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Posted: 2 years ago
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Thank you Rosy ♥️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sinmegh

Nice poetry but don’t be sad about Sai n virat being nadi ke kinare .. these days dams and barrage and thermal power plants sab kuch possible hai ..

so lets be optimistic.. ek big sa thermal power plant bana denge .. energy will be harnessed properly and the river banks will meet and good crops will grow .. rice , jute , sugarcane .. matlab , Vinayak , Savi , Bianca ❤️❤️❤️


Rehne do..


Itna logic nahi lagaate aj...


Aj ka logic quota khatam 😝

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Extremely beautiful!!

But somehow I am unable to imagine Sairat in this essence of the poetry.

Nevertheless, it’s extremely beautiful.

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Posted: 2 years ago
#14

Thank you very much!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This is a beautiful poem. So not applicable to Sairat tho

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Beautiful DD!! Loved it ❤️

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Originally posted by: daydreamers

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Kinaaron ki qismat mein milna likha hi kaha tha

Unhe toh bas durr rehkar

Nadi ko nihaarna tha.

Farz sirf dusron ke liye nibhaana tha

Kinaaron ki qismat mein milna likha hi kaha tha.


Woh toh bas nadi ko behte dekha

Laga hum bhi beh jaayenge

Behte behte kahi mil bhi jayenge

Par kya pata tha kinaaron ka behna namumkin tha.


Agar beh jaate kinaare toh nadi ka kya hota?

Na wajood rehta, na pehchaan

Kinaaro se hi nadi ka bahaav hain

Kinaaro se hi nadi ki disha


Agar do kinaare mil jaate kabhi toh disha na bhatakti nadi humari?

Phir bhi baithe baithe khayaal aaya

Agar kinaaro ki qismat mein milna likha hota toh sab kitna alag hota!


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Kash mil jayein kinare kabhi...nadi ki qismat bhi shayd badal jaati!!

Behna aur bas sabko dete jaana....koi nadi k liye bhi kuch detaa!!

Safar thaka deta hogaa naa😭😭

@daydreamers it's just fantabulous 👍🏼👏👏

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Posted: 2 years ago
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You're so talented dd ...this is so beautiful 😍😍😍😍.

You should write more and more poetries❤️

Thanks for the tag

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Pehle tum aur aj main

Alag raahon par chal toh diye


Kuch faisle akele kar hi liye

Anjaam kya hoga

Khabar na thi kabhi

Laga tha lautne ke raastein band ho gaye

Aj ek mod aaya hain

Rukne ka ek mauka mila hain


Pehle tum aur aj main

Alag raahon par chal toh diye


Soch toh phir bhi ghum hain

Kuch kehne ki himmat bhi nahi hain

Raahein toh alag ho chuki thi

Par aj pata nahi kyun main ruk gayi

Sawaalon ka waqt shayad guzar gaya

Jawabon mein kuch naya nahi mila


Pehle tum aur aj main

Alag raahon par chal toh diye


Guzre waqt ke panne agar khole

Toh sirf dard hi haasil hoga

Par unn panno mein basi kahaani

Ka mitna kaise mumkin hoga?

Mit jaati agar kabhi toh aj hum aise na hote

Vaadon ke bawandar mein itne bure uljhe na hote


Pehle tum aur aj main

Alag raahon par chal toh diye


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Posted: 2 years ago
#20

Amazing DD... how beautiful 😍

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