MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 29

This was precious❤️❤️❤️

The maan convo everyone wanted, what we deserve, what maan deserve not what we got in the show

Thank you so much for fulfilling every maan fan's dreams.🤗

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

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What a scene smitha👏👏.
Pls send this to writers to take a note that how to write mature conversation in sanskaari way.

As always I love ur update

How did I miss this?🤔...smitha this so beautifully written...such a well thought conversation between two matured people...loved their comfort level...the whole being shy over tea sharing in the show was heights of cringe....

I always love your version better🤗❤️💔

Scene: Anupama walks into Shah house to see that Toshu & Vanraj are having a heated discussion. Toshu went on a limb and called his dad a “loser”, along with verbal lashing to both Anu & Vanraj.

It is meaningless to hear the same dialogues,chars repeating the same mistakes over & over again. I felt that Anu should not have spoken during T's outburst. Anuj too should have broken the news about her contract in private. (precap)

Here's an alternative that I came up with. Aisa hota toh ....? 😳

Anu tires to talk and stop Toshu, but is asked to shut up. So, she chooses to be a silent witness to her son’s ill-mannered behavior.

Later she goes to her room, exhausted from the day long grind and burdened with the pain that her son inflicted on her and the family. She wonders where she went wrong with her upbringing that Toshu turned out to be like this. How come with the same kind of upbringing all 3 children turned out to be very different from each other?

She is deeply immersed in thoughts, shedding tears when her phone rings. She sees Anuj is calling her, a routine video call before winding up for the day.❤️

She picks up the call –

Anuj: happily, smiles and greets “Hello! “

Anu: blinded with tears, manages to bring a smile but fails…😒

Anuj: touches his phone screen as if could wipe away her pain… kya hua Anu? Waha sab theek hai?

Anu: haan, sab theek hai, bass roz roz ke jhagde,tu-tu-mein-mein se … wipes off her tears and continues….. aap bataiye, aapka din kaisa raha?

Anuj: It was great,infact I have something exciting …😊

Anu: interrupts him and says…. “kya hum shaadi ke baad …sirf hum dono kahi ghoomne chale? “

Anuj: you mean… honey.....😳😳

Anu: yaha se bahut dur … jaha koi nahi ...

Anuj: Sure! tum kaha jaana chahti ho… batao..🤗

Anu: kahi dur, jahaa bahut saara barf ho, aur har taraf pahad ho. Pahado ke beech mein ek chota sa ghar hoga, ghar ke peeche chota sa jheel hoga....❤️

Anuj: is intently listening, imagining her description.. "aur.."

Anu: continues… Hum subah ki chai, breakfast ugte suraj ko dekhte hue shuru karenge, phir bahar ghoomne jayenge… barf mein khelnenge, woh kya kehte hai…. snowman banayenge…..😳

Anuj: "aur…"

Anu: aur raat ko itni thand hogi, toh hum lakdiya jalayenge,saath baith ke haath sekhenge…..😳😳

Anuj: "aur.."

Anu: " aur… so jayenge…. " 😳Ye aur aur kya laga rakha hai? 🤔Ye boliye,hum jaa sakte hai na?

Anuj: Ofcourse!

Anu: Hum Kashmir jaayenge… waha.. ek

Anuj: Kashmir? Waha aatankwaadi...

Anu: aapko lagta hai ki iss ghar mein kya kam aatank hai?😈 Batayiye ne…. hum jaa sakte hai na?🤗

Anuj: laughs …..waah! kya baat kahi hai Anu👏…. Chirps her a kiss❤️😉

Tumne itna soch liya, utna hi kaafi hai, mein arrange karoonga…. 🤗Tum dekh lena tumhare liye bahut yaadgaar banaonga..😉😳

Anu: sach!?

Anuj: yeah. Aur suno….. ek exciting news hai tumhare liye…. He then breaks the news of her dance academy contract…🥳

Anu: is very excited and happy. Thenk you, thenk you…. Bohot bohot thenk you… ye sab aap ke wajah se …🤗

Anuj: meri wajah se tumhe ye mila, toh mujhe kya dogi?😳

Anu: mere paas kya hai aapko dene ke liye… ?

Anuj: ek Thank you kiss bhi nahi?🤔

Anu: kal, jab hum milenge… tab😳

Anuj: aaj kyun nahi… at least a goodnight kiss….🤔

Anu: eventually obliges and is about to kiss, Anuj closes his eyes in anticipation…😳😳

A quick knock and Kinjal barges in…..

Shocked Anu disconnects the call in a hurry...... "kinjal! woh mein..." 😳🤔

Anuj: Shah parivaar mein sab ke sab aatankwaadi toh hai

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The scene & lines describing about honeymoon is nothing out of the ordinary, must be in dime a dozen movies. So, I cant take full credit for it. The above piece might not fit in with the current storyline, but just wrote it break the boredom. Did you like it? Drop in your comment to let me know!

Laughed out at aatank. Apt description 😂😂😂

Yeh log kabhi Kuch baat kyun nahi karte yaar? Why does everything have to be out in the open??🙄

🤣🤣

Aatankwadi really🤣🤣 you are a savior...is there ever gonna be a discussion between these two before marriage 🙄

This is lovely❤️

This is what I think, DA News should have been given in private not with drama family

He looked more like Gaurav than AK in precap.

This is a lovely scenario Smitha in tune with both of the characters. 🤩🤩🤩🤩

Yaha kya kam atankwadi hai 🤣

Too good! ❤️

Aatankwadi 🤣🤣.., seriously shahs are no less than aatankwadi

lovely one yaar 🥰