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adeena

@cool_adeena

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Posted: 17 years ago

#61

okk guys i ve finished it finally.please guys i request to all of u whoever read it,please comment for one final time.please for once tell that how do u like it.how was it.if u guys give a detailed review then it ll be great.so please try to give detail review that which part u liked most or which part i ve not written well.it ll help me improve my writing.please guys its a request that all of u comment for once,final time n ur final review n if u give detailed review then it ll be great.thank u😛

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sona

@sona.b

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Posted: 17 years ago

#62

Hyeeeeee Adeena

nice to see u after longtime ...how ru???

i was truely wating for this Climax part

Thankssss for this Lovely FF

u hav soo well included all emotion into it

as previous even this part was intresting to read

Dev,s death was sad part .................😭

and offcourse Aakash Shruti romance part just awsome .☺️...i was so lost in reading that part ki ,story kab end hogayi pata hi nahi chala ....😃

this lines are sooo perfect for lover like dev

zindagi mein toh sabhi pyaar kiya kartey hein,

mein toh marr kar bhi meri jaan tumhein chahoon ga..............

and finaly as LS forum closed i hop we will be in touch through ur FF

wishing to read many more fo ur FF😊

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adeena

@cool_adeena

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Posted: 17 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sona.b
Hyeeeeee Adeena
nice to see u after longtime ...how ru???

i was truely wating for this Climax part

Thankssss for this Lovely FF

u hav soo well included all emotion into it

as previous even this part was intresting to read

Dev,s death was sad part .................😭

and offcourse Aakash Shruti romance part just awsome .☺️...i was so lost in reading that part ki ,story kab end hogayi pata hi nahi chala ....😃

this lines are sooo perfect for lover like dev

zindagi mein toh sabhi pyaar kiya kartey hein,

mein toh marr kar bhi meri jaan tumhein chahoon ga..............

and finaly as LS forum closed i hop we will be in touch through ur FF

wishing to read many more fo ur FF😊

Thank u soooooo much😛😛😛

i loved ur comments😛

yeah even i was lost writing that AS last scene😃

n yeah that ghazal is quiet cute n sad.when u listen to it singing,then it sounds more effective....sad sad😭

n yeah sure i ll keep writing.infact i ve just prepared my next FF..that ll be on AS...i ll start it soon n ll give the link here n also in the AS fanclub😊

thank u sooo much once again for ur support n encouragement that u gave me throughout this FF.....i love u😛😛😛......n yeah keep ur support with me in future also😊