study first. As he set off, he was careful not to make much noise. From time to time he had to hide to avoid the guards. A while after looking for the study, Antral spotted a large oak door guarded by two big guards. He was sure this was where the emperor must be. He hid behind a corner and waited for the emperor to come out.

"What do you think your doing?" Shouted someone behind him.

Antral jumped. The guards looked in his direction and one came over to investigate. Antral was in a fix. How was he going to see the emperor now? It was one of the minsters that spoke. He had just come out of his study to go to the library when he saw Antral supposedly hiding.

"Do we have a problem minister?" asked the guard.

"This snake alien was hiding around the corner. What do you have to say for yourself?"

Antral didn't know what to say, his voice was stuck. He wanted to tell them that he needed to see the emperor but he couldn't get the words out.

"Take him out of here." Ordered the minister. The guard grabbed Antral's arm and began pulling him away.

"Wait, no! I need to see the emperor, its important!" said Antral finally finding his voice. The guard stopped pulling him.

"How did you get in?" asked the minister.

"I sneaked in half way through the tour." Said Antral. This was the wrong thing to say however.

"Throw him out of here." He ordered the guard and then to Antral, "You are banned from the palace. Never come back!"

Antral was thrown out of the palace. He walked back home feeling worse that yesterday. As he walked up his street, something got stuck on his foot. It was a flyer of the emperor's parade in town tomorrow. A sudden idea struck Antral. He was banned from the palace but not from the parade. This would be his way to see the emperor.

Antral had hardly slept; he was busy planning his way to see the emperor. He would be better prepared this time. He was dressed in his only casual clothes bought by his girlfriend. He wore dark blue jeans with a printed t-shirt. He would be sure to blend in with the crowd. He took out his bag and placed the folder inside. He wouldn't take the book, it was much too risky.

When Antral arrived, the streets were already filling up. He came early to find a good way to see and get the emperor's attention but apparently so many others had the same idea. Antral headed towards the main street where the parade would start. He looked around and spotted a white tent in the distance. Everyone around was too busy and excited to notice it but Antral had. He headed towards it keeping a careful watch the closer he got. As he neared the tent, he spotted the emperor walking into the dressing room and told the guards he would be fine and stop badgering him. Seeing the guards walking away muttering, Antral made his way in to the tent.

The inside looked like the palace and for a second, Antral thought he was. He spotted the Emperor looking over a few files that were on his desk. Antral cleared his throat and said "Excuse me emperor." The emperor looked round quickly and his eyes fell on Antral standing close by.

"GUARDS!!!" roared the emperor.

"Sir, please! I need to talk to you. It's really important. It's about Earth!" said Antral hurriedly just as the guards came rushing inside.

"Wait!" the emperor said to the guards. "Wait outside and don't let anyone in until I say so." Once the guards had gone, he spoke again. "How do you know about Earth?"

So Antral told him everything he knew including his plan as he knew things that the current war was far from being won.

"Hmmm... this interesting news. I need time to think this through. Wait here until the parade is over and then we will see. With that the emperor left.

A few hours later, the emperor returned to see Antral still in the tent. Come with me Antral Nagz. Antral was in awe. He was sitting next to the emperor in his carriage! They made their way to the palace and into the emperor's study to discuss Antral's plan in detail.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
Hawww wonder whats gona happen next 😆

I love that line "fat lot of good you are" 🤣 thats a typical British line 😆

Update soon 😛 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ur story is so interesting to read Bhav! 👏 👏
i can imagine it so well!
ders not much speech in ur ff bt i love the way u write about nagpal oops antral nagz! 😆
its a hilarious story and im very curious to know what happens next! 😛 😛

Update sooon!!!!!!!!!!! 😉


Edited by fahimataq - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
I'll say it again hun

I am loving this... I love this FF

Nagpal you are so famous 😆

Enjoyed this update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *VaVaVoom14*

Hawww wonder whats gona happen next 😆

I love that line "fat lot of good you are" 🤣 thats a typical British line 😆 I love it too!

Update soon 😛 😆

Thanks Anshu!

Originally posted by: fahimataq

ur story is so interesting to read Bhav! 👏 👏
i can imagine it so well! Thanks!
ders not much speech in ur ff bt i love the way u write about nagpal oops antral nagz! 😆 I can't really imagine him talking to himself... Actually yeah, i can 😆
its a hilarious story and im very curious to know what happens next! 😛 😛

Update sooon!!!!!!!!!!! 😉 It'll have to be in a few weeks, sorry!

Originally posted by: Anushka

I'll say it again hun

I am loving this... I love this FF
Nagpal you are so famous 😆

Enjoyed this update

Thanks hun!


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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
Oh my god! Bhav...gosh, I totally didn't see this update!!! 👏 I love you for writing this...I'm in hysterics everytime I see the title!! 😆

Thanks for the update hun 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
😆 this ff is too funny...i love it 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
🤣 bhav....Wow!!! 👏 👏 So, what is our Snakealien going to do now! 😆

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