tellyme's MG World of Dreamzz -Rule Breakers #5, Nov 21, Post# 827 - Page 78

Originally posted by: taahir004

It would be great to read something

where both Maan and Geet are very poor

hard working yet society does not give both a chance

Not going to type anytime soon but it will be with a major major twist..

Originally posted by: tellyme

I got a plot for this one..

Not going to type anytime soon but it will be with a major major twist..

I'll be truly so appreciative and yes not at the moment

but whenever one FF finishes off

Hi Anu

thank you so much for always updating all your stories

appreciate your time and effort

Anu ji, Plan to read Maneet FF's you wrote on my vacation! Bhar bhar ke you will get my comments next month lol.

Originally posted by: Anusha16

Anu ji, Plan to read Maneet FF's you wrote on my vacation! Bhar bhar ke you will get my comments next month lol.

Will eagerly eagerly wait ...

Hi Anu

grateful for the updates

Hello Anu

trust that you are well

Okay... Read your OS: Hold on to me, could not comment there so doing it here.

So beautiful

I love the struggles Geet had separating from Maan, her fears and insecurities, her wishes.... were such a mirror of Maan's own. Her journey as a single mother was all but told in the vision of a small room for Maan. No Grandiose outbursts, no reproach or arguments. Nothing.

Sirf Ek Nazar kaafi tha. Bas Sirf Ek Nazar.

Just like how Maan asserted his authority in Geet with just one simple sentence and a name.

"Open the door. I am tired, Geet."

The best of our relationship never suffers the chasm of time... they remain so standstill as if those years of separation were just a mirage! Such is true for Maneet. Six years and one kid later, wo dono wahi the Jahan wo pehle the.

And nothing to say about his Sister. Reminds me of the Boses. Enough said about that.

We should all Hold on to this OS for sure lol.

PS: Is Advay the real name of their kid?

As I promised, you will get bhar bhar ke comments from me for your FFs. Will comment them here when I cannot do in that thread itself. Hope you don't mind!

I also commented on your other OS. Please do take a look at that. You are such a lovely writer. Always a pleasure to read your work!

Originally posted by: Anusha16

Okay... Read your OS: Hold on to me, could not comment there so doing it here.

So beautiful

I love the struggles Geet had separating from Maan, her fears and insecurities, her wishes.... were such a mirror of Maan's own. Her journey as a single mother was all but told in the vision of a small room for Maan. No Grandiose outbursts, no reproach or arguments. Nothing.

Sirf Ek Nazar kaafi tha. Bas Sirf Ek Nazar.

Just like how Maan asserted his authority in Geet with just one simple sentence and a name.

"Open the door. I am tired, Geet."

The best of our relationship never suffers the chasm of time... they remain so standstill as if those years of separation were just a mirage! Such is true for Maneet. Six years and one kid later, wo dono wahi the Jahan wo pehle the.

And nothing to say about his Sister. Reminds me of the Boses. Enough said about that.

We should all Hold on to this OS for sure lol.

PS: Is Advay the real name of their kid?

As I promised, you will get bhar bhar ke comments from me for your FFs. Will comment them here when I cannot do in that thread itself. Hope you don't mind!

I also commented on your other OS. Please do take a look at that. You are such a lovely writer. Always a pleasure to read your work!

You can comment anywhere on my any thread I won't mind at all. Getting feedback from a wonderful writer like you is a pleasure to read.

No, Advay is my chosen name .

Originally posted by: tellyme

Hwww... you are making me so happy Anusha. Such wonderful comments 🤗🤗

You can comment anywhere on my any thread I won't mind at all. Getting feedback from a wonderful writer like you is a pleasure to read.

No, Advay is my chosen name .

ooh, Advay is a good name. Any special reason for it???

Thank you, will comment as and when possible. I am flattered you think I am a wonderful writer lol!

You write so well; you deserve the people who adore your stories.

It's always easy to consume, but so difficult to create! So, I have immense admiration and respect for those people who do it and do it consistently. Same goes to you!