MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 31

Scene: Anu has called Anuj to tell him that Pakhi agreed to be a part of their wedding celebrations. They hang up. He calls her back..

I felt that their phone conversation could have been better, so wrote an alternative.

Anu then winds up for the day, dabs lotion on her hands and neck, turns off the lights on the bedside lamps, straightens the sheets on the bed and lifts the pillow ….

She is pleasantly surprised to see a box under the pillow. It has a note on it that reads … “For you…”❤️

She opens it to find a fine necklace with a pendant, two hearts intertwined. Another hand written note inside it reads –"Two months since you said YES! Two hearts joined together in friendship,united in love!” ❤️❤️

Anupama is overwhelmed, she sits back on the bed holding the box in her hand and calls Anuj.

Anuj: Hello! 😊 Smiles at her cheerfully

Anu: starts shedding tears.

Anuj: tum phir se ro rahi ho? Kisi ne kuch kaha?

Anu: Aap! Aap ki wajah se…. she holds up the box, and the pendant and says “ ye.. “😳

Anuj: Smiles "woh tumhare liye ek surprise..., tumhe achcha laga?"

Anu: bohot bohot bohot achcha laga….. achcha lagta hai jab koi hamari paravah hum se bhi zyaada karta hai

aur jo aap ne angreji mein likha hai, bahut achcha hai, ye pendant kitna pyaara hai…❤️🤗

Anuj: aur surprise dene wala?😉

Anu: aap… aap sabse pya... 😳sabse bade buddhu hai … 🤓aisa gift koi thakiye ke neeche chod deta hai kya? 🤔 Agar baa dekh leti toh?!😲

He rolls his eyes and asks🤔

Anuj: tum baa se itna kyun darrti ho?

She reasons, both go back & forth…

Anuj: achacha chalo! Kal mujhe jaldi uthna hai, good night ….Throws a flying kiss😳

Anu: good night.

Anuj: aisa nahi chalega….. good night kiss nahi dogi?🥺

Anu: "kal..." Holds up the pendant and says “ jab aap mujhe ye pehnayenge… “ 😳❤️🤗

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I am losing interest in this couple. Just threw something together, to keep their charm in my thoughts. How do you like it? Drop in your comment to let me know.

Not your fault to lose interest when couple themselves have lost interest in each other and are happy to just cry with each other every living moment.

I agree yaar. Slowly but declining. Too hard to relate but but kal pehnayenge chain? 😍😍😍😍 aur Kya karenge (apart from the sharmana which won’t be too OTT Cus it is your drabblee💜)

This is nice ❤️. It hurts how they are loosing the charm

So beautifully writtennn😍😍😍

And Anu agreed to give a kisss OMG

Can you please continue this and give the pendant and kiss waala scene🥺🥺🥺

Nice one dear ❤️❤️

Too bad that makers don’t know how to utilize the couple in proper way.. bas OTT sharmana ya crying or bhashan… that’s all they do… even with meaningful conversation and subtle romance too, these two can make the scene beautiful

Sweet attempt to bring the spark in between them. 🤗

Your version of what could have been possible is always lovely to read, Smitha. The constant tears and over the top coyness gets really annoying. There is a time and place for everything... would that the writers put some thought into it.

I'm waiting for the day when itni beinteha sharam sehen karte karte, sharam bhi sharma jaaye, aur apne overuse ka makers se protest kare water tanker par chadh chilla chilla kar 😆

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Anu has called Anuj to tell him that Pakhi agreed to be a part of their wedding celebrations. They hang up. He calls her back..

I felt that their phone conversation could have been better, so wrote an alternative.

Anu then winds up for the day, dabs lotion on her hands and neck, turns off the lights on the bedside lamps, straightens the sheets on the bed and lifts the pillow ….

She is pleasantly surprised to see a box under the pillow. It has a note on it that reads … “For you…”❤️

She opens it to find a fine necklace with a pendant, two hearts intertwined. Another hand written note inside it reads –"Two months since you said YES! Two hearts joined together in friendship,united in love!” ❤️❤️

Anupama is overwhelmed, she sits back on the bed holding the box in her hand and calls Anuj.

Anuj: Hello! 😊 Smiles at her cheerfully

Anu: starts shedding tears.

Anuj: tum phir se ro rahi ho? Kisi ne kuch kaha?

Anu: Aap! Aap ki wajah se…. she holds up the box, and the pendant and says “ ye.. “😳

Anuj: Smiles "woh tumhare liye ek surprise..., tumhe achcha laga?"

Anu: bohot bohot bohot achcha laga….. achcha lagta hai jab koi hamari paravah hum se bhi zyaada karta hai

aur jo aap ne angreji mein likha hai, bahut achcha hai, ye pendant kitna pyaara hai…❤️🤗

Anuj: aur surprise dene wala?😉

Anu: aap… aap sabse pya... 😳sabse bade buddhu hai … 🤓aisa gift koi thakiye ke neeche chod deta hai kya? 🤔 Agar baa dekh leti toh?!😲

He rolls his eyes and asks🤔

Anuj: tum baa se itna kyun darrti ho?

She reasons, both go back & forth…

Anuj: achacha chalo! Kal mujhe jaldi uthna hai, good night ….Throws a flying kiss😳

Anu: good night.

Anuj: aisa nahi chalega….. good night kiss nahi dogi?🥺

Anu: "kal..." Holds up the pendant and says “ jab aap mujhe ye pehnayenge… “ 😳❤️🤗

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I am losing interest in this couple. Just threw something together, to keep their charm in my thoughts. How do you like it? Drop in your comment to let me know.

Loved it Smitha...Its a lovely senario.

Ye Anuj Anu ko koi gift kyo nahi data hai?🤔🤔

Bade hi unique and bade hi unrealistic couple hai ye.

Aww Smitha! This one is so adorable!!!!❤❤