ZDMN EDT#18 | 21/4 WU - pg 135 - Page 112

Originally posted by: FairyWings1234

That's possible 😛 And I don't get how come Barkha is holding Param and has no emotions? I mean I don't want the makers to neglect Barkha's pain and emotions. I don't want to see her casually accepting that Param's alive😭

Abhi tak air nahi hua toh pata nahi. Ho sakta hai aisa scene ho aur uska bts nahi ho. Pata nahi. I wish they don't neglect it either.

Seeing the bts, I think Karan ki abhi academy mein shayad entry nahi hogi. Maybe aisa hoga ki Karan ka koi scene bahar ka hoga, where the audience gets to know he's alive but not anyone else. Shayad thoda mystery reveal hone lagegi ki kaise bacha wo aur kahan tha itne time tak. Like, maybe a phone call?

Originally posted by: FairyWings1234

Saw the 'on-location' video on the social media thread.

Why is Param being so insensitive towards his daughter he hasn't met in years? Doesn't he realize how much Barkha suffered ?👎🏼

Besides I really don't have a good feeling about him. Don't tell me he's Param's doppelganger😒

They show him acting very strange and violent and unpredictable.

I guess either they'll take the path of him being mentally unstable or they'll show him as a villain or a doppelganger or someone who finds it really, really hard to adjust back to the life he had before.

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

They show him acting very strange and violent and unpredictable.

I guess either they'll take the path of him being mentally unstable or they'll show him as a villain or a doppelganger or someone who finds it really, really hard to adjust back to the life he had before.

But still I felt bad for Barkha🥺 In another video , he was banging the cup board or something and Barkha tried to comfort him but he pushed her away roughly. This isn't normal , even if its due to Karan's supposed Demise I can't justify it.

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Mere paas itne atrangi idea hain.

I have this one where Monami had a very gruesome past (jo baad mein reveal hoga) and she is left with a very nervous nature and social anxiety and a very strong desire to be a commando.

She goes to the academy with Sid and it's basically a very slow journey with the six forming a group and them falling in love. Show jaisa hai, par nahi bhi, because Monami aur Sid ke characters thode tweaked hain.

Us mein bahut, bahut saara military based cheezen hain like theory classes and all.

I started writing it as something purely for my entertainment and not something I intend to post. Toh us mein maine chapter wise nahi, jaise jaise scenes dimaag mein aaye, waise scenes likhe.

Now, I wrote like the weirdest of stuff in. Like, on an outing, Monami comes across this little, injured parrot and takes her to the academy so no one outside can eat her because she can't fly. She manages to convince everyone to keep it on the terrace in a shelter and she can go when she is all healed up. 🤣
So... yeah, maine bahut paagalon waali cheezen likhi hain. But you won't believe maine kitni research kari on that parrot to make it seem like jo maine likha, wo believable hai.

... That's why I am PROBABLY never going to post it, even though I worked really, really hard on it aur us mein bahut saari aisi cheezen hain jo shayad sab ko pasand aayengi and definitely show se zyaada realistic hai.

Yeah, am gonna stop trying to show I am not insane. (I promise it's less insane than what it sounds like. Maya- the parrot- is like Gappu.) I am not insane... Who am I kidding? I am crazy.

I hope, though, even after the show ends, forum chaahe itna nahi, par thoda active rahe. Like with SS, FF and OS and just discussions and theories of what we imagine might happen.

Agar show mein itne dreams ho sakte hain, toh hum bhi thode bahut dreams toh dekh hi sakte hain.

Shayad humaare theories par yeh season 2 hi le aaye.

arey after show ends we really need this... something to hold on to .. i mean this is literally the only show i watch and now its ending soon

what ever idea we think its better to put it on paper (digital)

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Abhi tak air nahi hua toh pata nahi. Ho sakta hai aisa scene ho aur uska bts nahi ho. Pata nahi. I wish they don't neglect it either.

Seeing the bts, I think Karan ki abhi academy mein shayad entry nahi hogi. Maybe aisa hoga ki Karan ka koi scene bahar ka hoga, where the audience gets to know he's alive but not anyone else. Shayad thoda mystery reveal hone lagegi ki kaise bacha wo aur kahan tha itne time tak. Like, maybe a phone call?

something is really odd with him... either the trauma... or something happened to him..

Ab barkha would also be in 2states kaise behave kare isse

yeah i agree.. Karan's entry will not be (and should not be) ..ghoom phirke academy me aya...

there should be some action reaction or drama.. bhai hero wapas aa raha hai... thoda to effect dalo...

it would be big reveal...

Originally posted by: anwaya

arey after show ends we really need this... something to hold on to .. i mean this is literally the only show i watch and now its ending soon

what ever idea we think its better to put it on paper (digital)

I'll write it. Waise toh bahut aage tak soch liya maine, par abhi tak first scene nahi likha. As in bahut saare scenes likhe hain par first nahi.

Oh woah. I just checked the word document where I had dumped all the scenes. The word count- 66.5k... That's a LOT of words.

Anyway... I'll give you guys a summary. If you like it, I'll start working on it seriously (as in with the intent to post.) It'll be an EXTREMELY long series, so... yeah.

Summary: With a dark past that made them guard themselves, Monami and Sid arrive at the academy with a more reserved and focused view, with their sole purpose to be the best of commandos. But when they catch the eye of Karan and Sanjana, they find themselves falling in love with them.
Note: Koel does not have a violent past. She is a widow, whose husband died 4 years back in a car crash, leaving her with a then 4 old Nikhil. Nikhil is, at the starting of the story, 8. Everyone in the academy knows about her son, and he does not live in the academy, living instead with her parents, while she is in the academy. Sanjana is not engaged to Kundan.

Now, since my favorite ship is Moran, the current set of scenes I have written is mostly Moran. But if you guys want me to post it, I'll of course balance the six leads and give scenes because I'll write it as something parallel to the show. A little tweaking to the characters and adding on things like missions, training, interpersonal relationships and deleting stuff that was too much drama and things I didn't like.

I didn't add Koel's domestic violence track because it's not something I can write very well. It's a very sensitive topic and I don't have the heart to research too much. I didn't add Sanju's engagement to Kundan ji, because I didn't relate to it much and I feel if I write something like that, I wouldn't do it justice.

That's not too say, I already don't have things in mind concerning these two and their struggles. I even have a lot of backstory of Faizi in mind.

So, tell me if you guys would be interested to read something like this?

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Mere paas itne atrangi idea hain.

I have this one where Monami had a very gruesome past (jo baad mein reveal hoga) and she is left with a very nervous nature and social anxiety and a very strong desire to be a commando.

She goes to the academy with Sid and it's basically a very slow journey with the six forming a group and them falling in love. Show jaisa hai, par nahi bhi, because Monami aur Sid ke characters thode tweaked hain.

Us mein bahut, bahut saara military based cheezen hain like theory classes and all.

I started writing it as something purely for my entertainment and not something I intend to post. Toh us mein maine chapter wise nahi, jaise jaise scenes dimaag mein aaye, waise scenes likhe.

Now, I wrote like the weirdest of stuff in. Like, on an outing, Monami comes across this little, injured parrot and takes her to the academy so no one outside can eat her because she can't fly. She manages to convince everyone to keep it on the terrace in a shelter and she can go when she is all healed up. 🤣
So... yeah, maine bahut paagalon waali cheezen likhi hain. But you won't believe maine kitni research kari on that parrot to make it seem like jo maine likha, wo believable hai.

... That's why I am PROBABLY never going to post it, even though I worked really, really hard on it aur us mein bahut saari aisi cheezen hain jo shayad sab ko pasand aayengi and definitely show se zyaada realistic hai.

Yeah, am gonna stop trying to show I am not insane. (I promise it's less insane than what it sounds like. Maya- the parrot- is like Gappu.) I am not insane... Who am I kidding? I am crazy.

I hope, though, even after the show ends, forum chaahe itna nahi, par thoda active rahe. Like with SS, FF and OS and just discussions and theories of what we imagine might happen.

Agar show mein itne dreams ho sakte hain, toh hum bhi thode bahut dreams toh dekh hi sakte hain.

Shayad humaare theories par yeh season 2 hi le aaye.

@bold Chica, I promise I won't judge or laugh, please post kar do na! Tum jo bhi likhti ho best hi hota hai. I am dying to read something by you. Tunhare exams hai isiliye nahi bola tha. Abhi jesi bhi position mein hai, kar dena, nobody ia going to judge you. You are an awesome writer.

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

I'll write it. Waise toh bahut aage tak soch liya maine, par abhi tak first scene nahi likha. As in bahut saare scenes likhe hain par first nahi.

Oh woah. I just checked the word document where I had dumped all the scenes. The word count- 66.5k... That's a LOT of words.

Anyway... I'll give you guys a summary. If you like it, I'll start working on it seriously (as in with the intent to post.) It'll be an EXTREMELY long series, so... yeah.

Summary: With a dark past that made them guard themselves, Monami and Sid arrive at the academy with a more reserved and focused view, with their sole purpose to be the best of commandos. But when they catch the eye of Karan and Sanjana, they find themselves falling in love with them.
Note: Koel does not have a violent past. She is a widow, whose husband died 4 years back in a car crash, leaving her with a then 4 old Nikhil. Nikhil is, at the starting of the story, 8. Everyone in the academy knows about her son, and he does not live in the academy, living instead with her parents, while she is in the academy. Sanjana is not engaged to Kundan.

Now, since my favorite ship is Moran, the current set of scenes I have written is mostly Moran. But if you guys want me to post it, I'll of course balance the six leads and give scenes because I'll write it as something parallel to the show. A little tweaking to the characters and adding on things like missions, training, interpersonal relationships and deleting stuff that was too much drama and things I didn't like.

I didn't add Koel's domestic violence track because it's not something I can write very well. It's a very sensitive topic and I don't have the heart to research too much. I didn't add Sanju's engagement to Kundan ji, because I didn't relate to it much and I feel if I write something like that, I wouldn't do it justice.

That's not too say, I already don't have things in mind concerning these two and their struggles. I even have a lot of backstory of Faizi in mind.

So, tell me if you guys would be interested to read something like this?

Yesss yesss yessssss!!!

Infinity times yesssss😃

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

I'll write it. Waise toh bahut aage tak soch liya maine, par abhi tak first scene nahi likha. As in bahut saare scenes likhe hain par first nahi.

Oh woah. I just checked the word document where I had dumped all the scenes. The word count- 66.5k... That's a LOT of words.

Anyway... I'll give you guys a summary. If you like it, I'll start working on it seriously (as in with the intent to post.) It'll be an EXTREMELY long series, so... yeah.

Summary: With a dark past that made them guard themselves, Monami and Sid arrive at the academy with a more reserved and focused view, with their sole purpose to be the best of commandos. But when they catch the eye of Karan and Sanjana, they find themselves falling in love with them.
Note: Koel does not have a violent past. She is a widow, whose husband died 4 years back in a car crash, leaving her with a then 4 old Nikhil. Nikhil is, at the starting of the story, 8. Everyone in the academy knows about her son, and he does not live in the academy, living instead with her parents, while she is in the academy. Sanjana is not engaged to Kundan.

Now, since my favorite ship is Moran, the current set of scenes I have written is mostly Moran. But if you guys want me to post it, I'll of course balance the six leads and give scenes because I'll write it as something parallel to the show. A little tweaking to the characters and adding on things like missions, training, interpersonal relationships and deleting stuff that was too much drama and things I didn't like.

I didn't add Koel's domestic violence track because it's not something I can write very well. It's a very sensitive topic and I don't have the heart to research too much. I didn't add Sanju's engagement to Kundan ji, because I didn't relate to it much and I feel if I write something like that, I wouldn't do it justice.

That's not too say, I already don't have things in mind concerning these two and their struggles. I even have a lot of backstory of Faizi in mind.

So, tell me if you guys would be interested to read something like this?

yyyyeeeeeeeeyyyy and plz in ur FF make Karan slowly fell in love with Monu.. here..

in one epi he is admiring her (the huddle wala scene when she pulled him) then the lights wala scene....

and then next epi Monu tells him she loves him... not enough scene making Karan slowly falling for her...

Suddenly Faizi tells him u love her.... i mean for Monu we have seen her gradually fall for him... then being mad in love... then in pain for his love

For Karan it was very quick.. even in one epi during new year we had cute moments like the nashta wala scne.. then cake wala scne... Karan talking to Sid about Monu and them BAMMMMMMMM same epi Karan agrees he loves her...

I wanted more denial and then Faizi pointing out the things to Karan... his respect towards Monu, his care towards her, he smiling only around her fully, he reacting to her ..then finally Karan accepting he lover her..

even the cave part where Monu forgot... it was wrapped in one epi.... the confused reactions of Monu the "what can i do" face of Karan.. Faizi enjoying it... would have been there for 1 2 more epis...