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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful update

Loved it

Meera and brij r happy to see maan again , maan has taken the responsibility of mohinder health and business .. Maan s helping them and he also guiding brij with business ...

When yash s speaking with geet , maan s feeling jealous..

Still maan s thinking geet as old her and he busted his angry on brij ..

Still geet affect maan

Continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Update today pls 🤞 😋

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Posted: 3 years ago

Dear reader - Here you go with new chapter, super long, 2500+ words. I gave this update out of list, so please give me more likes and comments.


-Anu 🤗


https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/31114

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 20 - Please like above main post.🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 20 - Please like above main post.smiley31

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Chapter 20 - Please like above main post.smiley31

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Posted: 3 years ago

super super update.My heart is feeling heavy after reading this update let me read again and grasp the intensity of both their hearts.both are suffering for simple reasons.



Just wanted to say when he said to ranoo that in London I will be there ---I felt his words are shallow in terms of his love but as a responsibility it is ok. what did he mean by my ways are different ---does he mean he wants to show her or teach her some lesson.(if this is what his intensions are then i don't want this maan into her life).


standing at her door and making assumptions about her how twisted she was and how her family will react---If he ever knows how she has been living all these years in penance then this would be the actual way she will be living in and since she wanted to help her family she was staying in this place to save some money.


At the door when her wet droplets fell over his face it touched his heart i think this more as an attraction towards her than pure love it is felling for me like an attraction only.


He was affected by yash's words --what does he mean by he will deal with yashs talks later --like a parking car.


Geet is completely jalli over him -pagli dont be so soft on him and go weak

Everytime calling her sir hurts her deep from within.she came with a lot of expectations to see him but seeing him only 2-3 times in this 4 months its hard on her i can understand\

He is no way affected by her sir word. why is he comparing her beauty to other beauties he has seen.--I am getting offended by his toughts --it seems i am partial towards geet but his actions are not convincing enough. may be he is showing his tough side for now.


I think it was a 2 way thing why their relation broke --may be because of maans anger/hurt and geets anger but then he is blaming her only and still holding the anger. where as the separation broke her anger on him and she became mellow.

when no one is there in an unknown place and people how can she find a good place.


the pain in their hearts was so well depicted.

she is in a completely giving up mode on him and giving every right to him.

maybe he knows or not but his actions are making her feel in shame and guilty.

she did all this roka part in a fit of anger since he showed his anger on him and revenge type and didnt talk to her for 3 months.she made an impulsive decision but now cancelling the roka she taught about her father's respect.--anyone would do that but geet being more aggressive took it to another level i dont see any wrong it.


dhamki de raha hain maan that she has not even seen his anger and he is still behaving like that till now. even after that geet surrendered and asked him to put the anklet.


He is hurting her by saying the symapathy words to her


her confidence has gone so low and down that she is unable to voice her opinions and feelings -- me crying seeing gher situation.what jhas love made her 😢 😢 😢 😢.


maan is geeting affected by her actions but he is trying to keep his hard form.

Both are in a position to not let go away but he is still now into that rohan fiasco.


maan showing his anger so that she will come and melt him are his intentions ---might be


geet is unable to bear the separation and started crying...oh my god i can see it girl. its way too much.


Who is going to be the ice breaker now ---will he call her? i dont think that the position in which geet is in right now will call him because she dont want to do anthing that will upset him more.

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Posted: 3 years ago

OMG...so much misunderstanding again....he misunderstands eerything about her...he has forgiven everyone else but her....yes he cared for her the most so got hurt by her the most too....but then he knew how she was then, so why pay so much attention on her and get hurt...he also knows she was with no one else ....that rohan too was brought in to get him to come to her...he knows that too....but looks like somethign else happened too...to push him away...


but he does not realise or does not want to go into hwo much she has changed and how she has been for the past so many years due to regret....only her jijaji seems to understand her...i think even if he knows he will be on her side only...


now rano is showing affection...seems so fake and selfish...now that he is higher than them she is willing to let him do whatever he wants with their fmaily includin geet...so not fair...

dont think she ever cared about geet...because if she did she would not have spoilt geet so much growing up...even now she does not care how maan takes care of geet...she will not question him...seriously!!! disappointed in her again..


maan coming to her place and again judging her....he says he has never judged his family yeah right!!! look at him now....judging geet eerything where she is living and how she is living...and saying to her that she is acting.....and what does he do orders her to move to another place as she does not have send money home....

and poor geet listening to everythign he says...wish she put her foot down and said she will stay only here...but ofcourse she will not....she is just happy that he came down to her place...

their silent self talks....if only they talked it out everything will be solved...but then we know its not going to happen...


feel for her....if this is how he is going to behave fear of being hurt again dont like this maan then....he is constantly offending her...and she is taking everything thrown at her...

role reversal i guess now....

wonder how long this will go on

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hayeeee, most beautiful update ❤️❤️

Their interaction at the door step was mind-blowing.I have no words to express what I am feeling right now after reading the whole update. I was in Maaneet world ❤️❤️

Geet's Life is totally changed now, and Maan is not able to believe that his geet is living like this. He is showing his right on geet without his own knowledge but didn't want to show this to geet.

Both are in their own land , no one wants to voice out what they actually feel for each other.

Want to know what yash had said to him regarding geet🤔🤔🤔🤔

Geet ki bolti band Maan ke saamne 🤣, aur maan bolna kuch nahi bas haq jatana hai, 😉

Now waiting when geet would shift to khurana construction rented house ,

Thank you for the update and Lastly you mention it was 2500 words long update , which I didnt notice , because I was in my own maneet lala land😛

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

OMG...so much misunderstanding again....he misunderstands eerything about her...he has forgiven everyone else but her....yes he cared for her the most so got hurt by her the most too....but then he knew how she was then, so why pay so much attention on her and get hurt...he also knows she was with no one else ....that rohan too was brought in to get him to come to her...he knows that too....but looks like somethign else happened too...to push him away...


but he does not realise or does not want to go into hwo much she has changed and how she has been for the past so many years due to regret....only her jijaji seems to understand her...i think even if he knows he will be on her side only...


now rano is showing affection...seems so fake and selfish...now that he is higher than them she is willing to let him do whatever he wants with their fmaily includin geet...so not fair...

dont think she ever cared about geet...because if she did she would not have spoilt geet so much growing up...even now she does not care how maan takes care of geet...she will not question him...seriously!!! disappointed in her again..


maan coming to her place and again judging her....he says he has never judged his family yeah right!!! look at him now....judging geet eerything where she is living and how she is living...and saying to her that she is acting.....and what does he do orders her to move to another place as she does not have send money home....

and poor geet listening to everythign he says...wish she put her foot down and said she will stay only here...but ofcourse she will not....she is just happy that he came down to her place...

their silent self talks....if only they talked it out everything will be solved...but then we know its not going to happen...


feel for her....if this is how he is going to behave fear of being hurt again dont like this maan then....he is constantly offending her...and she is taking everything thrown at her...

role reversal i guess now....

wonder how long this will go on


i completely agree with you he is not judging rano now then why is he judging geet.

true rano is letting maan do whatever seems fake to me as well

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