Okay wait WHAT?!!
NO MORE STORIES??!
Why are you so he'll bent on getting hit by me? Like WHYYYYY doll? 🤡
I come from future and there's a sequel but trust me I'm gonna go ahead and make sure you keep writing. I am a mean pestering little sod.
Starting with chapter 19.
(Kyunki ab mera mann hai yaha se shuru karne ka.)
I knew he was gonna feel the relief of the world after confessing his feelings to her. The terrace stuff was all feels. My heart skipped several beats because Raavi was SO BOLD there and complete in contrast to what she had turned into after the wedding fiasco. It showed how he had changed her.
The turmoil later on was mad excellence. MAD.
I know many would have wanted her to just kiss him after he confessed as if trying to achieve a good fairy tale end to it all but I am from the other lot. She couldn't have been in love with him so soon and the way you've written her return to her room was something very emotional.
She is just royally confused and probably feeling a little guilt at this point, maybe she's scared of becoming someone because of whom she suffered. She is scared of giving Shiva the same fate that she had and I feel that's enough indication of a deep love. I actually skimmed through the panic attack lol sorry...can't trigger them anxious thoughts. But Imma sure they were perfectly done.
"I O who?"
"You owe me an explanation."
I know it wasn't the time but I might have laughed here lol. This was so subtle. Hehe.
I am officially in love with this Shiva. Its a very big thing...mostly I'm a RAAVI STAN through and through this story though has made me switch sides.
Chapter 20
Oh WOW! Desire has entered the chat from MKBKB's side. Me likeyyy. She trying to stop herself from kissing him because it would be unfair to him>>>>>>>>
OH MY GOD. What a lovely little thing and yet so powerful. This party was dreamy...I would have bawled my eyes out if someone did this for me like...really. She lucky. People don't even do bare minimum now lol. Anyway...The Shiva contemplation was fun to read. She coming to terms with how he has always been a constant no matter how much they fought.
I loved how the party is going on in the background but DOBI has only one thing on her mind like a chant : That is SHIVA SHIVA SHIVA SHIVA. People be damned. I LOVED THIS.
You know what I don't know if anyone has pointed this out but I'm going to anyway.
Shiva really really does not want her to go...LIKE SUPER NO...but at the same time he is not stopping her. No matter what he wants, how much he wants her, he is still letting her go to find herself and that got to my heart. You can hear it in his words...his tone..."Or woh kaise? Tu toh jaa rahi hai. Aur waise bhi, tera yaha se jaane mein hi teri bhalai hai." or "Haan toh, Somnath ko baksh de," Shiva joked, leaning on the wall and looked at Raavi who was seated on the parked bike. "Jamnagar ko bhi Somnath ki Raavi ko milne ka mauka de."...In my head he's already breaking down from within and just using snarky comments to stop himself from breaking down in front of her and save her from any sort of guilt she might feel.
BEAUTYYYYYY.
Did not expect the kiss but not complaining.
Chapter 21
Saaru? Saaru.
Okay? Okay.
(Stop with the TFIOS reference pls thenks)
As I said he really was holding himself good in order to let her be yk? The kiss did the damage to that self restraint I was talking about. She gave him a taste of bliss and then made him remember how it might not be totally his at the moment. That's got to hurt. MEANNNNNN.
"Raavi, I love you." He said, urgency in his voice.
I read this as 'Raavi Main tujhse pyaar karta hun...' for intensity purposes. FIT MADLY. Okayyy...Raavi's I know that didn't sit well with me. She shouldn't have kissed him. I mean I understand the urge (lol no I understand nothing...I'm basically a possum who knows nothing of romance lol 😆) but should she have went ahead and kissed him? As of now I'm confused.
"Accha hai ki tu jaa rahi hai, mere jaise bail-buddhi toh nahi hoga hai na..."
HE HURTING MAX. I don't like it. I'm sad. I know she didn't intend to but the words along with the actions ended up breaking him. 💔
I love this version of Maami and Anita bruhh...truly. They're actually being a family to her and I really feel happy about it. The show doesn't give this vibe at all and I hate it. Raavi should have someone. This is just gorgeous dynamics right here.
She was really done crying for men.
YEAH BABY. Goooooo!! YOOHOOO!!! Yayyy.
But also...noooo...you hurt my babe Shiva. I mean unintentionally I still love you a lot I just love him a little more here.
I really thought she was going to leave and then he'll be like video calling her from Somnath to Jamnagar and then they'd get into a long distance-its complicated phase yk? Why though? I have absolutely no idea. LOL. My mind is weird.
Then he came like whooshhh and I was all AWWWIEEE baby.
"Rasta ka nahi pata, par Maami ki Behen ki Beti meri hai."
LE MY HEART : 
Maine tho rok diya tha do min ki saans leti hu thoda band na ho jaye. IT CAME SO SUDDEN AND OMG I LOST MY HEART TO IT.
Their moment was just...TOO PRECIOUS. I liked how they were like screw everyone we kissing and we gonna do whatever we want because we in love with each other. Y'all can go to damn hell. Love me some of that in a story scene.
Imma CRYINGGGGG Brb.
What a journey this has been. Mind numbingly perfect and all my heart to this story. I have fallen in love with this a little more with each update and I cannot be sad enough that it has ended. But glad there's a sequel though. Love that don't we.
#ContentAataRaheMainPadhtaRahun. ❤️
NO, I WILL NOT WRITE MORE SHIVI STORIES.
CHAL HATTT!! 🤣🤣🤣
Sasti Drama queen hum likhwa lenge. Tu ruk. Hum tho likhwa lenge...chahe apne prompts ka pitara khol ke hi kuch kyun na dena pade. Waise bhi main prompts baant-ti hi rehti hu 24*7. Tho likh tho aap rahi hi hain. There's nothing that can save you. 😆
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