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Posted: 2 years ago
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Amazing update

Love it

Update soon

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Both of the new updates are awesome. Sorry, I could not comment on your earlier update due to extreme load-shedding & poor internet connection here in my area.

I loved how Riya is taking risks willingly by trapping herself with the kidnapped girls and using her common sense, all her skills & trainings in this mission to save them all. Now, Riya has gained more maturity, strength, guts & confidence because of this training & I'm sure that she is going to show all her skills in this mission & prove herself as a good cop.

ETF & Commando team has also joined their hands for this mission. Hope to read some more real action packed scenes in the next chapters. Tnx for the tag... Will be waiting eagerly to read the next update.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: naaheean

Both of the new updates are awesome. Sorry, I could not comment on your earlier update due to extreme load-shedding & poor internet connection here in my area.

I loved how Riya is taking risks willingly by trapping herself with the kidnapped girls and using her common sense, all her skills & trainings in this mission to save them all. Now, Riya has gained more maturity, strength, guts & confidence because of this training & I'm sure that she is going to show all her skills in this mission & prove herself as a good cop.

ETF & Commando team has also joined their hands for this mission. Hope to read some more real action packed scenes in the next chapters. Tnx for the tag... Will be waiting eagerly to read the next update.

. Thank you for the appreciation. Action packed mujhe zyada nahi ata still will try
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Posted: 2 years ago
#84

Part 11


Ayesha, Barkha and Naina will be the secretary of

Sameer and Mahir who will play a rich businessman.


Arjun and Rajveer will be ready for attacks and will try to get the girls outside .


Shree will play the waiter and chotu will play as one of the guards.


Arjun : Sam after the mission mein riya se milunga. 2 din se usee baat nahi hue hai . . I hope she is fine .

Sameer : ha . She will be fine rawte .


Next morning at 11 am . They were ready . Everything was prepared as per plan .


They were waiting for a signal from Riya as Barkha told them she would .


Sameer : Rajveer who tumhari cadet ?? Unse kaise identify karenge .


Riya had sent a signal wala his track band .


Rajveer : signal aa gaya. Arjun we have to focus on this signal . Sameer yeh bohot hi smart student hai . You will know it soon let’s go team .


They reached the venue.suddenly sanya arrived there before team to start the mission dressed up as a pretty lady .


Sameer: Sanya what are you doing here ??

Sanya : sir I can help .. I have created a background of my company and track records . I have the invite too.

Ayesha : this is not the part of the plan . Upar se it could be dangerous.

Sanya : so what Ayesha . I am part of etf and I will do whatever it takes help my team .

In her mind ( I have to save Riya too )


Rajveer : ok fine you go first and get inside . They wore message transmitting bands to communicate which look like smart watches.



Here Riya and other girls got ready for the show . They saved all their anger for the required minute.


Riya had given a medicine to Savita and explained that once she takes she will vomit within 10 mins .


When the gang leader came and saw Riya he was very much impressed with her beauty .

He decided to present riya last so that he could get most expensive deal for her.


Gang leader was smart too . He was also prepared for any kind of nuisance that can be created .


The fashion show started and all the girls were sold accept Riya . Savita took the medicine as guided and riya walked the stage .


Etf was shocked to see riya there . They never in their dreams thought riya could be the one .


Rajveer : team this is our cadet . Cadet Riya .

Arjun looked sharply towards Rajveer .

Arjun: riya yahan ??


He immediately shouted on micro phone arjun : Sam is it my riya ??

Sameer : ha arjun it’s our Riya .

Rajveer : you know her ??

Arjun: she is my wife . Ofcourse I know her . As usual apni jaan khatre mein dal Di isne.


Riya was also quick to identify sanya , Ayesha and Naina and gave them a wining nod .


Sameer : team Riya has identified us . Rajveer Arjun it’s time for attack .

Sanya : team wait . Let me get in touch with Riya . She bet the most expensive price and Riya was with sanya .


Sanya explained the plan to her . Riya gave assuring nod .


After all the girls were sold . Music started .

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Posted: 2 years ago
#85

Heeyy 🎉 I am first. First of all thank you for the wonderful story. Maine puri story aaj hi padhi h . And this is super awesome trust me. And chapter 11 to bilkul bhi expected nahi tha abhi mai online aayi thi to request you that jab bhi tum next part dalo mujhe bhi pm kar dena but got chapter 11 thank you again. Ab please mujhe pm kar dena waise to I'll be checking fir bhi.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#86

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

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Posted: 2 years ago
#87

Wonderful update🤗 Punku ☺

Just loved it

So Riya is all set to fight the monsters & her team is really on toes to get her out of the situation 👍

Arjun too is really curious to meet Riya right after the mission but he hardly knows that he will find her in the mission itself ☺

Team is all set to attack & now in the middle of the mission Arjun is stunned to see Riya there & more shocking fact for Riya instructor was that Arjun is her husband 😂

Waiting for more👍

Thanks for the 🔖

Continue soon 😂


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Posted: 2 years ago
#88

Nice update

Arjun is eagerly waiting to talk to riya

Arjun line was superb once he noticed riya.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Superb part

Angry Arjun in action 💪

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Posted: 2 years ago
#90

Awesome part...loved it very much...❤️❤️❤️

All are ready for their mission.

Arjun is very much excited and eager to meet & talk to "his" Riya...😊

Instructors of commando team became surprised as they got to know about Riya being Arjun's wife.

And, what's the real motive of this Sanya? Why she is interested to save Riya? Earlier I thought, she herself may be involved with this trafficking racket but now in this chapter she herself joined ETF & Commando team in this mission suddenly, without having any prior discussion with them as well as risking her life to save Riya and the kidnapped girls.

Continue soon...will be waiting eagerly to read ahead. Tnx for tagging me.

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