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Posted: 17 years ago
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Janam...Janam Ki Saathi

What's sup guys? After watching today's episode, I got a idea and I wanted to share it with you guys through Janam...Janam Ki Saathi my new fan-fic; and its kinda my first one on different characters other than Robbie and Kasturi so please guys support me 😳.

Well guys it starts off with Kumkum and Sumit arguing like they showed in the promo and Kumkum Chachi walks in....so I thought I could share my idea through this...I hope you guys like it. And if you don't than its ok with me. 😃

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Part One

After hearing Kumkum's Chachi, Sumit goes to get the sugar and dal from the nearest market; on the way Sumit was cursing himself for agreeing with Kumkum for a stupid address, but that address in also important. After getting what Kumkum's Chachi said - Sumit goes back home than takes a shower and comes out wearing fresh clothes and go to bed when Kumkum comes in running and says "that they have to go mandir so get ready and this way you could impress my father so get up"

First time Sumit ignores Kumkum and goes to bed, but Kumkum also doesn't give up instead she pulls his blanket and says "get ready"

Sumit who was mad yells out "I'm not your husband so stop commanding me and I don't believe in this all so i'm going bed". Sumit was about to sleep when Chachi comes in saying "is there any problem?". Kumkum and Sumit look at each other than says at same time "there is no problem". Kumkum's Chachi isn't satisfied so she again asks Kumkum if she is hiding something...

Kumkum looks at Sumit than says "Chachi, I'm hiding something?"

{At Sumit's place}

Sumit's mother was looking at his picture and crying at the same time cause she is missing her son, but who can she complain too. After awhile Sumit's grandmother comes in her room and consoles her.

{Back at Kumkum's place}

Kumkum looks at Sumit than says "Chachi, I'm hiding something?"

Kumkum's Chachi: What are you hiding?

Kumkum: That me and Sumit aren't...

Kumkum's Chachi: Kya? You and Sumit aren't?

Kumkum was about to say something when Sumit says that "he was just telling Kumkum that he will be ready in few seconds before we go, but she is forcing me to get ready right now when we are going to the temple later on than why should I get ready right now and from there me and Kumkum got into a small argument."

Kumkum's Chachi: Kumkum what Sumit is saying is that the truth?

Kumkum nods her head thanking god that Sumit saved her from her Chachi or else she was a goner.

Time pass by Sumit was sleeping while Kumkum was biting her nails and wondering what will happen when Sumit finds out that she doesn't know any Raghu than what will happen... For-sure he will be mad at her, but she is doing this for Mini her sweet little sister who never asked for anything but her love so it doesn't matter anymore cause only god knows what is going to happen in her life.

During Sumit's sleep he gets some flashback of him and Kumkum - playing cricket, holi, even some romantic moments than how they died. Sumit gets up and looks at Kumkum, who enter his room dressed in same way as the old Kumkum does...meaning wearing sari and matching set, but Sumit gets more flashback and says "Kumkum your singgaarr in adhuri without Kumkum in your forehead" than Sumit goes and pick up sindoor from the taali that Kumkum brought in and fills her maang. And both of them are shock even Mini, who seen the entire scene.

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I think I should stop here and if you guys like it than i'll continue or else i'll stop right here, but in the next part Kumkum yells at Sumit for filling her maang and making her his real wife. Sumit on the other hand doesn't even know what he have done, but stares at Kumkum, who was crying and leaves the room and Mini goes after her.

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Nisha

PS: Please let me know if I should continue or not!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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yipeee ...... i was just wonderin why isnt sum1 starting a f.f on d new sumit kumkum nd here u r ......cotinue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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a really good fanfic... please continue soon... will be waiting. 😳
Edited by payal40 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethi

nisha it is grt one 👏 👏 👏



Thank you so much Preethi 😳.

Nisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aisha00

yipeee ...... i was just wonderin why isnt sum1 starting a f.f on d new sumit kumkum nd here u r ......cotinue soon 👏



Thank you so much Aisha 😛.

Nisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanwak

good work
nice to imagine



Thank You 😳

Nisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: payal40

a really good fanfic... please continue soon... will be waiting. 😳



Thanks 😛

Nisha

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

its nice nisha...cont soon..



Thank You

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Posted: 17 years ago
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What's sup Guys? If you guys have ideas please share with me so I can make you guys happy instead of upsetting you guys.

Nisha
Edited by Nisha_106 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sure... plzz do continueee 😊

Liked the part Nishaa 😊 👏

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