I am tired (Shivi TS) (part 2 pg 3 completed) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🥰💔❤️Beautifully written 💕

Thank you love....

Don’t mind me. I'm just going to hide in the corner and cry reading this beauty.

Originally posted by: Anon21

Don’t mind me. I'm just going to hide in the corner and cry reading this beauty.

Oh Sri😆! Thank you for the compliment, but they got together in the end though! Go on and give yourself a happy smile for that as well....

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Ok. Just bumping this up because I don't want the thread to lock. Which I've finally figured out takes the completion of three months without any comments. 😳

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Ok. Just bumping this up because I don't want the thread to lock. Which I've finally figured out takes the completion of three months without any comments. 😳

Hm pdhnge..... Hmra pdhna reh gaya hai abhi.. Ab dikh gya samne😆

This was so beautiful. Shiva holding onto Raavi's dupatta was so heartbreaking and Raavi innocently asking him to pretend to like her was so sad. These two scenes really touched my heart. Amazing work!

Originally posted by: mandira2

This was so beautiful. Shiva holding onto Raavi's dupatta was so heartbreaking and Raavi innocently asking him to pretend to like her was so sad. These two scenes really touched my heart. Amazing work!

Again, glad you loved it, Mandira... ❤️

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

I love you. ❤️

Hain? For what? For bumping this up? You haven't read this before, Ritu? 🤪

PS Vaise, I love you too, okay? ☺️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Hain? For what? For bumping this up? You haven't read this before, Ritu? 🤪

PS Vaise, I love you too, okay? ☺️

re-read naam ka concept hai ek...jiske liye main jeeti hoon 🤡

This had been on my watch list for sooo long.... And sheehh...I should have read this lonnng ago. Teary eyed me writing this...

I have always said this Sathya..... Saying this again... I just love the way you write... The depth that you portray in your characters is pure bliss❤️

Raavi being tired of everyone and everything happening around was so heart wretching..her mother figure like maasi after her peace..her husband not being supportive enough..how is the girl supposed to deal with all of this.... Technically this should have been shown in the show. But they made mockery of raavi's feelings at every step.

I loved how you explored raavi's feelings and pain.

Her main bass thak chuki hoon 🥺

She getting into her shell was so heartbreaking.

Shiva realising her agony and being guilty was beautifully portrayed too.

Her requesting to act before her chacha... Such a pure hearted soul she is to consider about everyone's happiness around despite her state of mind.

Shiva accepting his share of mistake and asking raavi's sath for himself is the best thing he could have done... Simple straight conversations solving biggest of miseries.

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I Loved it ... You should know this by now😆