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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great Promo
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really great promo plzzzzz contuied your part as well
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: preethi

cont soon nisha now eager to know



I will...continue soon

Thanks

Nisha
Edited by Nisha_106 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetpoorvi

its getting interesting 😉 .....cont soon dear.



Thank you, for your support.

Nisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Janam...Janam Ki Saathi

Part Three

Recap ~ Sharman's eldest daughter is introduce and she is staying with Kumkum and Sumit...

Sumit enters the room and sees Kumkum standing beside the window… A sudden smile appears on his face…. He thinks….

Sumit: (himself) ek din main hi zindagi kitni badal gayi hai…. Aaj mujhe jaise sab kuch mil gaya…. Yeh kamra(looks around the room) jo kal tak sirf Kumkum ka hai aaj woh mera hai…. Humara hai!! (Sumit slowly walks over to Kumkum and slowly takes her name) Kumkum…. (She immediately looks at him) Kumkum main tumse…. (Kumkum places a hand on his lips and he slowly kisses her fingers and gives her a very passionate look…. Kumkum looks down….. The colour rises to her cheeks and they go pink… Sumit sees this and moves a step closer to her…. He bends a bit to give her a peck on her cheeks….. Kumkum shies away and start moving away from him…. As soon as she tries moving away Robbie immediately catches her hand…. And then suddenly pulls her towards him…. Kumkum lands in his arms and he just holds her looking at her passionately….

~ Sharman and Siya's other two daughter are introduces and their character are played by Shubhangi Atre as Kasturi Wadhwa , who is a lawyer by profession and she is engaged with Robbie Sabharwal and (Robbie's character is played by Karan Patel). Sharman's youngest daughter is played by Akangsha Rawat as Shagun Wadhwa and she is normal college going girl and (here is a small video of their introduction and this video is made by me...to go along with this fan-fic) ~

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1C1o1eCiwh8[/YOUTUBE]

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain (Sumit's hands are around Kasturi and he is looking at her intensely with so much love….)
Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain (Kumkum can't take his gaze any more and hides herself in him…. She hugs him and he embraces her back…. They hold on each other gets tighter….)
Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan (Sumit just moves back a bit and kisses her on her shoulder….)
Dhadkan bani zubaan (Kumkum is still holding him and just closes her eyes in the anticipation of what is coming ahead…. Sumit moves back and smiles while looking at her…. )

&nbs p; Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain (She opens her eyes and he sits down on his knees and forwards his hand asking for a dance…..)
&nbs p; Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan (She slowly places her hand on his and he gets up and pulls her closer….)
Dhadkan bani zubaan (They start swaying in each other's arm looking in each other's eyes….)
Baahon ke darmiyaan (Kumkum keeps her head on his chest and closes her eyes while he embraces her and they keep on dancing in this manner for some time….)

Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi (Kumkum is about to ask something when he places his finger on her lips….)
Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi (He then moves his head in a no and Kumkum looks own…..)
Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi (He then kisses her on her cheeks…. And she immediately turns around…)
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan (He then places both his hand on her shoulders and then slowly bends down and kisses her neck…)

Suddenly the phone rings and Sumit comes out of his trance…. He is actually standing in front of the door of Kumkum's room…. He looks at his phone in frustration… and it's his mother… and he picks up the phone.

Sumit's Mother ~ Beta, how are you?

Sumit ~ I'm fine and you

Sumit's Mother ~ How can I be without my son, who left his father's house in proving who is right and wrong, (Sumit's interrupts his mother) – Mom, I know that you are upset with me in leaving the house like this, but Dad has to learn to trust me instead of strangers. Mom…I'll talk with you later.

Sumit hangs up the phone while his mother cries on the other side while putting down the phone.

Afterwards Sumit enters the room and find Kumkum sitting on the bed looking at him with weird expression.

Sumit ~ Kumkum, don't worry nothing will happen between us – you will sleep on the bed and I'll sleep on the ground that I never have done, but everything happens for good so goodnight.

Kumkum just stared at Sumit, who made his bed on the ground while she slept on top of the bed, thinking about the entire events accrued in her life since the day Sumit entered.

Even Sumit was thinking the same…since Kumkum entered in his life everything is making sense to him and he is also getting love of Kumkum's parents that was missing from his life…mainly a father's love that he is getting from Kumkum's father.

Next day, Kasturi was working in her cabin when Robbie Sir enters in (Before anyone gets confused – Kasturi works in her boyfriend's company as the legal adviser and soon they are getting married)

Robbie Sir ~ Kasturi, what are you doing? Let's go out for dinner?

Kasturi ~ Sir, I am going over few important details about our companies' legal matter and I find something isn't right…

Robbie Sir ~ what do you mean?

Kasturi ~ Sir, if you take closer looks at this document (Kasturi showing Robbie the file) you will find many things miss-calculated, over-balance and etc…

Robbie was amazed by what Kasturi discovered and he decides to discuss with his father…Aryan Sabharwal. "How about having dinner now?"

Kasturi looked at Robbie Sir than says "Sorry…I'm booked for this evening with my Sister because we are planning Mom and Dad's surprise party before they come back from London and also my Sister Kaajal was suppose to come by now, but she hasn't so…I have to babysit Shagun, but some other day"

Kasturi was about to leave when Robbie Sir catches her hand…

Sumit was going over some important file that he received by his friend; Sumit was checking over some detail when he realizes that…Ratan is messing up things in his father's company and decides to go back before its too late, but he also can't leave Kumkum here alone or else she will become in a huge mess than never…

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Guys I think I'll stop over here and please do let me know...how I did and after Om is introduce than I'll post second generation sketch along with Sumit and Kumkum's sketch so nobody gets confused of Sumit and Kumkum's grandkids.

Nisha

Edited by Nisha_106 - 17 years ago
AnjaliThapar thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
😛 Wow.... 👏 👏 👏 continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
heyyy niceeeee partt i love it its really cool
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
👏 I just caught up...its mind-blowing

Krishna Patel
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
nisha amazing writting with 2 nd gen and now present
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
hey nisha read ur fc from first and woww it is amazing..keep i up and shr is truly rocking..

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