| ShiVi DRABBLE : Aye Meri Zindagi | - Page 8

Originally posted by: VNuts

And I finally managed to write what I wanted to. 😆

Though repetitive, this bears saying that I loved the whole piece, Ritu. ❤️

Likhti reh. 😉

Ritu, I edited my previous post to include the review. Wo padha na?!

Originally posted by: VNuts

Ritu, I edited my previous post to include the review. Wo padha na?!

Haaaaannnn....I'm just mentally too exhausted and sad to write a reply. Kal karta hoon. 🤡

Finally managed to read this! Absolutely beautiful 😍 you have way with words Ritu, a very talented girl. 👏🏼 keep writing.

Originally posted by: VNuts

Loved it! So much & so little of everything I wanted. I'll write a saner, longer comment when I'm awake. ❤️

Review:

Everything about this was perfect.

I've always wanted to read something about Shiva's thoughts, to know what would be going through his mind after the last few crazy days & nights, after all the drama that had happened over the past few weeks, after finally putting to rest his thoughts of not being enough and going through all that that had been inadvertently set in motion due to meeting one stupid friend that one time, all those months ago.

And this gives me all that, yet I want more.

To have Shiva finally see the change in his relation with Raavi over the last year from the time of their marriage, to realise his horrid behaviour towards Raavi, to acknowledge all that pain & insults that Raavi has borne to be with him, to realise that the core of her is so immensely strong & powerful, to finally being her shield from the rest of the world.

His thoughts where he finally claims her as his, and is not afraid to show it, is not afraid to step into her personal space to claim her warmth for himself.

This Shiva is all that I dreamt of for Raavi, and all that Raavi could ever want.

Absolutely adored it!! ❤️

Thank you so much Vandu! 🤗❤️

My sole intention was to go ahead and write from his POV straight up (and cuddling of course lol) because he has been absolutely err...un-vocal about what he feels when it comes to affection for Raavi. It needs to be addressed more and I'm glad with the current episodes because they're showing them conversing freely to each other. ❤️

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Finally read it 😆

Ritu the way u play with words to show the deepest inner emotions of shiva no one can the way u penned down their shadi milap one was voicing it loud through her face while other remained wordless both somehow got binded to same destiny and road to travel

shiva acknowleding how raavi was always by his side bachpan se never bowed down against his anger and that he acknowledged her efforts to keep this shadi and all her efforts to fight till end 💖💯

Shiva being true chipkali can't maintain inch gap btwn them hayyeee☺️ and the cuddles has all my heart ❤️

Finally promising himself to protect and most importantly to trust her yes yes yes yehi shiva to chahiye show me she needs to be protected her innocence needs to be protected from whole world she is something to be cherished forever

Loved the drabble 💜💜

Thank You So much Pallavi! ❤️

Shiva as Chipkali is a simp-worthy phenomenon. WE AGREE. 100%. Role reversal, if good, is always welcomed. 😆

I'm glad you liked this version of Shiva. ❤️

Originally posted by: Seja1

Finally managed to read this! Absolutely beautiful 😍 you have way with words Ritu, a very talented girl. 👏🏼 keep writing.

Thank you sooooo muchhhh! ❤️😭

You so kind. Means the world to me.

This was beautiful! How I craved for this introspection by Shiva. Loved every bit of it. You should definitely continue so we can see him resolve in practice!

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

This was beautiful! How I craved for this introspection by Shiva. Loved every bit of it. You should definitely continue so we can see him resolve in practice!

Awww Thank you sooooo much. 🤗❤️

Maybe I'll do a Raavi POV in the future...I'm not sure cos as of now I don't have any extension of this in my brain lol.

But I am working on something else. 😳

I love the writer more than the writing 😆😆

Originally posted by: Pritha_31

I love the writer more than the writing 😆😆

Aapne humaare dil todaa hai. 🥺

Aur aap nahaan kissi aur se ishq ladaa rahe hain.