' Dafan Hui Zindagi ' (Hindi Poem)

Hi friends,

I love to write poems and hope u enjoy reading them as well. Any issue that touches me I try to put across in a form of poem.. Hope the poem does touch u some way...

WOW! 👏 Mindblowing poem yaar! so deep and touching..i loved it! It's on a good topic too. the injustice being done to girls.... wow ur rly good at writing poems bhoomi. keep up the great work! 😉

awesome bhoomi. u are a wondeerful writer. u have explained everything so simply . Just too good. want some more good works from u.

Originally posted by: indigal07

WOW! 👏 Mindblowing poem yaar! so deep and touching..i loved it! It's on a good topic too. the injustice being done to girls.... wow ur rly good at writing poems bhoomi. keep up the great work! 😉

Hi.... I am glad u felt it was touchign enough.. ya the topic of thei poem the theeme is the essence.. i had actually written this logn time back when i read abotu the way the doctor in punjab had thrown killed and dump the foetus of female as women aborted and thrown them in the guttar behind... around 200 female foetus.. hurrifyign story it was... it touched me and i wrote this poem...

am glad u appreicated my work.. dont know whether i am really good.. but its the thought that matters to me.. tc

Originally posted by: golu_1677

awesome bhoomi. u are a wondeerful writer. u have explained everything so simply . Just too good. want some more good works from u.

Hi Golu dear.... hope u doign well..

ab ek writer dure ko keh raha hai.. that i am good.. i take that as a g8 compliment... yup tried to project wahtevr i felt.....glad yar u liked reading.. and loved it... sure will try to share my work .. but sensitive issues so i get a bit hesistant...will so though..u tc

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

mind blasting amazing poem

Hi Jyothi,

am glad u liked it... mind blasting.. i was laughign reading this adjective.. for this poem... ...😆..utc