General one shots - Page 2

Originally posted by: Syon_Anya41

Oh this was so good!

DJ being jealous of Yuvika's achievements and so done with life, him acknowledging his wife's writing skills and at last, the disclaimer at last

The second fic was exactly how I imagined the scene to go when you first mentioned the draft idea. Gargi's face must have been so good to see in the show

Bold; Shame that we don't get to see this in the show cause Yuvika is a dhakkan

Also that disclaimer was also a part of his letter

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Bold; Shame that we don't get to see this in the show cause Yuvika is a dhakkan

Also that disclaimer was also a part of his letter

@Bold - I mean, like imagine how GOOD this show would have been, had Yuvika been cunning and manipulative. The actor has potential. I genuinely got goosebumps when I saw Yuvika sitting cross legged in the chair, while confronting DJ.

Oh it was?! I thought it was you giving the disclaimer

Originally posted by: Syon_Anya41

@Bold - I mean, like imagine how GOOD this show would have been, had Yuvika been cunning and manipulative. The actor has potential. I genuinely got goosebumps when I saw Yuvika sitting cross legged in the chair, while confronting DJ.

Oh it was?! I thought it was you giving the disclaimer

Yep manipulative Yuvika would've been so great....

That disclaimer was a last min addition , i didn't even want to give the trigger warning and the OS waa supposed to be longer with DJ pulling the trigger at the end for shock effect but trigger warnings are important these days so i gave one and it felt like i was condoning self harm so i added that disclaimer and decided to add it into the letter as DJ's post script [PS] in the letter

DB has a legacy? Damn. 👀

Dhanraj and Bhoomi blasting at their families and roasting them is so canon lmaoo

Also the last but one line. Even after losing everyting, DJ still craves competition.

Last epic line ka toh kya hi kehna

It was something exceptional Pete bhai

Originally posted by: Syon_Anya41

DB has a legacy? Damn. 👀

Dhanraj and Bhoomi blasting at their families and roasting them is so canon lmaoo

Also the last but one line. Even after losing everyting, DJ still craves competition.

Last epic line ka toh kya hi kehna

Thank you. , yeah the 3rd one felt a bit half assed and i relied on the last line to deliver a punch , glad it worked

Originally posted by: The_annoymus

It was something exceptional Pete bhai

Thank you for your review

This one was exceptional, but I liked it 😇

Db throughs everyone out 💥💥

Pete ye kya kiya? Sab ko fateechar bana diya

Loved it!!!

Originally posted by: Spandan24

This one was exceptional, but I liked it 😇

Db throughs everyone out 💥💥

Thank you for your review