Kaash - What Could Have Been! - My Take on Dev's Thoughts

"Sorry Sir, main paida hone mein late ho gayi"........

Dev remembers Vidhi's words with a smile on his face.

Aaj jab tumne yeh kaha toh kahin mere dil mein ek pal ke liye ek aas bhar aai, ki kaash humaare beech yeh umra ka faasla n hota........ Toh zindagi tumhaare saath kitni sukoon bhari hoti...........

Kaash main apni aane waali puri zindagi tumhaare saath jee paata, apni aane wahi har hansi tumhare saath hans paata, aane waala har aansu tumhaare saamne ro paata............ Kaash aane waali zindagi ke har din tumhe dekh paata, tumhe sun paataa, tumhe apne ird-gird mehsus kar paataa......... Tumhaari na khatam hone waali baatein sunkar kaise samay beet jaata, pata hi nahin chalta......... Kaash aisa ho pata ....... Kaash main aisi sukoon bhari zindagi jee paata.......

Kaash main har din tumhe yeh bataa paata hi tum mere liye kya ho..... Kabhi tumhaari khamoshi mein toh kabhi tumhaare shabdon mein apne hone ka ehsaas dhoond paata........

Kaash tumhara har aansu ponch paata, tumhaari har hansi dekh paata......... Kaash tumhaari har haar par main tumhe hausla dene ke liye tumhaare saath hota........ Kaaah tumhaari har jeet par tumhe yeh bataa paata ki mujhe tumpar kitna gumaan hai......... Kaash tumhe har unchai chunte hue dekh paataa....... Kaash.........

Maine kabhi iss kaash ko apne dil mein aane nahin diya thha, par aaj pata nahin kaise........... (pauses and with tear filled eyes looks upwards) Kyun yeh mazak kar rahe ho mere saath........ Kyun woh sapne mujhe dikha rahe ho, jo kabhi poore nahin honge........ Kyun de rahe ho aisi aas jiski kismat mein bas tutna hi likha hai.......... Kyun.........

Thank you so much. Mujhe laga complain milegi ki itta chhota kyun likha........ Par thank you so much for liking it......

And whatever you said about Dev is so in point. Poor guy doesn't even allow himself to feel ki kahin khud ki ummeed jag gayi toh Vidhi ko "kabhi naa Puri hone waali" ummeed na dede.....

Mujhe aapki story padna hein ViDev par. Telly se bhi bol chuki hun. Iss mamle mein bahut laalchi hun

Originally posted by: Revutty

Mujhe aapki story padna hein ViDev par. Telly se bhi bol chuki hun. Iss mamle mein bahut laalchi hun

Toh 2-3 saal wait karlo..... 😂 Main tortoise se bhi slow hun...... Ek go mein likhna humse naa ho paaya kabhi..... Bahut mushkil se flow aata hai 3-4 dialogues ka........

Guddan ka FF likhna start Kiya thha 2020 lockdown mein, ab tak pura na hua......

Story ki ummeed na rakho humse...... Kabhi flow aayega toh aisa kuch chota mota letter ya monologue type likh dungi.....

Mein rakhungi, ek choti One Shot. Zyada lambi nahi. Please 🙏. Jab free ho tab try karna yaar. Telly ko bhi keh chuki hoon..... Mein itni acchi likh nahi paati hun aap logon kee tarah. Depth missing hein meri write up mein

Originally posted by: Revutty

Mein rakhungi, ek choti One Shot. Zyada lambi nahi. Please 🙏. Jab free ho tab try karna yaar. Telly ko bhi keh chuki hoon..... Mein itni acchi likh nahi paati hun aap logon kee tarah. Depth missing hein meri write up mein

Try karungi but no promises. Main plot mein itta strong nahin hun...... Bas Jo Kami dikhti hai kisi scene mein toh sochti hun ke aisa karte toh better hota toh likh deti hun........

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/162255136

Meri story ViDev pe. Jab time mile tab padke batana yaar. 😄😄🙏🙏

Haan time mile toh padhugi aaram se..... Busy chal raha bahut..... Beech beech mein tanka jhaki karne aa jaati hun yahan bas.....

Originally posted by: Anupreeya

Haan time mile toh padhugi aaram se..... Busy chal raha bahut..... Beech beech mein tanka jhaki karne aa jaati hun yahan bas.....

Forgot to tag.

Uff yeh tag wag. Kitta kuch kare ek nanhi si Jaan.