A Tale As Old As Time [COMPLETED] - Page 7

This chapter was all about Ansh, his conflict, and most importantly his resolve to stick by Piya's side. But now he isn't sure what's going on and what world he's trapped in because it's all so real and unreal at the same time. He's realized in no universe is he going to let Piya go away, but is it too late? Plus, from his perspective she's getting engaged, so it's even harder for him. I want to see the relief on his face when he learns Piya isn't going to leave him even now. That would be amazing ♥️♥️

Also. That foolish little brother. Was that intentional? I chuckled at that. 😂😂

Please update the next chapter soon. ♥️♥️

Originally posted by: HeirofSharingan

This chapter was all about Ansh, his conflict, and most importantly his resolve to stick by Piya's side. But now he isn't sure what's going on and what world he's trapped in because it's all so real and unreal at the same time. He's realized in no universe is he going to let Piya go away, but is it too late? Plus, from his perspective she's getting engaged, so it's even harder for him. I want to see the relief on his face when he learns Piya isn't going to leave him even now. That would be amazing ♥️♥️

Also. That foolish little brother. Was that intentional? I chuckled at that. 😂😂

Please update the next chapter soon. ♥️♥️

Hello! Long time... 🙈 🙈 🙈

First of all, I'd like to apologize if the pace of the story seems a bit slow. However, here the conflict is internal so I am trying focus on each of them in different chapters.

You got one thing about Ansh right - his resolve to stick by Piya.

However, there's more to it. Going by the show's depiction, Piya loved Ansh as much as he loved her. On a couple of occasions even when he tried to push her away, she never left his side, except for the stupid leap when Ansh crossed the line by insulting Divya and Piya genuinely felt she had become a threat to everyone.

Somewhere deep down Ansh always had the assurance that no matter what happened, Piya would always be there for him and together they would solve all the problems.

But now that faith has been shaken. In his world, their argument led to both of their heartbreaks and in this world, she's quite happy with her perfect life. For the first time, Ansh is seeing how a life without Piya can be and it's breaking his confidence slowly. He could fight the world with Piya. However, he is lost without her. He is still the most powerful magical entity in the world. But as you can see, he's falling weak with each passing moment. In such a state, anyone can manipulate him and that can lead to catastrophe.

Let's just say, I'm giving you this heads up for what is about to come. 😉 😉 😉

About "Foolish Little Brother", now that you've pointed it out, even I'm laughing. 🤣 🤣 🤣 But no, it wasn't really intentional. Rishi in fact was a bit idiotic compared to Neha and Kajal. However, he was a really good guy and loved Ansh dearly. In fact, before Piya, Ansh's siblings were his strongest support system. So it just came out casually. But of course, having watched Itachi-Sasuke's interaction so many times, I guess I ended up writing the same without even noticing. 🤭 🤭 🤭

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Wow they are all in a different universe. Can’t wait to see how they are going to fix this. Are they losing their powers?

Originally posted by: hatelove2012

Wow they are all in a different universe. Can’t wait to see how they are going to fix this. Are they losing their powers?

Hello!

I'm really glad that you liked my story.

About their powers, they are not losing it. But they are stuck in a parallel world that was created by Ansh's wishes. And one of his wishes was for a normal family where they wouldn't have to worry about their kids' safety constantly. Now that Piya has created a link between the two worlds, naturally, it's taken a toll on her physically. You'll get a clear explanation about that in the next chapter.

Until then, stay safe and keep reading...

Ansh is watching things unfold and not able to do anything about it. The most helpless feeling in the world.

Originally posted by: coderlady

Ansh is watching things unfold and not able to do anything about it. The most helpless feeling in the world.

Yes... Which is why he's losing hope and going through a downward spiral.

This new world as unreal and dangerous as it is, has its own charms. And like a haunted house it's inviting its preys to settle in it, offering them what they lost in their real world. The most worrisome thing is that Piya is not immune to it either. The moments between Piya and Divya were sweet and heartwarming, but they're doing to her what she shouldn't feel. She came here to get Ansh back, but still, she's a human after all too. This chapter just proved there are going to be more than one obstacles for her, because it's not just about setting the things right and getting the technicalities correct, but also keeping the full control over her emotions, which is going to prove even harder as she spends more time. Clearly, they'll be spending more time here than they earlier imagined, i believe.

And then ending? Girl, what are you planning to do? You can't leave it at just that and then disappear like that. 😭

Originally posted by: HeirofSharingan

This new world as unreal and dangerous as it is, has its own charms. And like a haunted house it's inviting its preys to settle in it, offering them what they lost in their real world. The most worrisome thing is that Piya is not immune to it either. The moments between Piya and Divya were sweet and heartwarming, but they're doing to her what she shouldn't feel. She came here to get Ansh back, but still, she's a human after all too. This chapter just proved there are going to be more than one obstacles for her, because it's not just about setting the things right and getting the technicalities correct, but also keeping the full control over her emotions, which is going to prove even harder as she spends more time. Clearly, they'll be spending more time here than they earlier imagined, i believe.

And then ending? Girl, what are you planning to do? You can't leave it at just that and then disappear like that. 😭

Damn right you are!

As I said in my last reply, each one of them has unresolved issues, and coming face to face with their deceased loved ones will only intensify those emotions. However, it won't be about their heartbreak only. Eventually, they'll get their closure and cherish the second chance they got here.

About the ending, they modified an already complex spell and connected two worlds. So obviously it'll have side-effects. Why it is happening and how can they overcome it - you'll get all your answers in the upcoming chapters.

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