The impolite gestures - one shot

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The impolite gestures - one shot



Rupinder Sandhu's 60 th birthday celebrations were organised in a grand ceremony by his family. Whole Moga including Kapoor's were invited.


Everything went on well. All guests enjoyed the buffet dinner provided. There was music and dance as well.

Nehmat danced a while with her family and then suddenly her attention went towards her husband who arrived at the party a little later. He gave excuses of having some unfinished work to settle.


She froze !

Oh no!.


Rupi introduced advait to a few guests. Nehmat looked around.

No one noticed. I have to do something before someone did

She dialled his number to alert him But his phone was switched off.


She decided to walk towards him but Shelly interrupted pulling her back to the dance floor. She danced for a few seconds still eyeing him

God! I hope no one noticed.


She excused herself and again tried walking towards him to alert him but he was surrounded by a few male guests. A hand held her arm. It was her mother in law

" Kahan ja rehi ho Nehmat. Advait is waqt busy hain. Dikhai nehin deta. Go and enjoy with ur family ".

Mrs shamsher pulled her back to the dance floor giving harsh looks.

" Stay away from my son. He is busy with guests".


She panicked. What shall i do now

Suddenly an idea pop in her mind. She was reluctant at first but that was the only way she could get his attention.


She moved towards a quiet corner so no one noticed her. Standing behind a pillar to keep her covered especially from the fierce mother in law


She waved towards him .

At first he didn't notice as he was too indulged in the convo discussed by the men.

She didn't give up easily and tried a few times and finally he noticed but a puzzle look on his face..

Why is she waving at me?.

He turned to look behind. Was it someone else maybe Ekam??

But there was no one visible.

She pointed her fore finger towards him signalling i am waving at u

He pointed his thumb towards his chest to confirm if it was him

Then she sway her arm indicating

Come here!


The confused husband.

Why she wants me to meet her??

His eyes searched around for her ex. Maybe she wants to tell me something about Ekam.

Well , i am not interested.


He ignored her gesture and started chatting with the guests again.

She sighed.

What a stubborn egoistic brat?


She waved again.

As much as he tried ignoring, he was distracted at the same time.

Then she pointed her forefinger downwards.

He looked down towards the floor? There was nothing

She frowned.

Not the floor,


She recalled her grandma Sati's words .

Men become hornier after marriage. They easily get lured. U want their attention then just lure them to u.


She took a deep breath.

This was the only attempt she could make.


She waved again. He looked towards her.

Then she gave him a flying kiss


He stood in horror with eyes wide open.

Oh my God!

Now she's giving a flying kiss


Instantly, he turned to see if Ekam was standing anywhere nearby him . But he wasn't. Ekam attended the occasion but in a uniform. He was invited the very last minute by Rupi himself who requested for a security to be placed at the party as some political figures would be attending.


She pointed her forefinger towards him indicating the flying kiss is for u

He stood, surprised.

Yeh chal kya raha hain. This is absurd.

She knew how we got married yet she's being cheeky.

She sighed.

The attempts were not good enough. She has to do something drastic.

Then she turned her back towards him and shifted her long silky hair to the side exposing the backless blouse of her lehenga showing off to him her bare back

The stunned husband

Yeh sab kya ho raha hain.

He started freaking out. Part of him was annoyed with her impolite gestures but the other part wanted more. He was getting lured

He stood still watching the fair glowing skin right from below her neck towards her waist. That attractive feminism send chills in his body.

God, why is she doing this!


Yes, he was getting lured. She sighed a relief. But still he wasn't approaching her

She dropped her dupatta on the floor fully exposing the front feminism.

She was beautiful. He was amazed.

Yet he stood frozen .


It irked her. Why isn't he coming?


She didn't realize two pair of angry eyes were watching her from another corner.

Her ex. Ekam Randawa.

I knew it. Both of them were having an affair. Today my thoughts became true.

He left the party out of a sudden, pissed with his ex's tantrums little realising the actual truth behind her deeds


The husband was taken aback with his wife's impolite gestures but didn't react.

He struggled within himself to keep his hormones under control .

She wooed him trying to awake the sleeping lion.


Realising he wasn't approaching, she continued the impolite gestures

She pout her lips as though giving him a kiss and removed her dor.

He froze

Now this is really going out of hands . I have to stop her.


He moved forward. She sighed a relief. Finally he is coming.

But a guest stopped him midway.

She frowned


A waiter passed by and enquired if she wanted a drink. Then she realized he had a pen and a small notebook in the pocket of his shirt

An idea struck.

She requested him for the pen and a piece of paper from the note book

She scribbled a few words on it and instructed the waiter to pass the folded note to her husband.


The puzzled hubby frowned.

Don't tell me now she's writing i love u as well.

God, what is wrong with this woman.


The note reached to him. He read it.


Seconds later, Advait Kapoor rushed towards the gents


Nehmat sighed a huge relief

Finally, he got the message. Phew!


The note read


Pant ki zip khuli hain

(Ur pants is unzipped)



The end



Ps

Hope it comes onscreen.😜

U can leave ur comments.

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This was fantastically hilarious!! Love it.

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🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

This was really funny!

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I could feel Advaits horror (& terror) from the flying kiss😱😆

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Originally posted by: Sofna

I could feel Advaits horror (& terror) from the flying kiss😱😆


Me too😍😍

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Originally posted by: Aleyamma47

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

This was really funny!


Imagine if it comes onscreen.

We will roll on the floor 🤣🤣🤣

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Originally posted by: Namita-M

This was fantastically hilarious!! Love it.


Hope to get something like this onscreen 😜

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what was this ani

its fabulous and hilarious 👏

can't stop laughing while reading

wondering how will be scene if nehmat trying to woe her husband and advait's changing expression from her every movesmiley42

ek teer mein do shikar

ekam bhi bhaag gaya and advait bhi🤣

keep writing more

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Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

what was this ani

its fabulous and hilarious 👏

can't stop laughing while reading

wondering how will be scene if nehmat trying to woe her husband and advait's changing expression from her every movesmiley42

ek teer mein do shikar

ekam bhi bhaag gaya and advait bhi🤣

keep writing more


Socho agar onscreen aya toh??🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Omg the title is so apt...where do you get these creative ideas from🤣🤣 what an unpredictable end

and he was so shocked when she was giving him flying kiss...i cant imagine his expressions🤣

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