General Discussion Thread #5 - Page 108

Originally posted by: FlauntPessimism

I actually had thought that this will agitate a few.

Also isn't moral policing against the rules of IF

Originally posted by: Saumya2102

Wow. This is a beautiful poetry. And I love how it fits the show as well as the real world scenario perfectly capturing the emotions and challenges of different kinds of people in this world. Some are greedy for money, others are lonely in search of love.

Even the sach and jhooth part is aptly describing how people these days will live in wishful thinking and daydreams instead of accepting the reality at hand.

And then the last two lines are portraying how people are always running behind one goal after another, never satisfied.

It's beautiful. You are very talented in this. Write more naa

Originally posted by: Saumya2102

This is beautiful. I never thought it was possible to summarise the heart and soul of Gita in a few verses. But you've done it so well! Personally, I have read Shri Bhagavad Gita twice as of now. Just like DB, I also look for my life's answers there. I won't say I remember it word for word, but I try to incorporate the philosophies in my life.

And your poem is the crux of Gita. I like the emphasis on the fundamentals of the life cycle and seeing the divine in everything. Plus, realising that it is not I who is the doer, rather I is just the medium is so important in today's world, and you've put that out in every line very well.

I love everything about this poem. Include me in your fan club. I really enjoy reading Hindi poetry and I am fond of everything related to Shri Bhagavad Gita.

https://youtu.be/lBnNp6izRiw?si=NS2m7cc0gev0T45J

Originally posted by: Moonks

I was heavily influenced by another poet while writing this, will share the link of his poetry which inspired me to write in the first place

https://youtu.be/lBnNp6izRiw?si=NS2m7cc0gev0T45J

Thank you for sharing this!

Originally posted by: Saumya2102

Thank you for sharing this!

Originally posted by: Moonks

Varshon ke sangharsh ka yeh parinaam hai,

Hatt gaya tirpaal aur aa rahe Shri Ram hai,

Treta ke baad pura hua ab kaliyug ka bhi vanvaas hai,

Jeet Raha Joh Aaj woh hum sab ka vishwas hai,

Yeh Swagat toh hai Ayodhya ke Raja ka,

Ayodhya mein swagat hai Bharat ke Raja ka!!

Wrote something for the occasion

Wow

Originally posted by: Moonks

Anyways I don't like fictional stories around our epics.

Originally posted by: FlauntPessimism

I actually had thought that this will agitate a few.

Also isn't moral policing against the rules of IF

Originally posted by: BeingBlunt

LOL.Not a writer at all.

Anyways I don't like fictional stories around our epics.

Please watch this movie. It's so freaking awesome.

https://youtu.be/MKqJBhOgapM?si=J87HcHlp-01dv8DA

Tag others. Network errors for me.