Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai August 5, 2025 Episode Discussion Thread
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Part 4
Mere bachpan ke har hisse mein
Tujhse ladayi ke kisse hain...
Kuch kahi si baaten hain,
Kuch ankahe se sapne hain.
Jab se jaana hai duniya ko,
Tab se tujh ko bhi jaana hai,
Tu ghairon mein nahin,
mere apno mein aati hai,
Kyunki mere apne to bahut pehle se,
Dil se tere apne hain...
Tujhse lad kar jhagad kar,
Teri har baat sun kar,
Apni har baat suna kar,
Maine ye jaana hai,
Teri qismat ki dor to kabse,
Meri qismat se uljhi hai.
Tera hona aur na hona,
Mere liye zaroori hai bahut,
Kyunki meri duniya to har pal,
Teri ird gird hi ghoomti hai...
Pyaar to nahin hai tujhse,
Dosti to door ki baat hai,
Nafrat bhi nahin karta hoon tujhse,
Fir bhi mere zindagi mein,
Teri kitni zaroorat hai...
Haan itna jaanta hoon,
Ki jo darmiyaan hai humare,
Woh kabhi kam to tha hi nahin,
Ki rishta hi humara ek alag si shiddat hai...
Tere aansuon par haq hai mera,
Koi aur rulakar dikhaye to tujhe,
Mere alawa jisne rulaya hai,
Mujhe har us shakhs se dikkat hai...
Tu masoom si dil mein utar jati hai,
Teri har ada mera dil lubhati hai,
Jab se tera naam juda hai mujhse,
Main tere hisse aur tu mere hisse aati hai,
Khushiyan tere dehleez karke,
Khud khasare mein raha hoon main,
Tere laayaq hoon to nahin,
Par kya karun fir bhi tera hoon mein.
Ek andheri si raat hoon mein,
Jis mein sab kuch samaya hai,
Tu suraj hai damakta sa,
Roshni sa tera saaya hai...
Kya rishta hai ye,
Ki teri har khushi mein maine,
Apne gham ko dubaya hai,
Aur tere gham ne jab tujhe aan ghera,
Meri khushiyan bhi maine tere naam likhwaya hai,
Mere bachpan ke har hisse mein,
Tujhse ladayi ke kisse hain,
Teri hansi ki goonj,
Aur mere gusse ke charche hain...
Raavi's breath hitched. She felt her throat constrict and her eyes began to become tearful. Shiva had handed over his heart to her, to read. She never knew he could do poetry. She smiled at the words and began to read.
'Main nahin jaanta ki kya hua uss chipkali ko achanak. Acchi bhali zindagi kat rahi thi aur usne is zindagi ko hi badal ke rakh diya hai. Pehle kehti thi ki Dev se pyaar krti hai. Aur mujhe bhala hi kitni hi chid ho usse, pan yeh baat to normal thi humare liye aur ab achanak use mujhse pyaar ho gaya hai, aur us chipkali ki badi badi aankhen jab mujhe aise dekhti hain na, to mujhe ajeeb sa lagta hai. Lagta hai ki mere dil mein kuch ho raha hai. Pan mujhe samajh hi nahin ki kya ho raha hai.'
Raavi gulped. His feelings were very straightforward like him. This was the beginning of his diary, but she was sure the feelings had begun already. They must have confused him enough to push him to write. He must have felt like he couldn't confide about this to anyone. She began to read again.
•
Shiva laid on his cot, thinking about the woman upstairs owning his space like she owned his heart and smiled serenely. Why was he feeling to see her settle in his room for the night? Her being in his room was nothing new. After all she washed and folded all his clothes. She placed them in his cupboard. She cleaned his room. She even used his room for studying. He was sure that his room had many of her things arranged near his for her ease because she spent so much time in there. Yet the simple action of watching her claim his bed, made him feel all peaceful.
Shiva's mind began to reflect on the years gone by. His memories were traversing before his eyes like a movie he was watching. How had their relationship been shaped? The first time he saw her was when she was five. He was seven.
His father gently steered him towards his Maama's house along with his brothers and mother. Jagat had called them urgently. When they reached his house, they could see his Maama and Maami along with a young girl wearing a pink frock. Her hair was combed neatly and a red butterfly pin held her hair away from her face. His maami was hugging the girl while she sobbed softly and caressed the girl's head. The moment Maami saw his Maa, she cried more and held his mother's hands.
"Yeh dekhiye na Suman ben! Meri Ujwala chali gayi. Kal tak to acchi bhali thi. Mujhse phone par baat kiya tha! Sab theek tha. Aaj subeh khabar aayi ki Ujwala aur Uday bhaisaab dono chal base. Raavi school mein thi. Woh market ke liye auto par chale gaye the. Raste mein hi kisi ne car se unka auto thok diya. Wahi par unki maut ho gayi. Ek pal bhi nahin laga!" Maami kept crying. Suman was consoling her softly.
Jagat and his father were talking too but mostly they just looked at Maami and the girl. When he and his brothers turned their attention towards the girl, Jagat called the child towards him. She came to him shyly. Her eyes remained teary and upset.
"Yeh Raavi hai bacchon. Tumhari Maami ki behen ki beti. Yeh ab humari apni hai!" Jagat introduced them. Gautam took her hands and made her sit beside him.
"Main Gautam hoon. Par tum mujhe Gaumbhi bula sakti ho. Mere bhai bhi mujhe yahi bulate hain." He told her gently. "Yeh Krish, yeh Dev aur yeh Shiva." Gautam told her. She nodded softly as she watched them all with unsure eyes. She had just lost her parents. This was a major change. Everything felt like it would suffocate her. But this was her world now. She gulped.
"Chal!" Shiva decided something and held her hand. She was shocked and turned towards maami in question.
"Ja beta! Shiva apna hi hai." Maami told her as she cried. Suman patted her hands. Raavi nodded and walked out with him. Dev and Krish followed him along with Gautam, to keep an eye out for them.
Shiva led her to the Pandya store and greeted Kaka before, offering her a stool. Raavi sat on the stool daintily and watched Shiva as he took some chocolates from the jar and walked back to her, placing the chocolates in her hands. She watched him.
"Yeh tere liye hai. Tu akeli nahin hai! Hum sab hai na tere saath. Mil kar sab theek kar denge. Aur jab bhi tu chahe tab tu aakar yahan se chocolate le sakti hai. Tu ghairon mein nahin, mere apnon mein aati hai na?" He asked her innocently. She nodded tearfully and began to cry softly as she tried to open the chocolate. Shiva wiped her tears and opened the chocolate for her before feeding her the first piece. She swallowed it and watched him as he smiled at her. She smiled back.
Suman and Prafulla's relationship had never been too great but in that instance Suman and Prafulla had been unified in their grief. Maami had never been rude to the kids though and he never understood why his mother didn't like Maami, but later he had.
•
Raavi turned another page and touched it reverently. These were his feelings for her and they were very precious to her. From the past three pages she had turned, she had read about how much she was irritating him with her constant attentions and smiles. She chuckled softly reminiscing about the incidents he had mentioned here.
Raavi had washed her face in haste and after called out to her Maasi that she was leaving, she hastily ran out of the door before Maasi could stop her. She had arrived at Pandya store and then went straight to the kitchen, where she sat with Dhara and talked with her.
"Oh no! In teeno ko jagane ka samay ho gaya hai." Dhara said hurriedly and began to leave the kitchen when Raavi stopped her.
"Main jaga doon Dhara di?" She asked shyly. Dhara laughed and nodded at her. She skipped towards his cot. It had been ten days since she had told them all about her love for him and he was trying to avoid her as best as he could. So she cherished the little moments she got to see him and spend with him, even if he just fought with her.
She shook him gently. He muttered something and turned away from her. She smiled fondly and shook him again. He grumbled.
"Bhabhi! Sone dijiye na? Paanch minute!" He muttered when she shook him again. Raavi bent down.
"Bhabhi? Kon bhabhi? Kiski bhabhi? Pehle jab bhabhi bolne ke liye kehti thi tab to chid jata tha..." She said in his ears. He opened his eyes widely and watched her then clenched his jaw.
"Tu! Tu yahan kya kar rahi hai?" He yelled waking his brothers by his shouts.
"Kya kar rahi hoon matlab? Wahi jo roz karne aati hoon! Apne hone wale pati ko taad rahi hoon!" She replied as she blinked her eyes at him innocently. His brothers laughed at the horror on his face.
"Aye Maami ki behen ki beti! Nikal yahan se!" He shouted and held her hand, pulling her out of the house amidst Dhara's protests as she came out from the kitchen. But Raavi walked with him readily as he led her. He pushed her towards the direction of her house as he lifted a finger in warning. "Dobara yahan dikhi na to kadayi mein daal ke paka jaunga! Samjhi?" He asked. In his anger and haste to throw her out of his house, he had forgotten that he wore no shirt or vest. The girls that were passing by were ogling at him. Raavi noticed it but Shiva was watching her angrily so failed to notice. She huffed as she held his hand and pulled him back inside the house angrily huffing at the girls. He was so confused that he allowed her to do so.
She brought him back towards his cot to the amazement of Dhara and his brothers, who were watching them both with surprise and as if they were entertainment. Raavi ignored them all and bent to pick his vest which had fallen off his cot on the floor and threw it at him.
"Apni hone wali biwi ko to taadne nahin deta par gali ki har ladki tujhe taad sakti hai! Hai na? Sirf mere upar hi pabandi hai!" Raavi shouted at him angrily. He was watching her like she belonged to a different species. Dev and Krish were watching them both with wide smiles and Dhara was trying to hide her giggles. "Dhara di! Bata dijiye apne devar ko ki aisi harkate ise shobha nahin deti! Woh bhi mere saamne!" She complained.
"Aye Gadhedi!" Shiva growled with clenched teeth. He was furious at her for making them the laughing stock of his house. But before he could say anything more, Raavi whipped around, hitting his face with her open hair and walked out of the house angrily. Shiva could just watch as his family burst into laughter at his reaction.
•
Shiva watched the clock tick away but his eyes were wide open. He had traversed some more memories of his childhood. Raavi had grown up with them. She had become their good friend. She had become family.
He remembered when she was eight and he was ten. She came to and from the school with them in the auto. On that day she had been late to reach their auto at the end of school.
"Arre! Yeh kahan reh gayi?" Krish asked when he saw the empty space between Shiva and himself. Raavi usually reached the auto before them all but didn't sit until they took their seats. Shiva frowned.
"Main dekh kar aata hoon!" Shiva said and ran away without waiting for a reply from either of them.
Shiva went to her class first but found it empty. Then he checked by shouting her name near the toilets and when he replied no reply, he ran towards the play ground.
"Raavi!" He shouted anxiously, worried for her. He was very protective of her. "Raavi!"
"Sh-Shiva!" He heard a sniffle from behind a tree in the play ground and found her sitting there with red puffy eyes and pink nose. He sat on his knees near her.
"Aye Raavi! Kya hua tujhe?" He asked her worriedly. She held his hands.
"Mere class ke ladkon ne na mere baal kheenche! Aur mere chocolates bhi cheen liye. Unhone mera pin bhi tod diya!" She told him. "Aur dekh! Mere uniform par paani daal diya. Woh mujhe chida rahe the! Anaath bhi kaha unhone mujhe!"
"Aur tu? Tu chup chaap sunti rahi?" He asked her angrily as he stood up and gently helped her to stand. Her uniform was wet like she said and her hair was messy too. He patted her hair down, setting them again and then picked up her bag and set it on his own shoulders before he wiped her tears and began to lead her away.
"To main aur kya karti? Mujhe dar lag raha tha." Raavi sniffled.
"Agar koi tujhe sataye to tu wapas unko sata! Baal kheenche to baal kheench! Maare to maar. Paani phenke to wapas paani phenk! Samjhi? Jab tak tu aisa nahin karegi na? Tab tak woh tujhe aise hi satayenge." Shiva told her wisely.
"Woh kehte hain ki koi mujhe bachane nahin aayega. Aur unke mummy papa unko bachaenge agar woh problem mein pade to." Raavi told Shiva as he gently led her to the auto.
"To tu unse agli baar kehna ki Shiva zaroor aayega Raavi ko bachane. Aur kal tu mujhe batana ki woh kon ladke the jinhone tujhe sataya." Shiva ordered. She nodded as she smiled at him happily and wiped her eyes. He made her sit beside Krish in the auto and took his own seat beside her after placing her bag on the bag rod.
When they had reached home, he had ran towards Suman who was in the kitchen and settled before her.
"Kya hua? Aaj school se aate hi apni maa ke paas kaise aa gaya?" She smiled at him.
"Maa... kya aap mujhe kuch paise dengi?" He inquired. Suman frowned at him.
"Kyun?"
So Shiva narrated the whole story of the afternoon. Suman frowned angrily when she heard about what happened with Raavi.
"Yeh aaj kal ke bacche! Bade hi belagaam hote hain. Kaun aise bacchiyon ko satata hai bolo!" She muttered as she chopped the vegetables.
His mother was a tough but to crack. He jad always been more scared of his mother than his father. She had never like Dhara and Hardhik even though Darshan had basically adopted them as his own, but despite having problems with Prafulla, she had accepted Raavi as their own. Anyone who had problems with Raavi had many people to look out for, even Suman, who had loved Raavi a lot, since the moment she had stepped inside their lives. All of the Pandyas did.
"To Maa? Aap de dengi na paise?" He had asked her again.
"Theek hai! Tu le lena mujhse paise." She had smiled at him softly. "Us bacchi ka to humse dil ka rishta hai. Woh dil se humari apni hai." She had told him gently and messed up his already messy hair. He had nodded at her with excitement and ran away.
He had gone to the market with Gaumbhi that day and bought a very beautiful and shiny butterfly pin that had caught his eye. It was similar to the one that had been broken by her classmates. He had packed it away to give it to Raavi on her birthday.
He had even bought chocolates for her that he handed her on his way back to cheer her up. Then he had gone to the classmates the very next day and dealt with them, warning them to stay far away and very polite to Raavi if they wanted to be safe. Then he had made them apologise to her.
But he had never given her that pin.
•
'Jabse Raavi ne apni nayi dhun pakdi hai, gali gali ke log mujhe aise dekhte hain jaise main koi namuna hoon. Aur mujhe logon ka attention bilkul nahin pasand. Par use yeh baat kon samjhaye? Aaj bhi sab ke saamne gale lag gayi.
Samajh nahin aa raha ki mujhe uski in harkaton se pareshaani hai ya fir uska yeh sab sabke saamne karne se pareshaani hai. Pan jab bhi woh saamne aati hai mujhe gussa aur chid aa jati hai. Pan yeh dil? Zor se dhadakne lagta hai! Kyun? Shayad darta hai ki kuch aur pagalpan pan na kar de.'
Raavi laughed as she read his entry. She remembered this incident too. She fondly reminisced that day.
Raavi saw Shiva as he unloaded the goods at the store. She had gone to Pandya Niwas first and there she had seen Dhara getting ready to bring lunch to the store. She had skipped inside.
"Dhara diii!" She chirped. Dhara smiled widely when she saw Raavi. Since Raavi had declared her love for Shiva, Dhara seemed to like her more than she already did. "Aap is time pe dukaan ja rahi ho Dhara di?" Raavi asked.
"Haan! Shiva thoda busy tha na to usne kaha tha ki woh baad mein khayega. Abhi Gaumbhi ka phone aaya tha ki Shiva free ho gaya hai to main khana le aaun." Dhara informed her.
"Main bhi chalun aapke saath?" She had asked sweetly. Dhara chuckled at her.
"Haan! Chal."
Now she was watching Shiva with open adoration. Dhara lightly hit her shoulder when she saw Raavi had stopped to admire Shiva who was in his vest.
"Ruk kyun gayi? Chal!" Dhara lightly admonished. Raavi nodded excitedly and walked to the store. Shiva saw her and grumbled something as he turned to bring in more goods.
"Hello Shivaaaa!" She greeted sweetly.
"Chal nikal!" Shiva growled back making her laugh and Dhara frown.
"Shiva!" Dhara warned. Shiva huffed but didn't say anything else. Dhara began to open the tiffin and served it to Gaumbhi before closing it, because Shiva had a little more work to do and she didn't want the food to cool down.
Dhara then sat on the floor with Gaumbhi to feed him as he did his own calculations busily. Raavi took a seat on the counter and began to watch Shiva who either ignored her or glared at her. She smiled at him though. Widely. At least she did before she saw the newest customer of the store.
"Hi Shiva!" Hetal smiled at Shiva who smiled back amicably. Hetal stayed in their lane and she always bought the goods from Pandya store. And she always came to the store during the unloading with her friends and bought something or the other that she didn't even need, according to Raavi. But Shiva was always polite with her unlike how he was with Raavi.
"Woh mujhe na woh chocolate chahiye tha." Hetal told him sweetly. He nodded and was about to get it when Raavi leapt to the other side and got the chocolate before Shiva did. She glared at him to his confusion and then glared at Hetal who narrowed her eyes at Raavi. She banged the chocolate on the counter.
"Pacchaas rupai!" Raavi told her with grit teeth.
"Abhi maine apni poori khareedari nahin ki." Hetal smiled sweetly at her. Raavi huffed.
"Aur kya chahiye tumhen?" Raavi asked.
Shiva was watching them both exchange glares and then sighed as he went out to continue his unloading work. He didn't understand what Raavi's problem was.
"Shiva..." Hetal smiled at her. Raavi stiffened and Shiva who had re-entered the shop watched Hetal in confusion. "Mera matlab hai ki Shiva de dega. Tujhe is store ki owner banne ki kya zaroorat?"
"Mujhe pata hai tera kya matlab tha." Raavi told her angrily as she shifted her glare to Shiva who was fed up of them both now.
"Haan bol. Aur kya chahiye?" Shiva joined Raavi behind the counter. Hetal began to ask for things as Shiva started to pack them for her. Raavi stuck to Shiva like a shadow as he moved around. She kept glaring at Hetal who was herself irritated now. "Yeh le." Shiva placed the bag on the counter. "Paanch sau chattees rupai." Shiva told her after calculations. Hetal smiled at him sweetly as she played with her hair and then handed over the money to him.
"Ise deliver kar dena. Bahut heavy hai na?" Hetal told him. He watched the bag and then her.
"Theek hai. Tu ja. Ye deliver ho jaayega." He told her. Hetal nodded and then waved her hand at him, glared at Raavi and turned away. She took some steps and then stopped again before turning.
"Shiva!" She called out just as Shiva was turning towards Raavi to say something to her.
"Haan?"
"Delivery dene tu khud aana." She said sweetly. Raavi watched her with an open mouth and turned towards Shiva who was feeling awkward too. Hetal stood there smiling.
"Aye!" Raavi shouted at Hetal angrily. She moved Shiva out of the way and came out from behind the counter. Her shout had attracted the attention of Dhara and Gaumbhi, who had emerged from the store room right then after lunch and even people outside who had stopped to watch. "Yeh kya harkat hai?" Raavi yelled angrily. "Delivery dene tu khud aana!" She mimicked Hetal. "Naukar nahin hai woh tumhara! Tumhen bas apni kharidee cheezo se matlab hona chahiye. Isse nahin ki kon laakar deliver karega! Samjhi?"
"Tujhe kyun itni mirchi lag rahi hai haan?" Hetal crossed her arms in-front of her on her chest. "Pehle to is dukan ki sethani ki tarah mujhse behave kiya aur ab Shiva par apna haq jata rahi hai! Tum ho kon uski haan?!" Hetal yelled back. Gautam came and stood next to Shiva who had come out from behind the counter too, in case he had to pull Raavi away. Dhara came and stood near Raavi.
"Main uski koi bhi kyun na hoon! Tum kuch nahin ho uski! Main dekh rahi bahut dinon se tumhen uske aas paas mandlate hue. Sheetal kaaki ko sab bata dungi!"
"To main bhi tumhari Maasi ko bata deti hoon ki tum kya kya krti fir rahi ho yahan." Hetal said. "Bata dungi ki bahut zyada haq jata rahi thi tum Shiva aur uski dukan dono par. Fir batana unhen ki kya lagta hai yeh tumhara." Dhara tried to calm the girls down. But they didn't listen to her.
"Maasi ko kya poori dunya ko bata do! In fact Maasi ko main khud bata dungi. Darti nahin hoon main kisi se." Raavi declared and turned towards Shiva who was watching them both with wide eyes. She walked towards him and kissed his cheek before turning towards Hetal challengingly and then turned back towards Shiva and hugged him tightly.
Shiva stiffened and watched the top of her head with shock before turning towards Gaumbhi who was watching them with an open mouth and then at Dhara who was herself shocked. He then looked towards the people who were watching them and even commenting on them like they were free drama, which he mused, they were. He was about to separate from her and throw her off him, when he aaw Hetal watching Raavi angrily like she wanted to pull Raavi off him by her hair. Then he watched Dhara who shook his head at him and then gestured towards the store room. He sighed and led Raavi away towards the store room, closing the door and blocking the world.
He separated from Raavi, who was watching him angrily.
"Aye Gadhedhi! Akkal ki dushman! Sharam waram hai ki nahin tujh mein?" Shiva growled. "Sab ko free show dene mein maza ata hai tujhe? Kya kahenge ab log?"
"Main Gadedhi! Main paagal! Aur Hetal?"
"Hetal kya?" Shiva asked her irritatedly.
"Usse to bahut dheere se muskurakar baat karta hai! 'Shiva delivery dene tu khud aana'!" She mimicked. "Aur main? Mere saamne aate hi aag ugalta hai! Is dunya mein sabse khushi se baat karta hai aur meri taraf sirf gusse se dekhta hai. Kabhi bhi mujhse theek se baat nahin karta." She cried softly as she watched him with tearful eyes. "Teri wajah se ab Hetal bhi flirt kar rahi hai tujhse." She blamed him to his shock.
"Maine kya kiya? Maine to usse kuch nahin kaha jisse woh flirt kare mujhse! Woh customer hai. Usse izzat se baat karna mera farz hai."
"Itni izzat se? Ki woh tujhe ghar par bulaye! Mere saamne flirt kare!"
"Aye Chipkali! Ab bahut zyada ho raha hai." Shiva warned. "Tu Maami ki behen ki beti hai. Dushman hai tu dushman! Sab ke saath narmi kar sakta pan tere ya uske saath nahin! Samjhi?" He growled in anger. "Aur waise kyun na kare woh flirt tere saamne? Lagti kon hai tu meri? Dunya wale kya kahengi jaanti hai? Kitni badnaami hogi teri kuch samajh hai?" She watched him with more tears as she pouted angrily.
"Nahin main to hoon hi na samajh na! Pichle ek saal se tujhe apna bahut kuch maan liya. Yeh na samjhi hai. Tujhe paane ki liye vrat pe vrat rakh rahi hoon. Yeh na samjhi hai. Mannaten aur prathna dono kar rahi hoon. Ye na samjhi hai. Tere dil ko aur tujhe aur tere saare apnon ko jeetne ki koshish kar rahi hoon, ye na samjhi hai!" Raavi whispered to him. He stilled, softening towards her. She looked defeated. "Aaj bhi mera vrat hai Shiva. Main tere liye vrat rakh kar yahan khana le kar aayi hoon Dhara di ke saath. Par dekh na! Tujh par mere kuch bhi karne ka asar nahin hota. Aur woh baaqi ladkiyan? Unka kuch na karke bhi teri narmi par haq hai. Aur ye na meri na samjhi hai! Jis ke saath aaj naam joda hai usi ke saath bahut pehle se dil jod diya hai! To log kya kahenge na mujhe isse farq padta hai aur na isse ki meri kitni badnaami hogi! Par ye bhi na? Meri na samjhi hai!" She cried as she sat down on the floor and opened the tiffin while sniffling. She served the lunch on a plate and placed it before him. "Baith kar kha le." She muttered and then wiped her eyes, becoming normal before she went out of the store room, leaving him alone to ponder upon her words.
'Aaj pata nahin mujhe kyun mere dil mein kuch badlaav mehsoos ho raha hai. Pighla to nahin hoon pann haan. Mere dil par asar zaroor kar gayi hain uski baaten. Isiliye shayad main aaj Hetal ke ghar nahin gaya delivery dene. Krish ko bhej diya tha.
Aur uss chipkali ke khidki pe chocolates aur chips rakh kar aa gaya tha chupke se uski khidki khatkhatake.'
She smiled at the words. She had gone home that day after facing the crowd and their stares. She hadn't even spoken to Dhara di and Gaumbhi. When she reached home, her Maasi had already gotten the news somehow and she had twisted her ears and scolded her badly.
When she heard the knock that night, she did open the window and when she saw the bag of chips and chocolates she had brightened up considerably. She had thought it might have been Dhara and Gaumbhi who had done it to cheer her up. But now knowing that it was him, made it so much more special.
What more had he done? She wondered as she read again.
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Another part for you.
How is it? Zaroor batana!
Have a good day
Typed in haste ignore the mistakes.
Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes
Thank you for considering my request and giving shayar Shiva's avatar! You write poems so well and this time, you completely nailed it. With incorporating show dialogues into it, and staying so true their initial characters. It totally stole the show for me.
You are welcome! I actually wrote it a long time ago when I heard him say the first two lines in the haveli. I added that here.
And are we going to get details on this bit?
Yes you will! In fact a part of it is already updated in the newest part.
"Ki teri har khushi mein maine, Apne gham ko dubaya hai, Aur tere gham ne jab tujhe aan ghera, Meri khushiyan bhi maine tere naam likhwaya hai."
Haha, since you're extending it part by part, I'd love if there are are any convos, diary entries on these kissas.
There will be. Not sure if it will be on exact lines. But there will be past incidents that will fir the poem.
@other parts beautiful. Very curious to see what/how Shiva will tell others his answers. Because of his delay, I feel that he may do some grand gesture, butat the same time, the way this Shiva has been penned, it doesn't seem like he's the types that will be doing something grandeur. He is more of a silent, subtle, lover. Or maybe it will be mix where he'll do something meaningful for Raavi for her knowledge and just their beautiful moment/memory, but for others it will be subtilty where they all will remain wondering when the tides turned.
Raavi will know everything but dunno about the fam. Lets see.
However, for now, I'm super excited for Shiva's diary for I just like Raavi, can't wait to find out how Shiva fell in love!
Thanks for being such a beautiful support always Hails! Means a lot to me. And hope you like it! 🖤
Aaaahhh, I want moreeee! I can read for hours. Haha you can make these parts long and I'll read it. Lol lost .01% motivation that I had to read that other book now. 😂😂
This was so beautiful. The poems living up to it. Was it similar to the one on the previous part? It felt familiar yet doesn't seem the same. But I loved it nonetheless. I also love the two perspectives/thoughts.
I love how Shiva recalling their bachpan ke kisse and how she comes in his hisse. Loved that caring, comforting Shiva. And was surprising to see that Maami and kids had a great bond too. Was this before or after the Kangan incident? Regardless, I'm curious if something happened outside of Kangan and situation demanded Raavi to defend her Maasi that led Shiva to have change of heart about Raavi too. Oh wait, it was Gaumbi/Anita mess and their golddigging mentality? I loved all the bachpan ke kisse and would love reading more about it.
And on the other side, there's Raavi reading about how he started to have change of heart again. Loving Shiva's perspective and possessive Raavi marking her territory and staking her claim is always fun to read about. But it's shivas reaction to those, has been a little more endearing (i.e. na maan ke bhi maana to not making delivery personally to Hetal's and instead leaving chips and chocolates for Raavi). Like Raavi, I'm curious to read about more such things, and am impatiently waiting. Please update this soon (and if possible, sooner than this time? Pretty please 🥺)
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