DhruvTara - I WILL FIND YOU fs Completed - Page 6

Whatever I read in all the following chapters just was playing like all the visualization peered through my brain and envisioned through my eyes ❤️

U write with ur heart on ur sleeve ❤️

Emotional turmoil to breakdown to acceptance and regrets and logical interpretation, u have written everything wonderfully 👏👏

I'm eagerly looking forward to read more ☺️

Update soon!!

Love

Jen🤗

DM me whenever. I do not mind brainstorming at all!🤗

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

Whatever I read in all the following chapters just was playing like all the visualization peered through my brain and envisioned through my eyes ❤️

U write with ur heart on ur sleeve ❤️

Emotional turmoil to breakdown to acceptance and regrets and logical interpretation, u have written everything wonderfully 👏👏

I'm eagerly looking forward to read more ☺️

Update soon!!

Love

Jen🤗

Thank You! The update is on the way.

Originally posted by: BUSH146

Yrr sbse pehele to tumhari english ....👏It's Amazing dear , ekdum high level ki english use krti ho tum , mujhe kitna kuch sikhne milaa isse bro
Well written👏

And now about the story ,
it was just loved.....❤️
U had taken very small emotions of tara , sukanya , bhaiji and even rajvaidyaji ...👍🏼

And most importantly, My fav bonds bhaiji and taru, sukanya and dhruv usse kitna achche se execute kiya yrr tumne

These are my Favorite bonds too❤️

dhruv ki condition was sessibly written , not like the show , bina sar aur per ki trh...

Show ki baat na hi kare toh acha hai.

At last , just
Kudoos to your story 👏

Thank You Bush❤️.

Tara -sukku scene is so emotional and heart touching ❤️

Tumhari story me sab ka dimag sahi salamat hai ye bohot badi bat hai mere liye 👍🏼

Tara ne jis savageness ke sath directly mana kar diya chirkut se shadi karne ke liye yahi courage dekhna tha muze 👏👏

king ne apne promise ke over beti ki Ichha ko importance diya that's like a good father 👍

Senapati ko Tara se thappad pada

Hopefully aapke next part ya epilogue jo bhi hai usme Dhruv babu thik ho jaye 🤞

Hamesha ki tarah awesome writing with lots of emotions👏 thanks dear 🤗

Finally truth came out in front of everyone 😌 tara sukku scene is so emotional & heart touching ....

Macchar ko do chaar thappad aur marti meri taraf sa bhi .....

As usual your writing is so awesome waiting for the next part & dhruv waking up & waiting for dhruv tara reunion...

👏👏
Waise bola tha mene teri taarif km hogi , pr chl koi naa kr deti , actually u deserves it behna..

sukanya and tara scenes are just🤗

Dumbraj ka sahi character to tumne likha , akkal aayi ismein ,

Mujhe ye wala chomu pasand hai yrr🤣🤣

I really loved DT dream sequences "❤️

Surely last part me DT milan will be Gonna great ..

Eagerly waiting ,
Der mat krna , update kr dena😆

Dhruv aur sukku ❤️,aur sukku Dhruv ko bhaiji bula rahi h😍

Mahaveer speaking up for Tara , and Maharaj considered it 🥲 Itni khusi bardaasht na ho payegi 🥱

Tara bhi apne pyaar ke liye stand liya directly no bol diya , vaise aapki Tara to pehle se hi bohot samajhdaar h vo rotlu Dumbkumari nahi h👍🏼

Senapati ne apni saari Pol Patti khud hi khol di , ye unexpected tha😕

Aur senapati ko thappad 🥳.Lekin ek kyu atleast per person do thappad to bnta tha.😆.Par Ab bus Dhruv ka intzaar h .

Thanks for the update👍 .Your chapter is great as always , loved your writing.👏

I will find time to read this ❤️ coming soon 😳