Hey guys.How r u all.I hope u all r fine.n now let me tell u my name is adeena.i m new to forum,new as a member but as a guest i was viewing this forum n reading comments since a long time.finally i decided to register n be a part of this cool forum.i had watched love story.the show was cool,great,lovely n all.
guys i m very fond of writing stories.so i was working on two fanfics from many days.n now i thought of posting them.please keep ur support with me n do tell me whether my writing is worth being liked or not.Thank u.
ok guys.but first let me tell u my fics main characters r shruti n dev.sorry guys but i had always liked dev more than akaash.i hope anyone wud not mind.everyone has own choice i guess.
ok guys.i have one more interesting news that in my one fic dev has a very rude,senseless,spoiled brat type character n in other fic total opposite,in other fic he has a charater sweet of sweets,loving,caring,helpful n all.so do tell me which one u like more😉
can say treat for dev n shruti s fans.but akaash s fans dont feel bad.i ll surely come wid some of his stuff later.but only writing in stuff,u see this s the only thing in which m not so bad.
alright lets start.
FANFICTION
That was a very dark night.seemed as if a night darker than this have never arrived before.wearing a black jeans,maron shirt n brown lather jacket,he was driving in his red ferrari.that was a very cold n chilled night as well but his side window was open n chilled air was flying his hairs away.but he was driving very comfortably as if he was not feeling any cold.english music was on in car in full volume.he was starring at the empty road ahead him.his mobile was constantly ringing on the deck of car.n then call ended n after a minute cell s light flashed again.he took the phone in hand n opened the message just received on cell.that was his dad,who was constantly calling before n he did not received.now he sent a message written as DEV.WHERE R U?I WANT U TO BE HERE IN THE PARTY.COME SOON.
Dev read the message n then without any reply or response,he threw the cell on the seat beside him in irritation.n then again he was starring on road lost in some thinking.n then at the full speed running ferrari happened to stop when he suddenly put his foot on break without slowing the speed down.car stopped with a jerk.he remained sitting there for a while.then he turned the music off. great music volume vanished n a complete silence took its place.
he came out of the car after a while.his cell was again ringing.he left it there in the car n moved on to the building ahead him.that was his farm house.he entered the building.going through the lounge he entered in a corridor.n there he saw mrs merrine,the housemaid,sitting there.
dev- tum ja sakti ho.
after dev s arrival,she was supposed to go to outhouse where she used to sleep.she step forward but stopped near him.dev looked at her wid questioning look.she spoke hesitantly.
maid- sir.ap k liye sarah chaudary ka phone aaya tha.woh ap se milna chahti hein.
she was lying now.but she had to do it.she did not think when her lie is proven to dev,what ll be of her,she just wanted to save that innocent girl inside the room where dev was supposed to go in next few minutes.
dev- i dont wanna see her face.agar aainda uska phone ya woh khud aaye toh tell her that.ok.
he took a step forward towards the room when she again spoke
maid- sir....ap ka dost vicky bhi aaya tha.ap ko kisi party k liye invite karne.
that were her second lie.she wanted if she could succeed in her plan at any expense.there was nothing new,he always came here to spend nights wid different girls n mrs merrine hated those girls who came here wid there own consent.n always felt pity n bad for those who were brought without their consent n tonight there was an innocent girl for whom mrs merrine were supposed to feel pity but after seeing her it was not only pity or she was not just feeling bad for that girl,there was such innocence on her face that she felt like escaping her from here at any expense.
dev was annoyed now.she was disturbing him now.he was about to say something harsh when a thought cliked his mind
dev- woh yahan kyon aaya tha,ghar kyon nahi gaya mujhe bulane.khair mein aj kahin nahi ja raha hon.agar woh aaye toh usse bhi keh dena aur ab jao yahan se.
when mrs merrine saw all her efforts going in vein,she finally decided to say
maid- sir.uss bachi ko janey do.
dev turned to give her a harsh look.
maid- please sir.uss ki halat theek nahi hai.uss ne ro ro kar apni halat haraab kar li hai.
dev- tum se kisi ne mashvara nahi manga hai.jao yahan se.
she did not know what to say now.she just looked at the closed door of the room with sorrow.
dev- i said just get lost.
this time dev shouted in loud voice.she had nothing to do except obeying the order.she lowered her head n went to the outhouse.dev stayed there for a while to calm him down.normally when he used to come here,he used to be intocxted by the bear.but tonight may b first time he was in full conciousness. then he moved forward,opened the door of the room n went inside.he turned n closed the door after entering the room.n then he turned n saw.there she was sitting on the bed besides the wall with her hands fastened on the back.the room was quiet large but as he entered n the door locked,shruti felt that she s completely fastened in his grip n no space to b free at all.dev stepped forward,removed his jacket n throw it on the sofa placed at some distance from the bed.then he turned n took step forward towards his bed. as he took first step ahead,shruti s heart started sinking.n she was praying with all the depth of soul that please God save me from this rude,insensitive person. dev sat there on the bed,bent down n started opening his jogger s laces.then he took water jug n filled the glass with some water.took some water n then he put his feet up on the bed.shruti was being horrified more n more with each second moving on.she again tried to free her hands.but in vain.how she rememberred her mom n akaash at that moment.her heart saying, mamma kya aap ko pata nahi chal raha k aap ki beti kitni mushkil mein hai,please mere pass aa jao mamma,i need u...akaash...akaash please come n save ur shruti.
the tears filled her eyes as she rememberred akaash lying on the hospital bed,unconcious.then she felt some move near her.she looked up.dev was sitting quiet near her.her teary eyes were not hidden from him.suddenly he started moving up n going near her.his face was just few cms from hers.shruti closed her eyes tightly in horror n helplessness as eagle used to close its eyes when sees cat coming towards,in hope that by closing eyes danger may pass on.dev extended his hands n free shruti s hands which was not fastened by string,but may b it was a steel band.just a click n the band was away from her wrists.dev moved back n again sat there. shruti opened her eyes.she slowly moved her hands in front of her.there were little marks on her wrists n a very little pain.dev was sitting there with a stern face.shruti looked at him so he spoke with that stern face as well.
dev- what happened.aj tumhein ghussa nahi aa raha hai.aj kuch nahi kaho gi mujhe.kuch nahi sunao gi aur haan...thappar bhi nahi maro gi.
suddenly he took her right wrist in his strong grip with a jerk that shruti felt much pain.
shruti- ahh....
dev s stern expression was now changed into fumming anger.
dev- come on slap me naa.
shruti- dev.....
horrified with pain she was about to say something when dev said,
dev- sshhhh.dont say even a word.aaj sirf mein bolon ga aur tum suno gi.understand.
his strong grip was like iron on her delicate wrist n he said her to remain quite in such harsh tone that if there were someone in normal condition,he wud not dare to speak.but she had to speak for the pain was going unbearable.
shruti- dev.u r hurting me.
dev- acha.aur jo tum ne mujhe hurt kia hai aj tak,uss ka kya.
shruti- i m sorry k mein ne tumhare saath bura behave kiya but dev tum samajte kyon nahi k mein tum se pyar nahi karti.meri akaash k saath engagement ho chuki hai aur mein ussi se.....
dev- dont worry about that.aj k baad tum kisi aur se pyar karna toh durr kisi aur k bare mein socho gi bhi nahi.
shruti was now crying.there was no way to escape.she did not remember she had done something so wrong so that she had to get punishment like this.she was now complaining to God what had she done so that,this has to happen with her.he let go of her hand now.
shruti- dev...please let me go.mein ne tumhara kya bigara hai.why r u doing this to me?
she was now saying between tears.there was plead,horror,sorrow n helplessness in her voice,that could make anyone s heart to melt but dev...he is dev,not a normal human being but a psyco.
he was now looking pleased as if enjoying her helplessness.
shruti- please let me go....
she was saying.dev went near her n this time she pushed him back with her both hands.
shruti- no.
he was still smiling n again moved forward going near her.the night was being darker more n more with each second passing on n she was crying more n more with each second passing on.......
okkk guys.thats it for now.please dont kill me after reading this😆
n do tell how s it.
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