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Thank you and hopefully soon🌷Originally posted by: thevictorous
Lovely ❤️ Eagerly waiting for next part.
Beautiful!❤️❤️
So this Raavi fell in love and how?! It's almost devotional. The way she took care of everything related to Shiva. My fav bit was definitely the last bit from when Shiva sees Raavi flying that kite!
"But Raavi’s luck seemed to be running out. She was facing difficulties now. And just as she was about to lose, she saw someone extend their hand and grab the maanjha. She could recognize this hand in the millions.
“Shiva?” She whispered and turned a little in part hope and part fear. He stood just behind her. He held her waist with the hand holding the charkha and placed the charkha in her hands. She speechlessly watched him as he began to fly the kite, concentrating hard, while she grabbed the charkha.
“Dhil aap…” He whispered to her in his deep voice and she was mesmerized. He had never whispered this softly to her before. But then she registered what he said and swiftly took on her new role.
Shiva began to fly the kite expertly and battled the other kites in sky while she watched him do so happily. He was finally in her team. She laughed as he cut yet another string silently.
A long time later when their kite was almost the only one flying, he turned towards her. She watched him with a tearful smile.
“Tu aa gaya Shiva?”
“Nahin Gadedhi! Main abhi bhi ghar pe hoon.” He answered sarcastically. Raavi huffed.
“Last year tu mujhse door bhag raha tha yeh keh kar ki tu kabhi mere saath patang nahin udayega. Tune kaha ki tu kabhi meri team mein nahin hoga.” She told him, hurt. He sighed.
“Woh last year tha. Yeh is saal ki nayi shuruat hai.” He told her seriously. She smiled as she hugged him.
“I am sorry maine tujhse pooche baghair ye kiya. Teri chuppi mujhe dehla rahi thi. Maine socha ki ab main chup rahi to tujhe kho dungi.” She told him as she burrowed in his chest.
“Meri aankhon mein kya tujhe meri haan nahin dikhi? Chipkali?” He questioned. She sniffled. He laughed.
“Ab achanak kyun aa gaya?”
“Pehle to sirf dekhne aaya tha ki kon tha. Fir tujhe dekha to mujhse raha nahi gaya aur main Preeti ko bhaga kar yahan khda ho gaya.” He told her as he stared at their kite on the sky, safe and a clear winner. “Fir maine dekha ki Maanjha tere haath se choot raha hai… To maine thaam liya.”
Shiva kissed her head as she shyly smiled while still hiding her face. Shiva was still flying their kite, declaring his relationship with his Gadedhi in front of the whole world.
Gaumbhi had told him once- ‘Shiva! Zindagi ho ya patang, dor hamesha tere haath mein honi chahiye! Chootni nahin chahiye!’ And when Raavi was going to let the maanjha go, he decided he needed to hold on to his patang and zindagi both. He sighed, at peace."
I can't explain how I felt. My mushy heart was so satisfied!
Tangent..but the way you tied that to the first episode ❤️ It brings of lot of what ifs.) But thanks for serving it all beautifully. I love this Shivi!
And thanks for letting me know of Pt 3, cause it seems incomplete without learning of Shiva's perspective. Did he fall I love with Raavi seeing her devotion for him? That would be just like Lord Shiva. And while I wait for ptm 3, what are the chances this being an FS? It would be interesting to learn how they manage to convince Maami. Can't wait to read the next part!
Part 3
Shiva separated from Raavi and smiled at her gently. Raavi had never seen this smile before. She smiled back at him. Her eyes were already filling with tears at the tenderness in his eyes.
"Ab teri aankhen ganga jamuna kyun bahane lagi? Somnath mein paani ki kami ho gayi hai jo tu samaj seva karne lag gayi hai?" Shiva asked roughly. She sniffled and shook her head.
"Yaqeen nahin aa raha hai ki jis ki mannaten main pichle do saal se maang rahi hoon, woh finally mujhe mil raha hai!" Raavi replied as she watched his face. Shiva smiled.
"Gadhedhi!" He shook his head and then turned towards their kite which seemed to be flying high even now. "Waise woh Maami ka idea copy kar liya tune, haan?"
"Haan! Ab Maasi majboor ho jayengi humara rishta karane ke liye. Poore Somnath mein khabar phel chuki hai. To kon aayega mere liye rishta lekar unke ghar?" Raavi asked mischievously. "Maasi ka paintra unhi par wapas azmaya hai!" She laughed. Shiva smiled at her. She looked beautiful.
"Acchi lag rahi hai..." He told her softly. She stilled. He had never complimented her before.
"Janti hoon. Somnath ki sabse zyada khoobsurat ladki hoon main!" She declared. He shook his head.
"Chal... Ab tera patang udane ka sapna poora ho gaya hai na? Kisi ne dekh liya to tera plan chopat ho jayega!" Shiva said. Raavi smiled at the way he was making sure she wasn't caught.
"Par Shiva! Patang?" Raavi didn't want to leave it behind.
"Patang ke peeche bhaagi to samajh lena ki woh Maami sab samajh jayegi. Chal!" Shiva said as he placed the charkha on the ground, before placing a heavy stone over it and pulled her away from the spot gently. "Maami ke ghar pahunchne se pehle tujhe pahunchna hai! Warna uski shak ki sui sabse pehle tujhi par aa ke thehregi!" Shiva told her. She chuckled.
"Meri Maasi ko bahut aache se jaanta hai tu." She said and pinched his cheeks. He shook her hand off and narrowed his eyes at her.
•
"Aaj to bahut maza aaya hai na Maa?" Dhara asked as she walked happily with her family.
"Haan aur nahin to?" Suman asked joyously. "Bas woh patang kis ne udayi, samajh nahin aa raha!" Suman said as she wondered. "Kis ne ki hogi yeh harkat?"
"Haan Maa! Soch to main bhi rahi hoon! Shiva bhi abhi tak wapas nahin aaya." Dhara said as her eyes searched for Shiva, who had gone to find the culprit but still wasn't back. "Aur ab to Krish bhi nahin dikh raha."
"Abhi to yahin tha." Gautam said as he looked around.
"Yeh tum bhaiyon ko kya ghayab ho jane ki beemari lag gayi hai!?" Suman asked while holding the edge of her saree. "Ek ke baad ek bas nikal jaate ho." She shook her head. "Upar se woh titli bhi ghayab hai subah se."
"Haan! Main bhi use bahut miss kar rahi hoon. Uski badbad se saara ghar goonj uthta hai." Dhara said as she laughed.
"Kahin Maami ne use Shiva se door rakhne ke liye ghar mein to band nahin kar diya?" Dev asked, startled. They all came to a stop.
"Yeh mumkin hai!" Suman nodded and frowned at Gautam. "Us kaagdi ka koi bharosa nahin hai." She shook her head in irritation. "Yeh Shiva kuch bole to main koi qadam uthaun is rishte ke liye. Pan woh to chuppi saadhe baitha hai."
"Haan Maa pan ye to sochiye ki pehle jaise chid kar mana karta tha, ab to nahin kar raha na?" Dhara mused.
"Haan so to hai." Suman nodded.
"Maa! bhabhi!" They heard Krish before they saw him. He was running towards them with a kite.
"Arre kya hua?" Suman asked as she placed a hand over her heart. Her children were giving her mini heart attacks. She gulped. At this rate she would reach her grave before she saw any weddings of her children, forget seeing her grandchildren.
"Ye Dekho Maa! Main kya le kar aaya hoon!" Krish reached them and showed them the kite. It was the same kite that had created a storm in today's festival.
Shiva Sang Raavi.
Shaadi mein zaroor aana...
"Yeh tujhe kahan se mila?" Gautam asked as he watched the infamous kite.
"Arre wahin ghaat se. Thode upar ki disha mein se ud raha tha. Aur koi tha hi nahin iske aas paas. Bas charkha tha aur uske upar patthar." Krish replied. Dhara frowned.
"Par aisa to ho hi nahin sakta!" Dhara refuted. "Koi is patang ko jee jaan se uda raha tha! Tabhi to yeh akela patang abhi tak tika hua tha. Warna to ye kab ka kat chuka hota!"
"Bhagodi ki beti theek keh rahi hai. Yunhi to patang nahin ud sakta! Koi tha to."
"Shayad woh chala gaya! Taaki kisi ko pata na chal sake?" Dev asked.
"Shiva bhi nahin aaya abhi tak! Krish se pehle gaya tha pata karne!" Dhara said.
"Ho sakta hai use koi mil gaya ho aur woh chala gaya ho?" Gautam asked. Suman nodded thoughtfully.
"Chalo! Yahan khade reh kar koi faida nahin. Ghar chalte hain." Suman declared and the family obeyed.
*
"Oye Bhoothnath!" Raavi whispered as Shiva helped her to get inside her room, through the window. Shiva lifted his eyebrow in question. "Tera mann kaise badla?" Raavi inquired with a frown. He just smiled as he saw her climb inside the room and then began to walk backwards. "Bhoothnath!" Raavi whispered angrily. He chuckled at her and moved away.
"Chipkali... Darwaza band kar le khidki ka. Warna kahin teri behne na aa jayen." He said. She shrieked as she closed the window. Shiva laughed as he began to walk back towards his home. Chipkali never failed to amaze and amuse him.
Shiva did think about her question though. When did his heart change? Was it when she declared her love for him on that fated day? Or was it gradual? He shook his head. Or maybe it was on that day when she kissed his cheek and walked proudly out of the store as Dev looked on? Maybe his diary could answer better. He smiled. He began to write it solely to unload his heart because he didn't know who else to talk to regarding this. Now it had all reached a point where he could see the end.
He entered Pandya Niwaas and saw his family sitting around his mother in the aangan. He joined them.
"Shiva tu kahan ghayab ho gaya tha?" Dev asked the moment he settled down.
"Woh... Arjun mil gaya tha. To main uske saath chala gaya." Shiva replied.
"Mujhe aise hi laga." Gautam said. Suman narrowed her eyes as Shiva didn't meet his brother's eyes. But she let it slide.
"Aye Suman ben!"
They all turned as one to see Prafulla enter their house along with Jagat, who was pleading with her to stop.
"Suman Ben! Ye sab aap ki saazish hai na! Patang udane ki?" Prafulla shouted. She had returned home to see Raavi sitting in her room, upset because her Maasi didn't allow her to go to the ghaat to celebrate with Shiva. Prafulla had locked her inside her room in the morning. If Raavi had been free to go, Prafulla would have doubted her first. She still did. But Raavi couldn't have done it. The kite was still flying when she returned to check on Raavi and Raavi was inside her room. So that threw Prafulla out.
But before she could think about it, there was a steady trickle of guests who had come to congratulate her on the 'rishta'. Prafulla had had enough. Now no one in Somnath would bring proposals for Raavi. What if she became Anita 2.0? Nooo! So she had come tot fight with the only other party that could do this. No way would she let her sweet innocent Raavi to marry the Jangle gawar of the Pandya clan. She had marched here with Jagat in tow to face the bane of her existence... The Pandyas.
"O Kaagdi! Chillane ki zaroorat nahin hai. Mere kanpur mein koi hadtaal nahin chal rahi! Samjhi? Aur rahi baat us patang ki to hum bhi yahi soch rahe hain ki kon ho sakta hai!" Suman made a face at her. Jagat had apologised to her long back and she had forgiven him after months of his apologies. But Prafulla? She would never forgive her nor would she forget.
"Kaise na chillaun? Jab se lauti hoon ghar mein mehmaan hi khatam nahin ho rahe! Bas mubarakbaad diye jaa rahe hain. Jaise ki ye koi
Khushi ki baat ho. Meri phool jaisi bacchi aur ye paagal saand! Main aisa kabhi nahin hone dungi!" Prafulla vowed.
"Aye Maami! Aawaz neeche kar samjhi?" Shiva stood up and took some steps towards Prafulla, who hid behind Jagat. "Aur ye kya challenge de rahi hai Maa ko? Tere saamne teri phool si bacchi aur Maa ke aangan donon le aaunga! Kya kar legi?" Prafulla laughed an utterly fake laugh to calm his anger.
"Arre Siva! Tu to bura maan gaya. Main aise isliye keh rahi hoon ki tu bhi to use pasand nahin karta ne? To tum dono ki zindagi barbaad na ho jaaye. Warna tu to apna hi baccha hai." Prafulla said saccharine sweetly. Shiva glared at her.
"Shiva chod unhen. Tu yahan aakar baith!" Dhara called out. Shiva shook his head and settled down near his mother who patted his back.
"Maami yeh harkat humne nahin ki. Hum jab patang tak pahunche, to wahan bas charkha tha. Aur kuch nahin. Patang udane wala pehle hi nikal gaya tha." Dhara told her amicably. Prafulla angrily muttered something and stomped away. Jagat apologised profusely and followed his wife.
"Ab kya karenge? Raavi ka naam Shiva sang jud chuka hai. Saare mohalle wale poochenge. Kya jawab denge sabko?" Gautam asked Suman.
"Bol Shiva. Kya jawab de Sabko?" Suman asked. Shiva remained silent.
"Chup rehne ka waqt nahin hai Shiva! Kuch to bolna padega na!" Gautam said angrily. Dhara patted his hand and turned towards Shiva.
"Raavi bahut acchi ladki hai. Rishto ko samajhti hai. Aur sabse badi baat humari aankhon ke saamne badi hui hai. Dil ki saaf hai. Aur sab ki care karne wali hai. Usee acchi ladki tujhe kahin nahin milegi." Dhara said gently. "Fir kya baat hai?"
"Mujhe kuch waqt chahiye. Aapko jawaab de dunga." Shiva said.
"Aur kitna waqt chahiye?" Krish asked as he narrowed his eyes.
"Aye tu chup!" Shiva scolded him. Krish pouted and turned towards Dhara in complain.
"Use chup karane se kuch nahin hoga." Suman told him. "Woh chori kitne saal se intezaar mein hai. Aur kitna intezaar karegi woh haan?"
"Bas kuch aur din." Shiva replied and walked away. The rest of them sighed.
*
The darkness had begun the reign for the night. The house was steeped in silence. All the members were sleeping peacefully, when 'thud', something fell. But the members remained asleep.
"Ow!" A whispered shout was heard next. And soon a dark mass rose from the ground near the open window and rubbed its knees. "Yeh bhoothnath! Meri neended churake khud kitne aaraam se so raha hai! Abhi batayi hoon." The dark mass whispered and removed the dark shawl revealing herself to the silence of the house. Raavi schooled her messed up hair and then tip toed towards Shiva's cot. She had to ask him about this or she wouldn't be able to sleep.
"Shiva!" She whispered furiously. "Shiva!" She whispered again. He mumbled something that sounded like 'Chipku chipkali sone bhi nahin deti' in his sleep. She smiled softly. Even in his sleep it was her name he took. But her smile disappeared. She was here on a mission. She couldn't get side tracked. "Oi Bhoothnath! Uth!" She whispered again. But her voice carried over to Krish who woke up startled.
"Bbb-Bhooth!" Krish muttered as he looked around in fear. Raavi dropped to the floor in haste. Oh no! What if Krish woke up the whole house? Raavi slithered under Krish's cot inconspicuously, praying that he wouldn't rouse the whole house or notice her. "Shiva! Ddd-ev! Utho na. Koi hai yahan!" Krish extended his hand and shook Shiva and then Dev.
"Koi nahin hai Krish! So ja!" Dev muttered sleepily before putting his blanket over his head and turning around to face the other side. Krish shook Shiva harder as he muttered about ghosts again. Shiva pushed Krish's arm away and huffed.
"Uth na Shiva! Koi to hai yahan!"
"Aue Piddi! Fattu kahin ka! Hawa ke jhonko se bhi darr jata hai." Shiva muttered angrily as he lifted his head from his pillow.
"Nahin Shiva! Hawa nahin! Kuch aur. Koi mujhe utho, utho! Aisa keh raha tha." Krish told him and imitated the whispers he heard. "'Utho bhooth bhooth' aise!" Raavi hit her forehead. Krish heard bhooth. Not bhoothnath. So he got scared. But good for her, otherwise he would have realised who it was in reality. What she didn't realise though was that she was wearing bangles which jingled as she moved her hand, alerting Shiva and Krish. Krish froze in fear. "D-dekha? Suna tune? Kuch tha! Kisi ki chalne ki aawaz thi. Payal ki. Koi hai yahan. Main ja raha hoon Maa ke paas." Then he froze. "Pan wahan tak mujhe chal kar jana hoga. Koi beech mein hamla kar de to?" Shiva shook his head at Krish. He frowned. Even he heard the jingle. From underneath their cots. He moved Krish's blanket as Krish was trying to come up with a solution to rush to Suman’s room without any problems. His eyes met Raavi's scared ones and he froze in shock.
"Gadhedhi!" He muttered as he narrowed his eyes at her. She watched him with pleasing eyes. He shook his head in exasperation. "Aye Krish? Chal main tujhe Maa ke kamre tak chod aata hoon. Tu Aaj wahin soja." Shiva told him. Krish watched his brother doubtfully. Why would Shiva agree to do this?
"Tu? Mujhe chod ke aayega?" Krish asked him with narrowed eyes.
"Haan... Bas tujhe kal mera saara kaam karna padega." Krish's expression cleared. He shook his head. Of course there was a price but it was ok. He was fine with payments.
"Theek hai! Jo tu bolega!" Krish answered happily as he stood up and picked up his blanket and pillow almost exposing Raavi. Shiva got up hastily and almost threw his blanket on Krish's cot as he laughed and asked Krish to follow him.
Suman didn’t ask anything when Krish muttered something about jingling bells and slept near his mother.
“So ja! So ja!” She whispered as she patted his head and turned away. Krish too settled down happily.
Raavi had to wait for ten more minutes, before Shiva returned and lifted his blanket.
“Gadhedhi! Tu yahan kya kar rahi hai? Saara din jo chipakti rehti hai woh kaffi nahin hai jo ab raat ko aa gayi?” Shiva asked her angrily.
“Tu!” Raavi angrily shouted, before Shiva placed his palm on her mouth and signaled her to remain quiet. She stared at him angrily as he looked around listening for any movements. When everything remained calm, he held her waist with his other hand and began to steer her towards the stairs.
“Chal! Koi dekh lega na to mushkil ho jaayegi.” Shiva muttered. Raavi followed him silently as he led her. Once they had arrived upstairs, he took her to his room, that had already been built and furnished. He didn’t use it much except for keeping his clothes and other stuffs inside. They settled on his bed, sitting cross legged facing the other. “Ab bak! Itni raat ko chudailon ki tarah kya ghoom rahi hai? Main to bas yunhi bulata tha, tune to seriously aisi harkaten shuru kar di!” He said angrily. She rolled her eyes.
“Oye! Bhoothnath! Mujhe koi shauk nahin hai raaton ko yun firne ka.” She huffed. “Woh to bas mujhe neend nahin aa rahi thi…”
“To socha kyun na main doosron ke ghar ja kar unki neenden kharab karun! Hai na?” Shiva stopped her and completed her excuse by himself. She pushed his shoulder.
“Nahin! Meri neend teri wajah se gum hai! Tune bataya hi nahin ki tera dil kab palta!” She replied furiously. He sighed.
“To tu Raat ko choron ki tarah ghar mein ghus aayi?” He asked her in disbelief.
“Chor? Apne future ghar aayi hoon, apne future husband se milne to kaisi chor kahan ki chor? Poore haq se aayi hoon!” Raavi replied as she replied haughtily turning her nose in the air. He shook his head exasperated. He would need all his wits to handle this drama queen. “Ab bata!” He knew she wouldn’t let this go and even he needed to talk with her regarding this so he decided to put her out of her misery and answer her. He watched her thoughtfully for some time as she watched him expectantly with her wide eyes. He felt himself soften and got off the bed, walking towards his cupboard as she frowned at him, displeased with his actions.
He opened the cupboard and removed his diary from within. Then he turned and walked back towards her, forwarding the diary in his hand towards her.
“Le… Tere saare jawab yahin honge.” Shiva told her and smiled at her gently. She was shocked into silence as she watched him. Even though he had shown her his gentle side many times by now, it still made her speechless. She took the diary from him without a retort. “Maami ko pata chal gaya ki tu ghar par nahin hai tu poore Somnath ko jaga dengi.” Shiva told her. She giggled happily with a mischievous twinkle in her eyes.
“Itni badi Gadhedhi nahin hoon mein!” Raavi told him proudly. “Maasi ne mujhe subah kamre mein band kar diya tha na? To maine unse badle mein aaj raat Preeti ke ghar sleepover ka waada le liya! Aur main unse raat ka call karke bata chuki hoon ki main sone ja rahi hoon. Preeti se kaha ki main wapas ja rahi hoon ghar. Kyunki ise is sleepover ke baare mein maine kuch bataya bhi nahin tha. To ab mera to full settled hai.” Raavi clapped happily. He shook his head at her deviousness.
“To fir tu yahin par reh…” Shiva told her as he handed her a blanket and pillow from his cupboard and walked backwards as he memorized her, while she was settling down like she owned his space. She wrapped herself up in the blanket and opened the diary.
Shiva smiled and moved out of the room, softly shutting the door. The night was too
long and he was sure, he wouldn’t sleep. He smiled to himself and walked downstairs.
*
Raavi opened the first page of the diary. The first entry was dated almost an year and a half ago.
Mere bachpan ke har hisse mein
Tujhse ladayi ke kisse hain...
Kuch kahi si baaten hain,
Kuch ankahe se sapne hain.
Jab se jaana hai duniya ko,
Tab se tujh ko bhi jaana hai,
Tu ghairon mein nahin,
mere apno mein aati hai,
Kyunki mere apne to bahut pehle se,
Dil se tere apne hain...
Tujhse lad kar jhagad kar,
Teri har baat sun kar,
Apni har baat suna kar,
Maine ye jaana hai,
Teri qismat ki dor to kabse,
Meri qismat se uljhi hai.
Tera hona aur na hona,
Mere liye zaroori hai bahut,
Kyunki meri duniya to har pal,
Teri ird gird hi ghoomti hai...
Pyaar to nahin hai tujhse,
Dosti to door ki baat hai,
Nafrat bhi nahin karta hoon tujhse,
Fir bhi mere zindagi mein,
Teri kitni zaroorat hai...
Haan itna jaanta hoon,
Ki jo darmiyaan hai humare,
Woh kabhi kam to tha hi nahin,
Ki rishta hi humara ek alag si shiddat hai...
Tere aansuon par haq hai mera,
Koi aur rulakar dikhaye to tujhe,
Mere alawa jisne rulaya hai,
Mujhe har us shakhs se dikkat hai...
Tu masoom si dil mein utar jati hai,
Teri har ada mera dil lubhati hai,
Jab se tera naam juda hai mujhse,
Main tere hisse aur tu mere hisse aati hai,
Khushiyan tere dehleez karke,
Khud khasare mein raha hoon main,
Tere laayaq hoon to nahin,
Par kya karun fir bhi tera hoon mein.
Ek andheri si raat hoon mein,
Jis mein sab kuch samaya hai,
Tu suraj hai damakta sa,
Roshni sa tera saaya hai...
Kya rishta hai ye,
Ki teri har khushi mein maine,
Apne gham ko dubaya hai,
Aur tere gham ne jab tujhe aan ghera,
Meri khushiyan bhi maine tere naam likhwaya hai,
Mere bachpan ke har hisse mein,
Tujhse ladayi ke kisse hain,
Teri hansi ki goonj,
Aur mere gusse ke charche hain...
________
I am so sorry for the late update and also for elongating this story. Somehow the length increases and leaves me to extend it to another part.
Do tell me how you found it.
Your words give me inspiration to write.
Silence makes me feel no one is reading. It feels roo empty😂
Thank you so much for those who are commenting and liking it. Means a lot to me.
Typed in haste. Ignore the mistakes.
Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes
Beautiful!❤️❤️
So this Raavi fell in love and how?! It's almost devotional. The way she took care of everything related to Shiva. My fav bit was definitely the last bit from when Shiva sees Raavi flying that kite!
I had that first episode wala dialogue in mind. So I wanted to connect it here.
"But Raavi’s luck seemed to be running out. She was facing difficulties now. And just as she was about to lose, she saw someone extend their hand and grab the maanjha. She could recognize this hand in the millions.
“Shiva?” She whispered and turned a little in part hope and part fear. He stood just behind her. He held her waist with the hand holding the charkha and placed the charkha in her hands. She speechlessly watched him as he began to fly the kite, concentrating hard, while she grabbed the charkha.
“Dhil aap…” He whispered to her in his deep voice and she was mesmerized. He had never whispered this softly to her before. But then she registered what he said and swiftly took on her new role.
Shiva began to fly the kite expertly and battled the other kites in sky while she watched him do so happily. He was finally in her team. She laughed as he cut yet another string silently.
A long time later when their kite was almost the only one flying, he turned towards her. She watched him with a tearful smile.
“Tu aa gaya Shiva?”
“Nahin Gadedhi! Main abhi bhi ghar pe hoon.” He answered sarcastically. Raavi huffed.
“Last year tu mujhse door bhag raha tha yeh keh kar ki tu kabhi mere saath patang nahin udayega. Tune kaha ki tu kabhi meri team mein nahin hoga.” She told him, hurt. He sighed.
“Woh last year tha. Yeh is saal ki nayi shuruat hai.” He told her seriously. She smiled as she hugged him.
“I am sorry maine tujhse pooche baghair ye kiya. Teri chuppi mujhe dehla rahi thi. Maine socha ki ab main chup rahi to tujhe kho dungi.” She told him as she burrowed in his chest.
“Meri aankhon mein kya tujhe meri haan nahin dikhi? Chipkali?” He questioned. She sniffled. He laughed.
“Ab achanak kyun aa gaya?”
“Pehle to sirf dekhne aaya tha ki kon tha. Fir tujhe dekha to mujhse raha nahi gaya aur main Preeti ko bhaga kar yahan khda ho gaya.” He told her as he stared at their kite on the sky, safe and a clear winner. “Fir maine dekha ki Maanjha tere haath se choot raha hai… To maine thaam liya.”
Shiva kissed her head as she shyly smiled while still hiding her face. Shiva was still flying their kite, declaring his relationship with his Gadedhi in front of the whole world.
Gaumbhi had told him once- ‘Shiva! Zindagi ho ya patang, dor hamesha tere haath mein honi chahiye! Chootni nahin chahiye!’ And when Raavi was going to let the maanjha go, he decided he needed to hold on to his patang and zindagi both. He sighed, at peace."
I can't explain how I felt. My mushy heart was so satisfied!
Certain things could be magical if shown properly in the show. Sadly it was distorted beyond belief.
Tangent..but the way you tied that to the first episode ❤️ It brings of lot of what ifs.) But thanks for serving it all beautifully. I love this Shivi!
I love all the ShiVi fanfics. They are a treat to read even now.
And thanks for letting me know of Pt 3, cause it seems incomplete without learning of Shiva's perspective. Did he fall I love with Raavi seeing her devotion for him? That would be just like Lord Shiva. And while I wait for ptm 3, what are the chances this being an FS? It would be interesting to learn how they manage to convince Maami. Can't wait to read the next part!
I really think it will be the last part but something always remains and I extend it to one more part. 😂 So now even I am not sure how many more parts will there be. At least one more but it could extend.
Thank you so much for reading and for commenting with Kind words. They mean a lot to me. Aag to lagi hai par kuch to hai jo Shiva ko rok raha hai. Lets see what in the next part👍👍Originally posted by: MochaQueen
You wrote it so well...I loved the dialogues
so end se pata chala that Shiva is raazi, aag dono taraf barabar hai
phir shadi kyun nahi hui ek saal se
Thank you for considering my request and giving shayar Shiva's avatar! You write poems so well and this time, you completely nailed it. With incorporating show dialogues into it, and staying so true their initial characters. It totally stole the show for me.
And are we going to get details on this bit?
"Ki teri har khushi mein maine, Apne gham ko dubaya hai, Aur tere gham ne jab tujhe aan ghera, Meri khushiyan bhi maine tere naam likhwaya hai."
Haha, since you're extending it part by part, I'd love if there are are any convos, diary entries on these kissas.
@other parts beautiful. Very curious to see what/how Shiva will tell others his answers. Because of his delay, I feel that he may do some grand gesture, butat the same time, the way this Shiva has been penned, it doesn't seem like he's the types that will be doing something grandeur. He is more of a silent, subtle, lover. Or maybe it will be mix where he'll do something meaningful for Raavi for her knowledge and just their beautiful moment/memory, but for others it will be subtilty where they all will remain wondering when the tides turned.
However, for now, I'm super excited for Shiva's diary for I just like Raavi, can't wait to find out how Shiva fell in love!
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
