MG SS: Shhh...:- Updated Part20||31st July||Pg.37|| - Page 9

Originally posted by: heycookie

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Lol, I have not even started typing. 😆

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Part 4

Part 5:

Geet enters the hospital busy cursing Jessie, next moment dashes into a person who was carrying a bundle of files and moving in the opposite direction. Nothing much is damaged, no one is hurt, it's just the papers in the file that are scattered around the two Geet and the other person are standing face to face. Geet realises it's her mistake and was about to apologize

"Hey, sweety! Mujhe ye kaafi hai. Dil baeen(left) mai hai lekin aap meri daeen(rigth) par takraya. Bas, mujhe yehi kaafi hai." said Romeo blushing

"What do you mean by it's enough! " asked an enraged Geet.

"Hey, Y are you treating me like someone who you don't know? Aap ne pechana nahi mujhe?"

"Kon ho tum, ha?"

"Mai kon hu? Ye kay bath kar rahiho aap. I'm in love with you, aap ke sath rehi ke liye mai doctor padna choodkar yahi hospital mai compounder ban ke kam kar rahihu. Mai aap se seriously payar kar rahi hu, vo be teen saal se. Still you don't know about our love matter?"

"It's ok, aab to pata chalgaya na, no problem."

He takes out a rose from his shirt kisses it and forwards it towards Geet

"I love you baby "

Only to gain a tight slap across his cheek.

"Love it'seems love, Get lost. Uski love story hogai aab iski."

Geet leaves irritated.

Romeo is still caressing his cheek then comes back to the world when he realizes that Geet didn't recognize him. Then he leaves in search of Shilpa. After searching the whole hospital he finds her in the parking lot sitting on her scooty and talking to someone.

"Aab ye Abhay hai kay? " he murmurs

Shilpa cuts her call and asks him what happened. To which Romeo asks her to return all the money she has taken from him.

To which Shilpa innocently asks why.

To which he answers that she have been saying that she would link him and Geet by taking money from him and now she has cheated him. When he was thinking about loosing 32 acres and him still not linked up with Geet, he dashed her and he got to see Shilpa's real face. To which Shilpa tricks him saying that Geet is naive and she got scared seeing him infront of her so she enacted like that. And she demands 30K as fees.

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Sydney, Australia at 7pm.

Success party of Khurana Constructions for successfully completing a project was behing held. It was a venture signed by Khurana Constructions for constructing a high tech research lab as Mr. Tandon wanted. He personally knew Mr. Khurana and he liked the way he worked and he was a hardworking man.

Gusts started entering the hall, the party was organized by Tandon. All were waiting for the arrival of Mr. Khurana. Many had heard of him being a young successful business man, but had not seen him or meet him personally. So they thought him to be in his late thirties or at least to be forty.

As soon as the clock struck 7, a line of sleek black Mercedes cars screeched to halt at the entrance of the hall. The bodyguards got down and one of them moves forward and opens the door of the passenger seat of the car which was admist the others. A young man in mid-twenties steps out, he is wearing black trousers and coat over white shirt, black leather polished shoes. Thick hair set neatly, broad forehead, brown sparkling eyes and long nose, M shaped lips curved into a killer smile.

As he enters into the hall all eyes goes on him and wondered as who was he? Such a charmer he was. He ignored all and moved to meet Tandon

Tandon was very delightful seeing him

"Hello, Mr Khurana. Welcome"

"Hello Uncle. Aap please mujhe meri naam se bolaye. Hum bono ke beech ye formalities sab kyu?"

"Teek hai, teek hai. To Savitri Devi kaise hai?"

"Ji, she is fine."

Then Tandon excuses himself

"Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen." everyone's attention goes to Tandon

"I'm extremely happy to be announcing that we got a chance to work with Khurana Constructions, India's top 1 construction company and Mr. Khurana who turned out to be the grandson of my close friend from my college. I would like to specially thank him, for his dedication in work, leaving his other works behind in India he personally worked for this project. I'm very grateful to him and people who have worked for the success of this project. So I welcome Mr. Maan Singh Khurana on the dias."

People look around to see who was this Mr. Khurana and when did he enter was the question as most of them we're busy starring at the young dashing personality there. Girls were drooling over him and men were jealous of him for taking all ladies attention.

All eyes widened seeing the same person who had gathered everyone's attention there to be Maan Khurana, he stepped onto the dias and waved at everyone. The formal introductions between everyone continued. Girls were waiting for a chance to atleast stand close to Maan! Maan was not a person who would go attending parties and stuff, if only his presence is important he would attend. Because Tandon was his dadima's old friend and it was success party of his project as well he attended. He was not a person who liked attention.

The party ended on a good note, except for the girls constantly bugging around him. Maan returned back to his room, freshened up, checked the mails and other works which needed his attention. Though he is in Australia he had control of other ongoing projects back in India.

After the work, he stretched himself on the couch and stared out of the glass window only to be reminded of someone important, special. The remembrance of the person brought a small smile, he at once got up and went to the cupboard and took out his wallet, then settled back on the couch. He opened his wallet to see the two most important people of his life one his dadima then he takes out another photo from below the first one. It's a picture of a young beautiful girl claid in beautiful saree looking stunning, a mear picture could raise any man's heartbeat.

Same was the case with Maan, but the thing was he could see glint of naughtiness as well as innocence in her eyes.

Geet has became his Misty and since then he has this habit of seeing and talking to her pic before going to bed and after raising.

Maan is a reserved and introvert. He lost his parents in an accident when he was 17. The responsibility of the construction company they owned fell on his dadi, who even in her old age was trying very hard to look after along with Maan. The old lady couldn't do much given to her age and health. Seeing his dadi struggling a lot Maan started to help her along side completing his studies. Though Savitri lost her son and daughter in law, Maan his parents both stood up for each other, for life had to move. The grief of loosing them was there but they promised to cherish the memories and moments they spent than grief over their loss. Maan did have friends who also helped him in his hard times. From the day he took charge of the near bankrupt company, there was no turning back. Now after all the struggle and hard work he is in this position.

One month before he had been back to India to meet his dadi and to spend some time with her. At that time he came to know that Savitri Devi had selected a girl for him, though he was against marrying saying that girls spend a lot, layers of make up and he didn't want the hard earned money to be spent like water. Only when Savitri Devi insisted and forced him, he saw her pic. From that day she made a permanent place for herself in his heart and her pic it's place in his wallet. He was eager to meet her so worked hard to finish off the work in Australia, so that he could he along with his dadi could go to their home officially to ask for her hand.

Here he is all excited to be returning home tomorrow. Maan lies down on the bed gives a peck on her photo wishes her good night and sleeps dreaming about Geet and his future together.

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Shimla.

It's evening, Geet has returned home after completing her shift. Rano is cooking dinner and Geet is folding clothes in the hall, when the door bell rings

"Geeett" calls out Rano

"Ha ma?"

"Koi aaya hai dekho"

"Tumhe ja kar dekho ma. Aap ke college days mai aap ko line mare huve koi ladka love letter dene keliye aaya hoga. Ja kar dekhlo."

"Agar aisa koi mujhe love letter de diya hota tho mai bagh gata, tumari papa ke sath to bilkul nahi rehti."

"A-ha, aab aisa kehti ho lakin rath ki dus bhaje ke badh room se bahar he nahi aathi ho."

Geet proceeds to open the door teasing her mother. She opens the door and is shocked to see Jessie standing there and he smiles at her and says "I Love You "

"AAP! Pagal hogaho kay? Maine kaha tha na ke mai aap se payar nahi karthi aur aap to ghar tak he agaiho."

Geet turns back into the house and again turns back only to see a person carrying a milk can and the milk measuring mug standing there. Geet searches behind the milk man, realises that she was hallucinating and is embarrassed.

"I..I'm sorry. I'm sorry. Galthi meri hai."

"HAR DIN!" Geet jumps a step back with her hands on her mouth startled.

" meri kaam aap ke ghar mai sirf dood dene te, magar aaj aap mera dil mangrahi hai to hum ussko be de denge madam."

Geet's nostrils are flaring, she snatches the mug he was holding and throws the milk in it on his face and closes the door. Poor guy without any of his mistake he had to face Geet's wrath.

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I apologize for the grammatical errors.

Please see the post below.

Part 6

Prologue 1:

Beautifully decorated bed for the wedding night of the newly wed couple.

The groom is already in the room sitting infront of the TV and watching cricket. He is so engrossed into it that he doesn't even notice someone has entered the room.

Then bride doesn't look happy, she places the glass of milk on the table making sound

"THUD"

That distracts the groom, he gets up

"Oh, I'm sorry. Interesting match chal rahi tee aur maine aap ko notice nahi kiya." He He proceeds to switch off the TV

"Aap pade likae ho na?" the bride asks arrogantly. That freezes the groom who was putting away the TV remote.

He turns towards his wife with a frown

"Ha. Kyu? Doubt ha? Kya mujhe certificates dikhaana chaahie?"

"Pada likhe ho aur aap aise dikhte hain jaise aap sab kuchh samajh gae ho. Par shadi hone se pehle ladki ko ek bar pooch na chaye ye aap zoori nahi samji."

"Tumne iss shaadi keliye haan kah diya hai, isliye meri mamma pappa ne tumko pasand kiya hoga samaj kar tumse shaadi ke."

"Mathlab tumari mama papa pasand kiya iss liye aap ne shaadi ke! You didn't think it's your life and u have the right to take the decision of it, didn't you have this simple sense? "

"Teek hai meri pass nahi the, tum to mere pass aakar bathana tha na ki tum ko meri se shaadi nahi karna hai!!"

"No one had the patience to listen to me nor they gave me a chance to speak. A girl needs her mother so that she can speak her heart out but I'm unfortunate I don't have her. Dad didn't understand my love." she cries while saying this. Groom is listening to this silently

"Dekhye, aap mujhse shaadi ki hogi, lekin meri maan mai meri pati ke sthan sirf Dev kehai. My father might have forced me into this marriage but I take it as my freedom. Agar insab kehne ke badh be aap ne force kiya tho...!"

The groom raises his hand and gestures her to stop.

"Tumhari tan milegi maan nahi, right?"

" Vo sab teek hai, aab tumhai kay chaye?"

"Divorce "

"That's it, right? Tum bohot takgai ho. Aab so ja kal bath kar lenge."

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This is a new story on Maaneet from marriage to divorce.

Prologue 2

A young man enters into a palace like house talking to an another man of his age

"Vahi ruk ja bhai."

Came a anger filled voice. Both of them frooze on their spots looking at the person.

"Annie? "

"Ji Maan bhai, Annie he bol rahi hu."

"Kay huva, sab teek hai? "

"Ha sab teek hai, kyu teek nahi hoga? Abhi abhi to London mai aapne studies complete kar ke aye Ho. Next Tumhara shaadi keliye dadi be ladki doondna shuru kar denge."

"That's all fine, but I don't get why are you angry on me? "

"Shaadi to hojaye ge. Lekin aap eligibile and responsible to honi chaye na aapni patni aur bache ko dekh ne keliye? "

"What do you want to say Annie? What do you mean I'm not responsible? I have the property which would be there even after 7 generations. Now why are you ranting this much? "

"Ha, vo hai. But that's not ur's, it's dad's."

"To, vo meri he hua na?"

"After a few days that also wouldn't be yours. Do you even know already three factories have been closed?"

"If three got shut down what happened, even if ten persons like me come also they will not be able to melt down the property."

"Agar aap aise rahi to sab kuch katham. Dadi, y do you want to get him, a person who is not serious about life married to a girl and spoil her life? Bhai kay aap ne kahbi sunrise dekhi hai kay? No you wouldn't, for you get up in the afternoon how would you even know how it is"

"So does it mean if I didn't see sunrise I have not taken my life seriously or just because I didn't see will sun only not rise? "

"I don't know if that Sun would rise or not but definitely this sun (Maan) will not raise.

That was a big insult to Maan, the patience he had earlier was vanishing.

"U meant to say i will be on roads? "

"Not only ur's, but of all the people who have believed you. U are not even worried about your three factories that have been shut down, but because of it 3000 people who were working are struggling."

"It's their headache I can't help it. "

"Sorry bhai, it's not their headache it's your carelessness."

"Annie, bus karo beta"

"Nahi dadi bolne do. What you people were saying it sweetly she is telling it angrily."

"To meri kehne se tum badal jahoge"?

"Badlav mathlab! U want me to see the sunrise or you want me to earn 50crore for my capacity?"

"Crore? Ho sakai to monthly 15K earn karo. Phir dekh lenge."

"Afterall 15k ruppees! I give it as tips."

"Deena bohath asan hai, earning is not easy. "

"Mai 15k earn nahi kar sakthi hu kya?"

"15k Kay! 15paise be nahi kar sakthi Ho!! "

"Agar kiya? "

"Without using dad's name, being a common man, means just as Maan if you prove urself worthy enough, then we will see. "

"Are you challenging me Annie?"

"I'm not, I'm just saying what you are and what is your capacity"

Maan's ego was very badly hurt, he forcefully pulls out his platinum chain, watch, wallet and rings and thows it on the table.

"As you said just in one month, i will earn 15k and prove myself to you, just wait and watch, he leaves.

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I have thought of starting another story so that I will have to not think on only one story and get bored. So which among above two stories you want me to write. Comment and tell me which one do you want me to start writing first. The one which receives more votes will be considered.

Thank you.

Many more happy returns of the day sister, God bless you.❤❤

Part 5

Fascinating and so Fabulous Update

I'm disliking Shilpa's character more I read

about her

Maan has completed Mr Tandon's project

but people are stunned by his aura

while he is in his world of his Misty

Geet on the other hand seems to see Jesse in the milkman daily

Prologue 2

This sounds very interesting

I would really want to read this story

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 5

Fascinating and so Fabulous Update

I'm disliking Shilpa's character more I read

about her

Maan has completed Mr Tandon's project

but people are stunned by his aura

while he is in his world of his Misty

Geet on the other hand seems to see Jesse in the milkman daily

Thank you so much❤️

You disliking Shilpa might change in future!

Originally posted by: taahir004

Prologue 2

This sounds very interesting

I would really want to read this story

Thank you❤

I will be writing both of them, but for now want to write another one along with the current one.

that was awesome

maans netry finally!!!! he is successfull n seems like badly fallen for geet, so now he'd asking her hand for marriage...where as geet is stuck with this romeos n jessis ufff thats frustrsting..poor girl...n dat shilpa she is such a leech !!!

lol geet hallucinates about jessie or was he really there??