FF: Jeevan Saathi (Ending) Pg 56 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3


Next Morning:

1st day of married life!

Kanya is up

She has made breakfast

She is doing Aarti

Malika comes out

She sees Kanya's praying

Shanaya is up too

She sits next to Kanya

Malika sees her two bahu's and is smiling

They both get up

They see Malika

They take her blessing

Malika: Let me make breakfast!

Kanya; No need to!!

Malika: Why?

Kanya; Its done!!!

Malika: What?

Kanya: Yes!!!

Malika is impressed!!!

Malika: Arre go and wake those two sleepy heads!!!

They smile

Ranbir is awake

He streches and knocks down his cane

He tries to get it.. but cant reach it

And he hurt his legs

Kanya sees and helps him and gets his cane

Ranbir looks at her

She looks at him

She puts it back and doesn't say anything

Kanya: Mummyji is calling u!!

Ranbir sits up

He gets up and takes his shower

Kanya just looks on

He's in the shower

So she takes out his clothes and leaves

Ranbir comes out

And sees that she already took out his clothes

No reaction!!

He is thinking why is she doing this?

And what does she want?

Aayan and Ranbir come out

They eat

Ranbir goes to work

Kanya doesn't say anything

Aayan is asking for Shanaya where does she want to go for their honeymoon

She doesn't know

Shanaya: Di where are you going??

Kanya; Oh no.. I am not going!!!

Shanaya: Why?

Kanya: I am scared to fly!!!

Shanaya: But..

Kanya tells her to stay quiet

Aayan: Are you kidding me Bhabhi?

Kanya: No I am not!!!

Ranbir forgot his phone

So he is there!!

Aayan leaves

Shanaya: Di why did you tell Aayan that ur scared to fly!!

Kanya; Becuz.. we aren't going on an honeymoon!!

Shanaya: But…

Kanya; Listen.. until Ranbir doesn't accept me. We wont go anywhere!!!!!

Shanaya: But..

Kanya; Listen don't say anything!! Just play along that I am scared to fly!!!!! And plus once Ranbir accepts me as his wife… we will be on our honeymoon everyday right???

Shanaya: I guess so!!

Kanya: Cheer up!!!!

Shanaya smiles!!

Ranbir just heard everything!!!

He comes back in pretending he didn't hear anything



plz comment!😳

Edited by *Guli* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
hey guli.. i am soo ahppy i know what is guli style of writign whcih rocks..

pls cont6inue sooon...yahan bhi teri munna nahi chota tumse 😆

davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
hey it was an awesome update..cont soon 😊
Seebz thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
hey it was amazing update 👏 👏 .........cont soon..... 😊
Edited by Seebz - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
it was short but great
continue soon
sweet cherry thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
great update plzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!!!!! 😛
KC294 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
that was a great update
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
oohh great part

continue sooooooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
wow, great story line. pls continue sooon. really can't wawit for their 1stinteactin as husbandn wife
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
Hahahah!! plees let him be u knw, naughty 😳 with her!!!

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