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It was damn elegant♥️♥️

Just loved it🤩🤩

Ritu AMAZING! 😍

Didn’t expect to read Shiva’s POV and his thoughts on what happened and how it happened to him❤️

This is what happens when you are not very vocal with your thoughts unlike Raavi, who screams from the roof top that she is in love with Shiva.

You have started with their first marriage, their union at that time was not that of two hearts or souls but two human beings forced to be together due to circumstances.
After a year things have changed so much between them and the grit with which Raavi pursued him, never letting go or giving up is commendable.

Now coming back to his emotions, Girl you have a way with words👏 You have beautifully depicted his thoughts about what Raavi means to him, how they got here and what all Raavi had to do to get them here and the things she endured at the hands of Suman, Mami and Anita😕

Shiva Pandya is not the catch that he was projected to be, instead that he got the catch, Raavi Pandya, who is Somnath’s sabse sundar ladki inside out. Shiva Pandya is indeed lucky to have married Raavi Shiva Pandya ❤️

Is it too much to ask for Raavi’s POV now? 😆

Very Beautifully Written ❤️

This is so beautiful ❤️

They're finally together and he is undoubtedly one hell of a lucky guy.

Loved how meticulously you've expressed his various emotions with such fine details and nuance.

Okay wow how beautiful is this I can't even function-😭❤️

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

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Heyyyya Lovelies!!

I have no idea what I've done or what this is. Literally No clue. Nada, Zilch. 🥲🥲

Pixie wanted cuddling and I wanted cuddling and half the fandom wanted cuddling so I decided to give us cuddling. Simple. 🤣

'Saaya' is one of those underrated movies with a criminally underrated album that needs to be popularised ASAP. No kidding. Even though I LOVE the female version sung by 19 year old Shreya Ghoshal, this male version of the same song made the perfect fit to portray Shiva's side of the story about how he feels right now, in that particular moment having his wife in his arms. Visited this album completely by accident today.

So I whipped this up quickly within an hour and a half with no plan or vision or proofreading whatsoever. There are HIGH chances this was a snooze fest and I know it but still be kind y'all if you can. LMAO. 🥱🥱😴

Special thanks to @Spdp Dee for confirming my two min Wikipedia research I did for one line. 🐥🤭😆

Lots of love,

Ritu.❤️

PS : I like long comments... So awaiting bhar bhar ke bejjati in lambe akshars. 🤓🥲

*sighs* where do i begin the appreciation??

literally at a loss for words

so imma use emoticons

raavi shiva cuddling

shiva thanking is lucky stars(as he should) for sending raavi in his life❤️

lastly your rich vocabulary beautifully portraying the complexities of shiva's emotions*chef's kiss*

you are exceptionally talented ritu!!!!🤗

dont ever stop writing

p.s. thank you for tagging me😳

Rituuuu this is sooo beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

This is truly the Shiva I always wanted for Raavi
The one who would be her human shield, who would uphold her and regard her highly in his life. And you have totally written it in the best ways! ❤️

Shiva's realization of the depth of Raavi's pain and her changing into a resilient person was so heartwarming to read. He's truly empathetic and understanding and contemplating all that she has done for him and to gain his love ❤️

And finally him deciding he would never question her and he would ensure she gets the whole world is just sooo

This is the Shiva that we know and want to see!

Thank you for writing this wonderful piece ❤️
Made me feel all warm and fuzzy! 🤗

How beautiful was it Ritu❤

I loved it... Shiva's emotions came out beautifully ❤❤

This story felt like chashni! Muh mein ghul ti jaati hai ☺️ The plot was so simple but the way you express yourself seriously takes the story to another height! I absolutely love how you pen your stories in general! Also, I love it when people use songs to express the character’s thoughts and feelings!

I adore the way you portrayed Shiva in this OS! This is the Shiva Pandya I need from the Choubey’s but they ain’t listening 😭😭😭 I’m so happy that the Shiva you’ve created acknowledges his past deeds and is ready to protect his Chipkali for life 🥺 Another aspect that I really enjoyed was that you didn’t focus too much on the physical part of Shiva and Raavi’s relationship!! Keeping it mostly limited to Shiva’s thoughts was a really a good idea since they are technically in the beginning phases of their marriage. The forehead kiss was cute tho ☺️☺️☺️

I will definitely check out this song 👍🏼

Ritu🤗!!!! MAAAFIIII Chahiye Humein! 😭😭😭

But that aside, commenting properly on any fic after the longest time!!! And I'm not sure where to start right now....

Cuddling is such a personal thing, isn't it? Something to be very shy about, especially for those people who are already reserved.. I can count on one hand the number of times I've voluntarily cuddled with someone ever since I've understood what a personal thing it is.

And to cuddle up to someone who's asleep? To know that you not only have the right to touch them in their moments of vulnerability, but also the permission to do so? That's a weakness all on its own, the unsure nature of such a thing.....

You already know I haven't been keeping up with the episodes, both thanks to my busy schedule and my own disinterest in a few of the recent tracks of the show. But I cannot help but compare this Shiva to the Shiva right after their first wedding.

There, he was letting her take her pound of flesh out of him, letting her hurt him and hurt herself as well. And here all his thoughts are about healing them. THEM, as a single entity. There, he did not feel free enough to be true to his heart with his words, but here, he feels free enough to let his body, his very soul speak out the desires of his heart, no matter that it's to a sleeping Raavi.

Shiva has come a long long way! But he has a longer distance to cover yet.... Both in the paths of redemption, and that of love.

Love,

Sathya.... ❤️

PS Forgive me if my thoughts sound unorganised, because it's a bit difficult to put together a long comment after so long... 😆