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Ahh a song fic! You excel at these.

I have no idea what's happening in the show so I don't know how this fulfils canon but it's (as always) beautifully written.

I can tell you've chosen your words with care, so your prose almost ends up being poetic. I'm glad that this is from Shiva's PoV because I think it was needed.

One thing that stood out to me is Shiva feeling brave when Raavi is asleep, it's such a wonderful thought, and you really seem to have delved deep into this character.

Sorry, I really enjoyed it but I can't think of what else to say other than it's beautiful and poignant. Also, because I'm feeling extremely vulnerable and attacked and defensive right now so not the best frame of mind for an objective review.

More tags! 🤡❤️

Do read if possible and sorry if I've missed anyone. 😳

I missed you on my last story! 😭❤️

Oh how I have missed you.

This praise is unreal. Most random unplanned shizzzz ever. 1 ghante me niptaya hua saaman. LMAO. You're kind.

All okayyyyyyyy?????

PS : They got married today after 175374938 MUs and willingly after a love confession. SO this is what it is all about. Today's episode was beautiful MAX. ❤️

Nice. Not following the show at all but I'm glad you guys got your pay-off.

And not okay. But that's me.

You can vent if you want to. <33333

Loved it! So much & so little of everything I wanted. I'll write a saner, longer comment when I'm awake. ❤️

Review:

Everything about this was perfect.

I've always wanted to read something about Shiva's thoughts, to know what would be going through his mind after the last few crazy days & nights, after all the drama that had happened over the past few weeks, after finally putting to rest his thoughts of not being enough and going through all that that had been inadvertently set in motion due to meeting one stupid friend that one time, all those months ago.

And this gives me all that, yet I want more.

To have Shiva finally see the change in his relation with Raavi over the last year from the time of their marriage, to realise his horrid behaviour towards Raavi, to acknowledge all that pain & insults that Raavi has borne to be with him, to realise that the core of her is so immensely strong & powerful, to finally being her shield from the rest of the world.

His thoughts where he finally claims her as his, and is not afraid to show it, is not afraid to step into her personal space to claim her warmth for himself.

This Shiva is all that I dreamt of for Raavi, and all that Raavi could ever want.

Absolutely adored it!! ❤️

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Unn Pulaao Shishtars Ka Spot Jinse main Bht Naraaz Hoon. ☢️

#YeActiveDikhteHainSirfHainNahi🤔

meko kyun dakhel diya 🥺😭

Originally posted by: hapakalanoodles

meko kyun dakhel diya 🥺😭

Aree wo ye apan ke IG group ka naam hai Lol 🤣

Aise koi special nahi hai 🤪

Amazing 🤩

That's what my idea of Shiva would be feeling for Raavi too .you put them into words so well. let's just hope show Wala is half as good as this one .

This one is going to be one of my comfort stories for a re-read 😊

Thank you for the tag ☺️

THIS...THIS IS WHAT I HAVE BEEN CRAVING FOR

This PASSION☺️This ARDOUR🔥 This LOVE♥️

THIS SHIVAAAA😳

Totally in LOVE with this Ritu🤗