OUR DESTINY - FF Pt 18(19-Mar) updated link in comments - Page 13

Originally posted by: Harshadfan21

He will do it

Lovely each chapter is getting more interesting 💕💕

Lovely update.. Aaj chai banani seekhi he, next khana

Originally posted by: Monstuholic

par Akshu ki saree bhi Abhi ko hi drape karani padegi YouTube pe dekhke 😆

Originally posted by: Monstuholic

Abhi checking himself out I doubt as to why Akshu doesnt want to look at him was damn funny.. 🤪

And he being jealous of Neil, awww... poor baby.

Then Manjiri was so nice to Akshu, like her real mother, protecting her from Harsh's wrath.

Neil and Akshara teasing each other was a cherry on the cake. I loved it. I love when characters develop such bondings. I like bonds beyond the main couple. ❤️

Thanks for the tag 😊

Originally posted by: Imhaisha

Loved the chapter.....

Matlab Manjari ki friend ki sach mein beti nikhlegi Akshu.... 🤔

Ab Akshu saree pehenegi.... 🙈🙈🙈

tab Abhi bolega ek dum nayi naveli dulhan jaisi lagri ho....

Hayeeeee Abhira ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Waiting for next chapter.... 🤗

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@firewings_diya

So they are planning business already 😆😆

Nice update

Originally posted by: firewings_diya

shayad kya patha 😆

Yar ese mat kiya karo....

Tumhare notifications ayi....

Toh mujhe laga update kardiya...

Yaha ake pata chala 🤦🏻‍♀️.....

But okay.....

i m......

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It's awesome.. kitna Dil jeetega yeh Banda!! I love abhi's care and even manjari- akshu-neil scenes❤️❤️💕

Waiting for more 💫

Abhi wakes up in the morning because of a phone call.. He sees akshu is not in his bed..

While rubbing his eyes to see who called him..

" ye akshu kaha chali gayi"

{ Where did akshu go ?] Abhi mutters to himself.

Abhi Sees that it's manjari..

He calls her and goes near the window he sees akshu.. walking in the garden he smiles looking at her.. She is watering the plants by ensuring that her hair does not trouble her much..

Manjari: Abhi.. sunayi de rahi hai? Hello ?

[ Abhi can you hear me.. hello abhi]

Abhi wakes up from his dreamland..

Manjari: Abhi aaj toh weekend please aajana ghar pe.. tere dad bhi nahi hai

[Abhi.. It's weekend ..Please come home.. even harsh is not here... please abhi ]

Abhi: Par maa.. [But maa.. ]

Manjari : Please abhi..

Abhi: accha theek hai [Okay fine..]

He looks at the garden now akshu is missing..

" Ye ladki bhi na patha nahi kaha chali gayi"

[This girl i tell you.. She was here and now she is nowhere] Abhi mutters to himself..

He turns and sees akshu with a tray of two tea cups and with broad smile on her face.

Abhi: toh ye bath thi { So this was the matter}

Akshu: kya main samjhi nahi.. [What ? I did not understand?] her voice shows her surprise..

Abhi: kuch nahi,.. do jaldhi.. bed tea piye bina kaafi saal hogaya..

[nothing.. please give that tea.. It's been too long that I had bed tea..]

akshu smiles looking at him.. He drinks it like a kid..

Abhi: aise ghoor ke kyun dekh rahi ho.. [Why are you staring at me like this?]

Akshu: Kuch nahi and smiles.. [Nothing and smiles.]

Abhi : Waise maa ne weekend pe ghar bulaya hai humdono ko

[Btw maa has called us home this weekend ]

Akshu jumps in happiness.

Akshu: what.. I am so happy..

Abhi smiles looking at her excitement..

She starts packing bags..

Abhi: Arre hum 2 din ke liye ja rahe hai ithne kapde kyun?

[Arre we are just going there for two days why do you need so many cloths?]

Akshu: you will not understand she ignores and takes all her cloths and start packing her bag.. She sees the saree.. she smiles..

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Abhi bangs on the door..

Abhi: Akshu ithni der kyun laga rahi ho hame aaj hi jaana hai.. maa intezar kar rahi hogi.. jaldhi karo please

[Akshu why are you taking so much time to get dressed .. maa must be waiting ..please hurry up]

Akshu : Abhi.....

Abhi: Kya hua.. [What happend?]

Akshu starts crying..

Abhi: arre bolo toh sahi kya hua.. pehle darwaza kholo tum..

[Arre.. tell me what happend.. Please open the door first]

Akshu: woh [ that]

Abhi: haan sun raha hun [ yes i am listening]

Akshu: tum khudh hi dekhlo [You only see it]

She opens the door closing her eyes....

Abhi looks at her started laughing.. he bites his hand to control but he couldn't

Abhi: ye kya huliya banake rakha hai[ What is all this ?]

Akshu tried wearing saree from her youtube but it turned out to be wierd lungi instead.

Akshi starts crying loudly..

Abhi controls his laugh..

Akshu: Mujhe aunty ko surprise dena tha.. unhone ithne pyar se saree di thi.. and look at me i cant even wear this..

[I wanted to give surprise to manjari aunty.. she gave this with so much love and look at me i cant even wear this.. ]

she starts crying again

Abhi: sambhalo.. apne aap ko

[Please control yourself..]

Akshu: kya tumhe saree pehnane aathi hai..before he could reply tumhe kaise ayegi kuch bhi socthi hun main sorry..

[Do you know how to wear saree.. Before he could reply .. How will you kknow.. i act really foolish sometimes.. sorry]

Abhi: aathi hai.. [I know]

Akshu: par kaise [ But how]

Abhi: maa ko dekh dekh ke seekh liya [I used to see mom wearing so i learnt it from her]

Akshu is so happy..

Abhi: but.. tum mujhse kaise saree ?

[But .. will you be comfortable? ]

Akshu: koi bath nahi.. tumne hi toh college days main tumne sab dekha hai tumse kya chupana

[ No problem.. you only told na tat in your college days you have seen it all.. so what to hide from you ]

she smiles .. Pehla pehla pyar hai plays

Abhi hides his face as his words are helping him to get closer to her. His happiness is clearly scene on his face..

Akshu stands in her blouse and saree peticoat.. Abhi does not look at her as he does not want to make her uncomfortable.. Akshu understood his gesture..

Abhi is a truly gentleman.. He asks her to tuck the saree tight as he know she will feel uncomfortable if he does it..

He makes her spin so that he can wrap the saree around her waist..

and abhi slowly tucks the saree .. akshu can feel his touch.. Even though it was not intentional it was affecting her..

Abhi starts making saree pleats .. Asks akshu to tuck them in while looking still down.... She smiles and follows it...

He makes pleats again for pallu.. He asks her to hold it and comes from behind.. and pins them with her blouse..

Akshu looks at him from mirror and admires him for being so good to her all this while..

Abhi only knows how much he controlled himself all this while..

Abhi: It's done

Abhi was about to leave akshu's leg slips and she falls and he holds her in his arms..

he looks at her who is currently looking heavenly gorgeous with the saree that he wrapped her in.

Akshu is still closing her eyes.. she slowly opens it and sees abhi is staring at her..

Akshu: Kaisi lag rahi hun main? { How do I look?]

Abhi is still dumbfounded..

she waves at him in order to grab his attention..

Abhi: acchi lag rahi ho.. Jasie nayi naveli dulhan ...[ You are looking very good.. like a newly wedded bride]

He is lost in her thoughts he could hardly understand what is he balbbering..

Akshu feels shy and pushes him runs outside..

Abhi smiles like a fool who would love to be a fool infront of her forever and ever.

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To be continued

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