RaYa OS: The Liar & The Fool - Page 2

Originally posted by: BlurredLines

Runs away after tagging you both 🤣.

Don't run away, your jiju will help me catch up 🤣

I'll run fast to read the OS 😍

This is so beautiful, Nita ❤️ I am quite sad that the Balh2 that we watch on tv isn't this beautiful anymore. I loved how your RaYa dealt with their misunderstanding and trusted each other. That's what true love is all about . Beautiful work!

Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri

This is too good.. They need to talk it out.. I hope that track comes. Loved it

Thank you for the lovely feedback ❤️. Glad you liked it .

Yes, they need to talk it out in the show as well. Long glances and taunts won't help them solve their MU.

Edited my previous post . Because some of my replies weren't highlighted in blue when I posted the first time

Originally posted by: SEA05

It's so beautiful. I hope that they get to this important conversation in the series too.

Thank you .❤️ Glad you liked it. Yeah one meaningful conversation or monologue into the character thoughts could make a lot of difference in the series but sadly we are not getting any of it so far

It's a shame, but it gives ground for self-development: thoughts, fantasies, analysis

Oof! This is🔥🔥🔥 Ram speaking with some sense has to be the weirdest thing to happen in the multiverse and you made it happen 🔥🔥🔥

Originally posted by: Alasmine

OH MY LOVE. THIS SO SOSOSOSOSOSOSO GOOD. I want to pour my heart out but I'm short on time right now (cause I was lost in my own thoughts, I read your piece almost three times from start to finish now, you have a real gift!). Aww Thank you so much ❤️. I am so glad you liked it enough to reread it 😊.

Two things that stuck with me are:

Ram's dialogue- "The interview is done. If you expect me to sit here and listen to you accuse my wife of being unfaithful then you have lost your mind. No one talks about my wife like that and Adi, get her out of my house now" I truly believe this scene has the potential to be shot and televised. I hope you wrote the BALH 2 scripts yaar, this was too good! I got goosebumps ahhhhhhhhhhh. He loves her so much. He cares for her so much, it's unreal. Yeah as viewers sometime we could predict a better track than the writers because we are more invested in the character than them. Yeah i felt a interview would have been a better deal than pooja and sangeet party like on the show 😆.

Mr Kapoor's mom didn't break their relationship. Shivi's death didn't break it either. But it had been Priya's fear that made her lie to him and continue lying to him even now.

YESSSS. I physically clapped when I read this. So true. Priya- was under no real dabaav, no one held her at gunpoint to lie. But, she lied, cause, when it comes to her Mr. Kapoor, her feeling take over. Guilt, insecurity, pain, a need to protect. Her unconditional love is something else. But, she fails to realize that, she owes Ram the truth. She fails to realise the power of his unconditional love, it's soothe her ache, more sooner than later I hope. Yeah both of these character when introduced to us were deeply flawed. One side, Ram who is still in love with Vedika and other side Priya who is the opposite of him and honestly the show did a decent job of getting them together and then they ruined it with the lie and lack of trust. But if they showed at least deeper emotion of the character and their insecurity on the show now, maybe we could find a way to connect with the characters again.

I can almost imagine him "patiently waiting for her with a outstretched arm". AWWWW, LOVE IT! I do love that scene in the show. Everytime Ram waits with his hand stretched gives me an excited feeling and I can't help but add it in the OS as well

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Thank you once again for the lovely feedback. It makes me happy to know you really liked it ❤️

This was so good Nita ❤️ Tbh idek what exactly happened in the show to bring Ram and Priya to this point, but I'm trying to get back to them and I keep getting this weird feeling. Like something is missing. Like this is not the same PriRa I fell in love with... like somehow their essence has been changed 🥺

But this fic finally gave me the peaceful feels I needed. The PriRa essence that made their love so strong despite all the obstacles. You showed that so well ❤️ my heart is happy now

Originally posted by: tina_1234

Loved it

Would like to see an insight of their conversation also

Thank you. Glad you liked it ❤️. I don't know if i could justice to a conversation between them. Because at the moment there is just too much that need to be said between them. Hence left it open ended.