FF: Jeevan Saathi (Ending) Pg 56

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey you guys!!!!!!.......... I know probably none of u guys know me.. as i dont really post too much in KIT but i come on this Forum everyday!!!..........and i mostly do my FFs on other forums... but i will try to do a Ranbir/Kanya FF!!! I have written over 50 FFs for IF..... but this is my 1st for KIT!! hope you guys like it.....

One thing is i always write drama.... so bear with me plz!!!!!!


Characters will come.... along... and u guys will know who is who!! the only difference is that..... no damn chunnu!!😡😡.... and Ranbir is crippled!!!!!!!!............... thats the only difference!!!!!........

And for this who read my Kasam Se FFs...... this isnt one of them!!!!!😉

Part 1

Ranbir wakes up everyday.... and goes to Nanda Group of Industries

He's a little on the grumpy side

Yes he does have problems with his leg

He needs a crutch

He thinks he can handle it all!!!

Malika is always telling Ranbir to get married

But he says no

He doesnt want to get married

There is no girl in this world that would want to marry someone like him who has a disability!!!

Malika: Dont say that Munna!!!!!!

Ranbir: Ma... dont ever talk about me getting married!! Please!! And please why do u call me Munna???

Malika: becuz I always do!

Ranbir: ruins the image!!!!!!

Malika: No it doesn't!!!!!!

He goes to work!!!!!

Ranbir is in his car

He has stopped @ a red light....

There is car next to him...

He looks over...

There is a girl sitting in the car next to his

He looks at her

He finds her attractive!!!

But then he just stops thinking about it...

He sees all these girls.. but then doesnt do anything about it!!!

No one wants to marry a guy like him!!!

So he stops w/ girls!!!!

He arrives at work

Same old things!! Nothing new!!!

When he comes home...

Malika tells him that there is a girl that she has picked out

Ranbir gets furious and tells him that he can take care of himself.. and he doesnt need no one!!!

Malika: Munna

Ranbir; No ma!!! I am not weak!!!! I can take care of myself!!!! So please just stop!!!!

Ranbir leaves the house

He doesnt want to be there....

The girls family arrive

Malika says that he just left

Girl is none other than Kanya herself!!!

Malika likes her...

Pammi is there

She sees a family picture...

She sees Ranbir

She smiles

Then she sees a crutch

She is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!

They talk

Pammi cant stop thinking about the crutch!!!

Pammi asks Malika

Malika tells her

Pammi is shocked!!!

Kanya just listens

Afterwards they leave

Pammi tells Kanya that this wont work

Kanya: Why?

Pammi: Becuz he is crippled!!!

Kanya: So?

Pammi: No... u will not marry someone like him!!!!! We will find some other guy!!!

Kanya is like okay!

Pammi and Kanya etc… all arrive back home

Shanaya asks them what happened?

Pammi says that she (Pammi) didn't like him!!!

And she tells her why

Shanaya is shocked and sad

Kanya notices something isn't right!!!

Shanaya goes into her room

She is thinking

Kanya comes in

Kanya; Shanaya whats wrong?

Shanaya: Nothing!

Kanya; Something is wrong!!!!

Shanaya: No really!!

Kanya: You are going to lie to ur sister!!! Please tell me!!

Shanaya: You see…. Um…

Kanya; Yes please tell me!!

Shanaya tells Kanya that She loves Aayan…. And the only they way they can get married if gets married 1st

She tells her that unless Ranbir gets married Aayan wont get married!!

Kanya is shocked!!!!

Kanya thinks and she says that then for her happiness she will marry Ranbir!!

Shanaya tells her no!!!

She explains about Ranbir and how he's rude and what not

Kanya is shocked!!!

Then Kanya decides to meet Ranbir!!!

Shanaya tells Kanya not to see Ranbir!!

Kanya; But why?

Shanaya: Ranbir..the the type of guy you would think he is!!!…

Kanya; But..

Shanaya: No!!!

Kanya; Well does he know about you two??

Shanaya: Yes!! Aayan told him!!!

Kanya; And what did he say??

Shanaya: He doesn't care… but he wont get married!!!

Kanya: Please just let me talk to him once!!

Shanaya: But Di..

Kanya; No but Di!!!! Let me handle it!!!!

Kanya leaves!!!!

She goes to Nanda Group of Industries!!!

The secretary in the office calls up Ranbir saying there is some lady by the name of Kanya to see him

Ranbir: Kanya/? Who is she???

Sec: I don't know!!

Ranbir; Send her in!!

Kanya is walking

She is sort of nervous meeting Ranbir for the 1st time!!

Kanya knocks on the door

She opens it

Kanya: Excuse me…

Ranbir looks up

They both are looking at each other eye to eye

Kanya is scared

Ranbir is thinking who is she??

Ranbir: Yes… can I help you??

Kanya; I am …uh… (Stutters).. I am Shanaya's sister…. Kanya…

Ranbir: What do u need?

Kanya explains the situation to him…..

Ranbir: Look I don't care what they do.. if they get married great…but I wont!!

Kanya; Why not?

Ranbir: Becuz!! I don't want to!!!

Ranbir stands up

Kanya sees him walking

He cant even walk properly

She is sad by that

Kanya; But??

Ranbir: Listen please don't waste my time!!! Just leave!!!

Kanya; But….

Ranbir: Just leave!!!

Kanya is sad and she leaves!!

Shanaya calls up Kanya…

Kanya says he didn't listen

Shanaya says that she at Nanda house

Kanya comes there

She sees Malika again

Malika smiles at seeing her

Kanya says she tried but nothing!!!

Aayan looks at Kanya…

He is thinking that she could be just right for Ranbir!!

He tells her that

Kanya is like no way!!

Aayan tells Malika that what if she talks to Ranbir about Kanya.. then maybe we have a double wedding!!!

Shanaya likes the idea!!

Malika says she wont force Kanya to marry Ranbir!!

But Kanya thinks

Becuz then Shanaya wont be happy!!!

And now she knows how RANBIR is

But she will sarifice her happiness for Shanaya's sake!!!

She tells Shanaya that

Shanaya says no

But Kanya says she can do anything for her!!

Shanaya is touched

Malika is blessed!!!

Aayan is happy!!!!

Kanya tells Pammi

Pammi says no!!

Kanya convinces her!!

Pammi is still mad!!!

But agrees

But she aint gonna be happy about it!!

Now the problem is how to tell Ranbir!!!!!!


plz comment!😳 (Good or bad) and even if i should bother to continue it!!! really!! plz do tell me!!!!!




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jnawaz thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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me 😃

haye...plus for now chunnu the munnu 👍🏼...but haila...ranbir ko crippled bana diya 😭😭😭 and he seems like a khadoos...aab aayega maza...dono behne dono bhaiyoon ke saath 😆😆😆...me waiting...mera poptart!

JAZ
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was awesome ....... this is a bit different w/ ranbir as a crippled.. great job ⭐️
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: dilkeroshni

that was awesome ....... this is a bit different w/ ranbir as a crippled.. great job ⭐️



beautiful!!!!!!!
continue pliz.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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guli didi please continue soon.it was nice.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wooop woop! it sounds excellent so far please continue sooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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good one do continue i loved it😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great FF. i think it will be really interesting how they fall in love
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i don't like the word crippled, but the story is nice. Preferred term is handicapped.😃 Great Story, continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Original idea and Awesome update
I love it
Soooooooooo shanaya and ayaan love each other and ranbir is a grouch sounds fun
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooooooon

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