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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

season by season kapde chote hotein jaa rahe hai🤣

story ki progress ho na ho par kapde ki progress hogayi🤣🤣

Edited by Mages - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Agreed. They need to slow things down a bit. They're rushing through so much at such a fast pace. One weekend is kinda devoted to one monster/asur. Aisa lagta hai online class chalrahi hai aur kuch samajh nahi aaraha 😆

And most importantly, there's hardly any actual character growth of the lead-pair. Haan beech beech me there are those 2 min moments that actually look nice. Like PraRish flying lantern scene, like Ritesh-Rishab bonding scene in initial weeks, like Pratha-Mahek's fond conversations with each other. Ye relationship dynamics ko explore karenge tabhi toh we'll feel invested and connected to these characters.

Yahan toh to-do-list chalrahi hai. Iss week ye wala asur marega, next week backstory dikhayenge and blabla 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Ekta is pulling story and script outta her arse when it comes to her shows especially Naagin.


They should spend the money on script & story instead it useless shit


I don't care what the Naagins are wearing as long as the story makes sense & it's fun to watch


Do notice this season is a skin show right from mature to younger actresses. But I don't mind it. Naagins are usually portrayed as sensual & sexy. Sadly usually missing the SMART quotient

Edited by silvermoonlight - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: TinkerBell8

Exactly... With each passing season the costumes are becoming too much revealing..

Though they suit the actors, its not giving that naagin vibes..

S1 ,S2,s3 costumes are good.. s4: I didnt like Nia's costume though. S5: Its Ok( surbhi was pretty in those). S6 they are looking nice but too much revealing.. especially Mahek's

i liked bani's naagin costume. and some of her sarees. But some cloths were ott.

S4 i liked shayantani more. Even jasmine was cute.

S6 i am unable to connect

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: mish_18

Agreed. They need to slow things down a bit. They're rushing through so much at such a fast pace. One weekend is kinda devoted to one monster/asur. Aisa lagta hai online class chalrahi hai aur kuch samajh nahi aaraha 😆

And most importantly, there's hardly any actual character growth of the lead-pair. Haan beech beech me there are those 2 min moments that actually look nice. Like PraRish flying lantern scene, like Ritesh-Rishab bonding scene in initial weeks, like Pratha-Mahek's fond conversations with each other. Ye relationship dynamics ko explore karenge tabhi toh we'll feel invested and connected to these characters.

Yahan toh to-do-list chalrahi hai. Iss week ye wala asur marega, next week backstory dikhayenge and blabla 😆

earlier they used to keep 1 enemy for atleast 3 epis.in 1 epis they used to create mystery around character. In 2nd epi they realize that villIain is xyz and his intentions are mno.

3rd epi used to be a fight. 😆

But yaha.

Epi 1 - for 10 minutes lets introduce.. 😖

Epi 1 10 minutes.. lets makes asurs laugh.. 🥱

Epi1- asur is dead. 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Anita n rashmi do not have the same type of body.anita is slim,but rashmi is not.



Originally posted by: firewings_diya

hahaha i know 😆 shalaka is bit healthy they could have given her something like vish wore. Even though anita and rashmi both has almost same body. Anita never looked odd in her clothing. As she ensured that she is comfortable with what she wore i really adore anita for that

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: firewings_diya

earlier they used to keep 1 enemy for atleast 3 epis.in 1 epis they used to create mystery around character. In 2nd epi they realize that villIain is xyz and his intentions are mno.

3rd epi used to be a fight. 😆

But yaha.

Epi 1 - for 10 minutes lets introduce.. 😖

Epi 1 10 minutes.. lets makes asurs laugh.. 🥱

Epi1- asur is dead. 😆

Iss baar vaise bhi 20 villains rakhke CVs ne unnecessarily syllabus badha diya hai hum bechare baccho ka. Isliye every episode seems like a last-minute revision to me jahan sab kuch jaldi-jaldi niptaaya jaa raha hai and nothing seems to stick in my mind😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mish_18

Agreed. They need to slow things down a bit. They're rushing through so much at such a fast pace. One weekend is kinda devoted to one monster/asur. Aisa lagta hai online class chalrahi hai aur kuch samajh nahi aaraha 😆

And most importantly, there's hardly any actual character growth of the lead-pair. Haan beech beech me there are those 2 min moments that actually look nice. Like PraRish flying lantern scene, like Ritesh-Rishab bonding scene in initial weeks, like Pratha-Mahek's fond conversations with each other. Ye relationship dynamics ko explore karenge tabhi toh we'll feel invested and connected to these characters.

Yahan toh to-do-list chalrahi hai. Iss week ye wala asur marega, next week backstory dikhayenge and blabla 😆

IKR. They can show so much better things but they waste it on nonsense like those lab scenes, deshbhakti speeches etc. Even good villains are missing this time.
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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: infinity101

IKR. They can show so much better things but they waste it on nonsense like those lab scenes, deshbhakti speeches etc. Even good villains are missing this time.

Although now the music department has started balancing their patriotic bgm with old naagin bgm. Tere sang pyaar me wala theme music sunkar jo sukoon milta hai dil ko I swear

But still those deshbhakti monologues are sooo long. "Desh ki mitti se gaddari, asur hai tu asur, mera kaata maange na paani, neelgiri pahad ke peeche zameen ke neeche" Matlab villain bechara fight karne se pehle ye sab dialogues sunkar boredom se hi mar jayega 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mish_18

Agreed. They need to slow things down a bit. They're rushing through so much at such a fast pace. One weekend is kinda devoted to one monster/asur. Aisa lagta hai online class chalrahi hai aur kuch samajh nahi aaraha 😆

And most importantly, there's hardly any actual character growth of the lead-pair. Haan beech beech me there are those 2 min moments that actually look nice. Like PraRish flying lantern scene, like Ritesh-Rishab bonding scene in initial weeks, like Pratha-Mahek's fond conversations with each other. Ye relationship dynamics ko explore karenge tabhi toh we'll feel invested and connected to these characters.

Yahan toh to-do-list chalrahi hai. Iss week ye wala asur marega, next week backstory dikhayenge and blabla 😆

I agree with you totally.The pace of the story should be slow and steady. That Chingistan Naagin Shangri-La should have been there for at least 3-4 episodes before she was gonna be killed by Pratha or by her doppelganger Shalaka-who also became a reformed Naagin coincidentally.


While Prathas backstory needs a proper revelation the past could have been revealed in some later episodes perhaps with the focus shifted to as to how the jodi of Pratha and Mehak uncover the identity of that last 4 demons who escaped through the Helicopter last time.


Also Prathas character needs some changes in her personality-she needs to come across as more assertive and add more cunningness in her overall behaviour.


Leaving her Snake Skin was pretty much careless on her part why did she not retrieve the same till now?


Also Mehak was having a talk with that Inspector named Chaubey perhaps regarding that burnt Police Station.Still that Footage has not been destroyed by either Mehak or Pratha.


Shivangi and Shivanya were more brilliant with clear focus on planning their each and every move with respect to their enemies.They knew how to plot and carefully execute their every move.In fact Shivangi was more of a brilliant tactician and strategist in her own right.


Rishabh is always shown as comfotably relaxing within his own Mansion or having hard drinks since coming back from the Army-Camp with the excuse that he wants to focus on Pratha.What Solid leads has he got till now?


His character needs more brain-power.Rather than obsessing about Pratha always like Agastya he needs to go out of the Mansion and try to combat the spread of the virus.


Where is that pro-activeness of being an Army Officer?


Mehaks character has been good till now.She comes across as more sophisticated and has clear observation of the surroundings compared to Pratha.Her use of the Aarti-Fire to hunt down the Demon or discovering the real identity of that Inspector Ridhi by observing her was quite astute.


Mehak might not be more level-headed in keeping her anger in check when compared to her sibling but the loss and anger she felt when Pratha got hurt looked quite real on her face.The pain she felt for her sibling showed the true bond between the two Naagin siblings


Hope Mehak does not turn to the dark side and keeps her role as being the mentor/backup for her sibling Pratha.


The makers also need to avoid the unnecessary Love Traingle of Reem-Rishabh or Pratha.Both Ritiesh and Reem should be kept out of the Prarish scenes.


Specially Rishabh cannot be shown as romancing or having feelings for Reem if he's already being shown as married to Pratha.It damages the aura of his character and hurts his budding chemistry with Pratha.


In short there should be some maturity within his character.His constant suspicion of her after a point would become monotonous and after a while the viewers won't be able to resonate with their chemistry then.


In short if he comes across as somewhat considerate and supportive of her time and space then it will only enhance the chemistry further between the two.

Edited by masked - 3 years ago

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