#3# Ariya Ff: Agni sa pavitra- final part page 28 - Page 7

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago
#62

Awesome updt

Riya gave surprise to Arjun on his b'day❤️

Arjun missing Riya

Cont soon

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wah....kya chapter tha, I loved it soo much. Yeh Sanya ki bina chapter and Ariya ki bich ka badhta pyar sach mein amazing tha. Continue soon...and tnx a lot 4 tagging me. Will be waiting to read more.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#64

Beautiful update Pinku dear

Just loved it 🤗

Riya is trying her level best to manage her training as well as her marital relationship with Arjun & both are trying & supporting each other ☺

Riya had planned a wonderful Birthday surprise for Arjun as it was his first birthday after marriage & Team too got involved in the surprise ☺

Even Riya parents were happy to see her like this with Arjun giving her 100% to their relationship

Waiting for mission

Thanks for the🔖 tag

Continue soon🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Awesome one

What a surprise arjun got from riya

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Awesome update

Love it

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Part 9


Party went on full swing . Riya got up very early morning and left for Nasik .

Arjun and Riya were counting days to be together . There was some strong feeling they felt and couldn’t stay away from each other .


In the academy , she made friends with Barkha , Alex , Sameera and Sid. Barkha was from Nasik itself so sometimes Riya used to go to her house too.


One day Barkha was worried when she came back from home .

Riya : all good Barkha ?? Pareshan lag Rahi hoon .

Barkha : ek baat toh hai Riya . I don’t understand should I take it seriously or not ??

Riya : esa kya hua ?

Barkha: Riya you know Savita Meri help .

Riya : ha

Barkha : Riya jis area mein wooh rehti hai Wahan se 2 ladkiyan gayab hai . ( Radha aur Shanno)

Riya : what gayab ?? Ese kaise ??

Barkha : Riya wooh Savita keh Rahi thi ki koi factory mein kaam karti hai pass mein . Wooh log blankets banate hai. Uska Kehna hai ki pechle 2 months mein yeh sab hua hai .

Riya: but kisiko toh pata hoga ?? Koi fir police complaint kuch toh kiya hoga uski family ne .

Barkha: nahi un 2 ladkiyon ki toh shaadi hone wali thi aur yeh baat fail gai ke wooh dono kisi aur ke saath bhag gai . Unki family ke liye notes chodke.

Riya : this can’t be just coincidence Barkha . 2 ladkiyan ese missing hona is not possible. no Barkha yeh koi Mamuli situation nahi hai tum Savita ko warn kar do ke wooh Dhyan Rahe aur aas pass nazar rakhe.


Barkha called up Savita and did the needful and they headed for training .


In the evening Riya and Barkha took special permission to go out .


Barkha reached Savita place and had a word with her .

Riya : dekho Savita tum sambhal kar Raho . Yeh Jo bhi situation hai wooh dangerous ho sakti hai.

Savita : ha Didi par yeh Meri dost hai aur mujhe yaken hai Meri dost ese bhag nahi sakti.

Barkha: savita ankh aur kaan khule rakhna.

Savita : ji didi


Riya and Barkha started walking and observed the places .


Someone in the corner : sir 2 ladkiyan hai joh Radha aur Shanno ke barein mein baat kar Rahi thi . Savita khatra Banti ja Rahi hai .

Boss: nazar Rakho . Abhi thoda aur time lagega.


Riya: Barkha we are being followed.

Barkha : how come ?

Riya: mujhe Kisine kaha tha Barkha akh aur Kaan Khule rakhne chahiye .

Barkha : of course how come I forgot it .. but cadet Riya .

Riya : let’s take a selfie yaar . I have never been to such places .

Riya and Barkha took a selfie .

Riya and Barkha decided to inform it to their seniors.


Reporting trainers:


Head trainer - major rajveer Singh

Subordinate 1-captain Naina sikhavat

Subordinate 2- captain Mahir Raina.


Major rajveer: how come you went there without intimating us?? It could be dangerous. You are our responsibility. Cadet Riya and cadet Barkha how could be this careless.


Riya: sir with due respect, I m sorry to break the decorum of the institute but we wanted to be sure before telling you anything .


Barkha: sir Savita is my house-help . It’s my fault I dragged Riya into it.


Riya : Sir we got some proofs. We were also being followed by someone so I got his pic while taking a selfie.


Rajveer: good job cadets but this is your last warning . You will not be going there alone . Naina take care.


Naina : sir I will.


Mahir: I will get the info cross checked and we will also put the place under surveillance if required.


Suddenly Barkha’ s phone beeped and it was message from Savita.


Savita: didi aap Sahi thi yeh log kuch aur hi hai ,Meri jaan khatre main…


And before she could say further.. they heard a cry for help..

Barkha : sir… Savita.


Mahir: let’s go to the plan room.


Rajveer: Naina get team ready . We might have to go on a mission right now.


Riya: sir we will come with you .

Mahir: no Riya we can’t take cadets on mission till training is completed.


Barkha : sir mission par ayenge toh commando banenge.


Mahir : we said no means no . Go back to your rooms .


Riya And Barkha did as said .


Naina : sir jaldi ayeye . Savita ke phone ka last signal is shown near the mill where the other girls worked.



Back to etf Mumbai … they were on back to back cases. Riya was busy with Savita’s disappearance and couldn’t call Arjun . Here Arjun was trying to reach out to her but her phone was on silent .


Sam: arjun come ek lead hai .

Arjun texted Riya . -call me once you are free . Take care .

Arjun : Sam lead kisne beji. ??

Sameer: sanya ko mili hai . Ek informer se .

Arjun: are you sure uski tip ko trust kiya jay ?

Sameer: it’s a tip arjun we need to check it. Tumhe sanya se kya problem hai ? Riya se thik se baat nahi hue hai kya ??

Arjun looked angrily at Sam .

Arjun: ha kal se try kar Raha hu . Koi jawab nahi . I hope wooh thik ho .

Sameer: she will be fine arjun . Training mein busy hogi it’s her last month there.


Someone over heard that . And made a call .

Riya Mukherjee par nazar Rakho.


Precap : mission

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Posted: 2 years ago
#68

Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful part 🤗

So the mission is in the way & innocent girls are on their target ... Riya too got involved in this thou unknowingly but there is a big twist on the way

Arjun too is bit suspicious as he couldn't speak to Riya & there is lot of things going on near her hopefully this case is solved on time

Waiting for more

Thanks for the tag 🔖

Keep writing✍️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Glitter_Goldie

Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful part 🤗

So the mission is in the way & innocent girls are on their target ... Riya too got involved in this thou unknowingly but there is a big twist on the way

Arjun too is bit suspicious as he couldn't speak to Riya & there is lot of things going on near her hopefully this case is solved on time

Waiting for more

Thanks for the tag 🔖

Keep writing✍️

. Goldie thank you so much for this beautiful and long reply . It takes me to good old days when we used to fight who will comment first . You keep the memories alive
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Superb update

Love it

Cont soon

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