Tere Der Pe ************************* Couple of days more passed. It was evening time, Maan was in deep thought. He was in Brij’s room as Brij has moved to Geet’s room. Ranoo came and he immediately got up “Aunty aap?” She came near him and ruffled his hair, Maan closed his eyes, could not believe it. Still was absorbing her affection. “Maaf kerde puttar” “Aunty please No, don’t say so” he held her hand in his After a while she said “Today I have prepared something nice for dinner, all of your taste. Not professional chef like yours though” Maan got so emotional, this was so special for him. He had craved for such gestures from her and today he did not want to judge. ...
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janu2006 @janu2006
+ 3
1 years ago
Great part Both in pain waiting for the other to take step first Cont soon
crazymaneetian @crazymaneetian
1 years ago
i think i read each sentnece at least twice....beautiful update beautifully capturing their feelings
Manjeet Kaur @manjeet6
1 years ago
Very emotional oneLoved their mind talkingYou very well discribed their pov
geet_v81 @geet_v81
+ 2
1 years ago
I don't know why but when I am reading in every part i am getting very emotional yaar. Nice part
Aatiya @PaintedSky
+ 2
1 years ago
Long??... But finished in a blink!!! Wow!!! They are talking inside their head. Tough for both to express, one in guilt another in hurt.Happy that atleast he make arrangements for her and he now knows that she is single.
khwaishfan @khwaishfan
+ 7
1 years ago
Hi Anu
Thank you for updating and for tagging me
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coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
1 years ago
Both are crying in their hearts but neither will admit to it.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
1 years ago
He made sure she can reach him if needed.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
1 years ago
He misread why she took off the jewelry. He thinks she removed everything connected to him.
coderlady @coderlady
+ 8
1 years ago
Geet is not wearing the anklets and he saw that.