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Diya

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Posted: 3 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Imhaisha

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Phir wapas ake shanti ekant mein tumhare FF padhu....

itni mehnat karaogi mujhse....

Bacche ki jaan lo gi kya.....

Post kardo....

Abhi wala Abhi nahi abhi wala abhi .....

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Posted: 3 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: firewings_diya
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Diya

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Posted: 3 years ago

#43

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Akshu looks at abhi who is currently watching tv.. she tries to get his attention.
Akshu: ahem ahem..
Abhi looks at her..
Akshu: Abhi..

Abhi still looking at tv..
Abhi: haan.. bolo akshu..
[Yes...You wanted to say something akshu? ]

Akshu is not sure if he really wants to discuss but she wanted to know more about him. She can't have him as her friend unless she knows completely.

Akshu: woh... mujhe tumhara wardrobe saaf karthe waqt kuch mila

[It's just that I Found something while cleaning your wardrobe.. ]

Abhi looks at her confused..

Abhi:aisa kya mila tumhe?

[ What's that?]

Akshu: I think woh tumhari family picture hai. But mujhe theek se nahi patha. thum khud hi dekhlo.

[I think... It's your family picture. But I am not so sure. Please take a look at it]

Abhi takes that picture and sees it and a smile creeps on his face as well as his eyes become numb. Akshu looks at him smiling but she could sense the pain in his face.

Akshu:Kya hua abhi? Sab theek hai?

[What happend abhi.. Is everything alright?]

Akshu seems to be more concerned by looking at him.

Abhi Looks at her and smiles.

Abhi: Kuch nahi kuch acchi yaadein yaad agayi and smiles.

[Nothing akshu.. I remembered some good old days and smiles]

Akshu is relieved that he is not sad atleast. Akshu tries to diver his mood.

Akshu : Tumhare pass toh atleast tumhari yadasth hai yad karne ko. Mujhe dekho and makes sad face..

[Atleast you have your memory with you abhi.. Look at me how unfortunate I am and makes sad face]

Akshu goes and sits on the stairs

Abhi thinks that she starts giving more pressure to her brain which is not good for her. Abhi comes and sits next to her on the stairs

Abhi : Akshu look at me..

Akshu looks at him. Even though she did it to divert his mind but she is really want to get her memory back. She realized that the life she is living is a lie without her identity.

Abhi: Akshu...Tum ithna stress mathlo. Main jithna jaldhi hosake uthna jaldi patha lagaunga tum kaun ho. I promise... Please aise math ro.. Please..

[Akshu..Don't take too much stress. I will try my level best to find your identity. I promise... Please don't cry]

Akshu: Kya karu main abhi.. Mujhe toh mera pura naam bhi nahi patha.. Kya hai mera poora naam.. Kya mera naam Akshaya hai .. ya phir Akshitha..ya shayad Akshatha.. She seems to stressed now

[What should I do abhi.. I don't even know my name.. What's my complete name is it Akshaya,Is it akshitha or akshatha.. ]

Abhi thinks that she starts giving more pressure to her brain which is not good for her. Abhi comes and sits next to her on the stairs

Abhi: sshhh.. shhhh. Dont take stress.

He cups her face in order to stop her.

Abhi: Abhi ke liye tum sirf akshu ho samjhi :) Poora naam ki zaroorath tab padhegi jab tumhe tumhare apne milenge. Mere liye akshu kaafi hai and he smiles.

[To abhi you are just akshu..understood. You will need your full name when you meet you family. For me akshu is enough and smiles.]

Abhi wipes her tears and hugs her tighly.. Abhi caresses her hairs and smiles. After sometime abhi breaks the hug.

Abhi: waise tum mere kapdo main kaafi cute lag rahi ho.. Cute si joker. and starts laughing.,..

[Btw in these cloths you are looking very cute.. You are looking like a cute joker and starts laughing]

Akshu hits him harder on his chest...

Abhi: Ouch....

Akshu: Abhi tum bhi na..

[Abhi you na ]

She gets angry and she was about to leave her legs slip and she falls on top of him. They share an eyelock.. Abhi notices that akshu's hairs are on her face. he slowly removes that so that he can see her clearly. Akshu is confused as she is not sure what abhi is doing.

Akshu: Abhi...

Abhi: hmmm akshu..

Akshu: kya tum mujhe jaane de sakthe ho please.. tumne mujhe kaafi zor se pakda hai..

[Can you please let me go ? You are holding me really very very tight]

Abhi comes back to his senses he loosens his grip so that akshu can get up.

Abhi: I am sorry.. and smiles..

Akshu: it's okay and smiles back.

Akshu: wasie tumne bathaya nahi iss picture main kaun kaun hai..

[Btw you did not tell me who and all are there in this picture]

Abhi: Abhi bathatha hoon.. Ye meri ma hai "Manjari Birla" Kaafi acchi hai aur bholi bhi..

Aur ye mera bhai neil mera sabse favourite.. Aur ye main hun

[I will tell you.. See this is my mom Manjari Birla.. She is very nice and she is very innocent too.. And this is my favourite brother "Neil".. and this is me]

Akshu smiles looking at his childhood photo.

Abhi: aur ye parth hai.. mera bhai.. mere tauji ka beta.. Aur ye mere tauji aur tayiji .

[and this is parth.. he is my cousin brother.. and there are my uncle and aunt]

Akshu: aur tumhare dad nahi hai isme?

[And your dad is not here in this pic. ]

Abhi: Nahi iss photo main nahi hai unhe chodo...

[No he is not there in this photo]

Akshu nods.

Akshu: Aur ye sab bacche kaun hai akshu ask him inncoently..

[and who are these kids akshu ask him inncoently..]

Abhi : mujhe ithna kuch yad nahi hai.. ye meri best friend thi bachpan main. Main isse na toofan bulatha tha.. Aur ye sab iske family members hai.

[I don't remember exactly.. But she was my childhood best friend. I used to call her as tornado.. and these are her family members. ]

Akshu smiles par kyun???

[But Why.....]

Abhi: Patha nahi woh thi hi aise . Jaha par bhi jaathi toofan ajatha tha.. hasi kushi aur bathon ka toofan..

[I don't know. She was like that.. Where ever she used to go she used to bring storm of laughter, joy and she is non stop talker.]

Akshu: shayad kaafi close friend hai tumhari. Ab kaha hai woh?

[I think she was very close to.. Where is she now?]

Abhi: Patha nahi.. Mujhe ithna kuch yad nahi hai ki kya hua tha uss waqt.

[I don't know.. I don't remember exactly what happend at that time.]

Akshu smiles looking at him as he looks very cute while talking about his old days.

Akshu: abhi tum akele kyun rehthe tumhara toh ithna bada pariwar hai?
[Abhi why do you stay alone.. you have such a big family with you?]

Abhi losts in his thoughts..
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Manjari:"Chala ja abhi.. please chala ja. Main nahi chahthi tumhare aur tumhare papa ke beech roz jhagde ho.."
[Leave abhi.. please leave.. i dont want to see you and your dad fighting every day like this]
Abhi: but maa main hi kyun.. meri kya galthi hai.. aap mujhe kyun apne aap se door kar rahi hai.. mera hai hi kaun apke siva.. aap please aisa math keejiye mere sath
[But mom why me?. Whats my fault in all this. Why are you pushing me away from you.. i don't have anyone else other than you.. please don't do this to me maa..]
Manjari: janthi hun tu mujhse kithna pyar kartha hai.. lekin main ye bhi janthi hun tumhare papa kiss daur se guzar rahe hai. Main nahi chahthi tumhari wajah se unhe kuch bhi stress ho.. please samjho.aur main tumhe harr hafthe milne aungi.. i promise.
[I know.. I know abhi that you love but i also know what's your dad is going through. I really don't want you to be the reason for his stress.. please understand.. and i will come to meet you every week.. i promise]
Abhi with heavy heart
Abhi: theek hai maa agar aap yahi chahthe ho toh
[Okay maa i will fullfill your wish..]

Manjari with heavy heart hugs him.. she tries to control her tears she is stuck between her husband and son

Fb ends..

Akshu: abhi... she waves her hand to grab his attention..
Abhi: kya hum kuch aur bath kar sakthe hai
[ Can we talk something else please]
Akshu understood that he is not so comfortable to share his pain

Akshu: hmmm... theek hai toh bolo tumhara bachpan kaisa tha and smiles..
[Hmmm... okay so tell me about your childhood]
Abhi smiles
Abhi starts speaking about his childhood memories. How he used to steal mangoes from neighbours how manjari used to shout at him. Akshu sleeps holding his arm on his shoulder.

Abhi looks at her and smiles. He carefully removes her hand and picks her up and slowly takes her to his room. Places her gently on the bed. He removes her hair strand again as its disturbing him from looking at her. He goes near to her ears and whispers.

Abhi: Good night akshu and smiles..

He puts a blanket on her and he goes and occupies sofa which is near his bed. He sleeps looking at her by adoring

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Sunshine_H

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Posted: 3 years ago

#44

Akshu hi hai Abhi ki bachpani best friend.... us photo mein joh bacchi hai.... woh Akshu aur usko family hai.... haina?....

Hayeee

Don’t want to spoil everyone’s next part....

That is why i posted like this....

i m to greedy ..... but update soon 🤣

sorry to pressurise you.... but I can’t stop myself from what will happen.... 🤣🤣🤣

isilye mein FF complete hojaye toh hi padhti hoon....

Your bad luck meri jaisi FAN mili tum hai.... 🤣

I will be pestering you..... 🙈

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Diya

@firewings_diya

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Team Abhimanyu (Gen 3)

Posted: 3 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Imhaisha
Akshu hi hai Abhi ki bachpani best friend.... us photo mein joh bacchi hai.... woh Akshu aur usko family hai.... haina?....

Hayeee

Don’t want to spoil everyone’s next part....

That is why i posted like this....

i m to greedy ..... but update soon 🤣

sorry to pressurise you.... but I can’t stop myself from what will happen.... 🤣🤣🤣

isilye mein FF complete hojaye toh hi padhti hoon....

Your bad luck meri jaisi FAN mili tum hai.... 🤣

I will be pestering you..... 🙈

I don't want to give spoilers for now 😆 keep guessing 😆 i love those who appreciate the ffs 😊 they really motivate writers to write more ❤️ you have my heart ❤️

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Anu

@anuandavi

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Posted: 3 years ago

#46

Wow.. I guess Akshu Abhimanyu ki chidhood frnd he.. He na...

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Nidhii

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Posted: 3 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Imhaisha

What are you waiting for..... 🤷🏻‍♀️

Mein waha ake post button click karke jayu....

Phir wapas ake shanti ekant mein tumhare FF padhu....

itni mehnat karaogi mujhse....

Bacche ki jaan lo gi kya.....

Post kardo....

Abhi wala Abhi nahi abhi wala abhi .....

🤣