Kal Ho Na Ho - OS - Page 2

I swear that family deserves all that happened to them.

Though personally, I don't mind the Angad these days. I hope the whole khulaasa happens soon so that we can finally move on!

Wonderful...

Like that brars are given a truly classy treatment naturally in your story.. if only justice was this quick in real life.. amazing read..

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

wow so beautiful..i have no words to describe. You have written a complete story in this just one shot.

amazing.loved it and i am happy you wrote after such a long time. its always a pleasure to read your stories

Hey! Yeah, this took a while to complete! I wanted it to give sahiba her well deserved due along with reforming Santosh a bit now that she doesn’t have any insecurities, while punishing the bad apples!

Originally posted by: Az07

What wrong I did I was not tagged for such a beautiful story😭
I cannot express in words how much I loved this story. A much awaited sequel to Dil le Lagu Patola Ludhiana di. You have no idea how much I loved to see Sahiba walking out from a toxic relationship. Not only with Angad but also with Seerat too. Sahiba had made her dream come true. To become a world renowned artist. To take her art to every corner of the world. Keerat is now a successful IPS officer. So eventually both Ranjha and Heer fall in love and decided to get hitched. I so love how proud veer was when he was speaking about his lady love. Indeed keerat is a gem. I so loved he spoked truth even if it hurts his paaji. It was so thoughtful of veer not to stay in Brar mansion after there marriage. He very well knows what Sahiba meant for keerat and she cannot bare to tolerate Angad, Seerat or Garry who torched Sahiba. He is not the egoistic one who has issues in staying his wife’s quarters. So glad to see Jaspal Gurleen supporting there son and dil. I so so loved that Garry Seerat is suffering from AIDS (am I being a psycho who finds happiness in someone’s disease) and so so so happy to see Angad regretting and truly living a bhoj wali relationship with his Seerat ji. Angad the chronic bachelor 🤣
I so so so love you for showing all premarital rituals for our cutie pie veerat. I loved sahiba’s Mirza & Keerat’s Miju. He is truly a gentleman. Manbir got a shock of life by hearing Sahiba’s engagement news. That lady’s audacity to think Sahiba will be mourning for her useless son. Serves well. I so admire this new version of santhu. It’s true the exact revenge is to kick people with truth when they regret there actions. Then only they will understand the depth of pain they have caused others. Keerat is still the jhalli. I think it’s better some people remain same. Sahiba’s mehendi I loved it. The sweet romantic moment she shared with her true love was ❤️ As Sahiba said Angad’s belated apology doesn’t make sense. She doesn’t want to keep even the relation of hatred with him. even hatred remains as a baggage of the past. So you don’t want to carry it when you move on.

Sorry it became so long post. But I couldn’t express the happiness of seeing Sahiba moving on, Angad and Seerat suffering & cuties veerat getting married 🥰

Hey there!

I love long posts, so don’t apologize! Now you’re my buddy, you won’t miss out on being tagged! 😂

Honestly, I feel we have regressed in TV. When we advocated to get a divorce from toxic relationships in a classic remake like Saraswatichandra, why are we tolerating abusive behavior now?

Veer is a sensible guy. He’s known Keerat for so long, having seen every facet of her personality. This makes one realize what a mature guy he is. Yes, he’s got no ego, as he’s secure in himself.

sadistic self on Serry: well with the lifestyle that Garry lived, AIDS is def not surprising! And Seerat bring pea sized, would never have bothered about protecting herself against such diseases as she was sure she was going to marry Garry! Angad got lucky probably due to whatever good he’s done in this life!

Additionally, if there are people like Manveer, then there sare also folks like Mirza and Gurleen to keep the balance!

Originally posted by: serialfreek14

This was such a beautiful one!!!

Aside from being a SahAn fan, I really couldn't help but wonder what would Sahiba's freedom look like..... But truly this is exactly how I pictured it!!!

Loved reading it... ❤️✨

I would honestly love to see her pursue academics and be financially free!

Just wow! I am really at a loss of words. This was your best OS till now I feel. Such a realistic and wishful for most of the viewers scenario played out. Everything was woven so beautifully. Every end was closed properly. I loved it. Would love to read shots of Mirza and Sahiba in continuation to this. Great going! Continue to write and keep giving us such delicacies to read.😍

Yes Yes Yes~~~~~~

P.S. I will come back for a detailed review! But this was so good!

I'm Back! This was great! Angad had me annoyed, angry and whatnot with whatever is going in the show rn! Hence the entry of new life partner was perfect! Seerat got her dues! AND that's the best thing ever!

Just amazing Averma! ❤️

What an absolutely delightful piece of work.

This is what I want for Sahiba, the unadulterated joy of living on her own terms. The success and love she deserves.

Your works are always a pleasure to read and this was my favorite amongst all I read.❤️

Originally posted by: NidhaA

What an absolutely delightful piece of work.

This is what I want for Sahiba, the unadulterated joy of living on her own terms. The success and love she deserves.

Your works are always a pleasure to read and this was my favorite amongst all I read.❤️

Thank you for your lovely words! This OS came from the frustration I saw on TV, hence decided to write something that would give me peace of mind: a kind, considerate and intelligent businessman who actually uses his brains as a partner for Sahiba. Someone helps you improve, not degrade you!