CHAL GHAR CHALEIN (part 7 pg 17) completed - Page 10

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Originally posted by: aimmyangle

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Will update soon hope you like it😘🥰😍

It was lovely❤️

I am glad Gaura are going adoption way they deserve their share of happiness😊

Shivi part was cute

Finally Suman realises Raavi's pain and where her family went wrong. ❤️

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

It was lovely❤️

I am glad Gaura are going adoption way they deserve their share of happiness😊

Shivi part was cute

Finally Suman realises Raavi's pain and where her family went wrong. ❤️

Wonderful chapter👏, totally a joy yo read…loving how Shiva keeps asking Raavi for attention 💕💕💕

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Wonderful chapter👏, totally a joy yo read…loving how Shiva keeps asking Raavi for attention 💕💕💕

PART-VII

The morning sun shone bright and so does hope in GauRa. They both were joyous as well as nervousness they didn't know will the kids accept them or not. They have already talked about the adoption to the family. Even suman also didn't interefere as she was herself fond of those kids. Sumsn wanted to protest for a second thought but after seeing dhara and gaumbi smiling wholeheartedly she refused to create any scene and gave them blessing to accomplish there task.

gaura requested shivi to accompany them to the orphanage. Than four of them head towards their destiny with hope of acceptance in there eyes.

They reached the orphanage and were welcomed by giggling of kids playing around. Aayan came and welcomes shivi and than shivi introduce gaura to him and tell them there purpose of coming.

And aayan agrees for the deal but says,

"Main raavi ke assurance par apko bache handover kar dunga par jaisa raavi ne kaha ki dono bachon se baat apko karni hogi aur haan please mujhe apke official details chahiye jaise kii annual income, savings account record aur residency.. . .. . Baki app log bacho se baat kar sakte hain.. . .. . . Aur haan vo dono inseparable hain main naji chahunga ki app unn nein se kisi ikk ko chune.. . .. . . Dono ko saath mein accept karna hoga apko.. . .. . "

Dhara and gaumbi nods happily and shiva goes woth aayan to do formalities. Raavi silently just went with gaura without there notice as she know this topic is very sensitive for the kids and she do not want them to be alone.

Dhara and gaumbi goes to the backyard and nishant and ronak came running to them in happiness and ronak say,

"Welcome... . .. Apka hamate ghar mein swagat hain.. . .. . . Raavi dii nahin aayi... ."

Nishant adds,

"Vese toh hum apke ghar aate hain ajj app aaye hain toh full on masti karenge.. . ..aur raavi di nahi hai toh hume apko comfortable feel krwana hai......... "

Dhara nods and nishant adds,

"Mujge pata hain apko na nature bhut pasand hain hamate yahan par na ikk best place hain app ke liye.. . .. Toh chale.. . .. "

Kids drag both of them to tree which have a bench spottee near it's roots with dried leaves all around it giving it a rustic look. And a serene sight perfect to talk thought gaura.

Dhara says,

"Nishant ronak hum yahan app se baat karne aaye hain"

Both kids nod happily and dhara makes them sit on the bench and herself sits on her knees and hold there hands gautam sits next to her and dhara says,

"Nishant ronak hume app se bhut jaroori baat karni hai....... "

Both nod in unison.

"App jante ho na ki hamara sara pariwaaar aap se kitna pyaar karta hain........ Jab bhi app log ghar par aate ho mera toh apko wapas bhejne ka man nahi karta........ "

Ronak says,

"Mujhe bhi apke saath khelna bhut pasand hai....... "

Dhara says,

"Agar main kahu ki main app dono ko hamesha ke liye apne ghar lejana chahti hoon toh......... "

Both looked ar her in confusion and gaumbi says,

"We want to become your parents......... Bacha.......... Hum apko adopt karna chahta hain........"

Both look at them and were at verge of crying and nishant says,

"App humare.... Hum dono ke mumma papa banoge..... "

Dhara nods happily and ronak holds nishant's hand and says,

"Nishu tu chal yahan se....... "

Ronak drags nishant with him while nushant keep on looking at Gaura with tears. And gaura were beyond shocked at sad they now had tears also.

Raavi cones to them and says,

"Dhara dii bacho ne kuch jawab nahi diya hai...... Unhe tym dijiye..... App yahin ruko...... Gaumbi app honsla mat harro...... "

Raavi assures them and leaves to see children.

Here ronak and nishant were sitting under the tree. And nishant says,

"Tu mujhe kio lekar aaya vo humare mumma papa banna chahte hai.... Tujhe toh kitne pasand the na..... "

Ronak says,

"Nishu tu na sara din gusse mein ghumta hain sab ko bataata hain ki tu strong hai par mujhe pata hain ki tu ikk dum emotional sa hai....... Mujhse bhi jyada issi liye tu baat sunkar khush ho gya..... "

Nishant says,

"Toh khush hone ki hi baat hai..... Vo dono kitne ache hai......uncle aunty hume pyaar bhi bhut karte hain....."

"Nishu........ Mumma papa chod kar chale jate hain....... Yeh log bhi yehi karenge mumma papa bankar....... "

Nishant looks at ronak with tears in his eyes and nishant says,

"Tu hamesha sab ke samne rondu saa ban jata hai aur akele mein mujhe danta rehta hai...... Main kitna khush ho gaya tha....... "

Ronak was about to retort but raavi who was listening to them comes and sits woth them under the tree and says,

"Aur kaisi hai meri bacha party...... "

Both doesn't respond and raavi looks at them and says,

"Dhara dii ke bare mein soch rahe ho........ "

Ronak now becones teary eyed and hugs raavi and says,

"Vo dono bhi chale jayenge..... Hume chod kar......... Vo bhi chale jayenge......"

Raavi pats his back and nishant also hugs them crying. Raavi pat there back and says holding them closer to her and says,

"Mere bache toh bhut pyaare hain koii nahi chodega inhe........ "

Both look at her and raavi cup there faces,

"Mumma papa apko chodkar nahi gaye the....... Maine bataya tha na......... Ki vo log god ke paas gaye hain important kaam karne par un hone mujhe bheja ki Raavi hamare bacho ke pass jaa aur unka dhyaan rakhna......... Samjhe....."

Raavi wipe there tears and ronak says,

"Mujhe pata hain ki mom dad vapas nahi aayenge........ Par main complaint nahi kar raha hoon........ Agar dhara aunty aur gaumbi uncle bhi chale gaye toh...... "

Raavi says parting his head,

"Mera robka itna bada ho gaya........ Sab kuch samjhta hain....... Aur maine dekha abb toh nishant ka bhi dhyan rakhta hain........ Acha ikk story sunau...... "

Both nod and raavi settle them on her lap and says,

"Ikk baar ki baat hain........ God ne socha ki na vo sad logon ko dhundege aur unhe khushi denge taki god ka kingdom hai na hamesha acha rahe........ Toh god ne na birds ko bola unki help karne ko.......

Birds ne god ki baat mani aur nikal gayi sad logon ko dhundne........

Jab birds vapas aayi toh god ne pucha mujhe batao ki kon hai jisse help chahiye.......

Toh na birds ne naa god ko itne sare naam bataye ki god hairaan ho gaye ki vo itne sare logon ki help kaise karenge....... Toh god tension mein aa gaye aur unhone birds se pucha ki vo kya kare.........

Toh na ikk bird ne kaha kiii kio na hum angels banaye...... Jo sad logon ke paas jaye aur unki help kare...... Kio kii god nahi paunch payenge na sab ke pass...... Toh god ne kaha ki hum ajj hi angels ko bheje toh unhone angels banaye aur bhej diye apne kingdom mein.........

Vo angels ne god ka kaam easy kar diya aur sab log khush bhi ho gaye........

Toh god toh har jagah nahi jaa sakte toh unhone na angels banaye hain jo ki koii bhi ho sakta hain........bass hume na unhe accept kar lena chahiye......."

Both kids look at her and say,

"Uncle aunty hamare angel hain...... "

Raavi kisses their heads and says,

"Piche dekho...... "

They bith turn and see gaura sitting on there knees and looking at them and both look at raavi again and raavi nods in a yes and both kids move towards gaura and hugs and kids says,

"App hamare angel ho....... "

Dhara says,

"App dono nere angels ho mere pyaare angels......."

Gaumbi says expectantly,

"App chaloge hamare saath...... "

Both kids chuckles and says,

"Hum toh ready hai..... Dad..... "

Gaumbi looks at them teary eyed as he have craved to listen dad and now he is getting it so he cannot sustain this feeling and kids add,

"App hume rote huye lekar jaoge..... "

Gaura nods in a no and meanwhile raavi admired them and Shiva comes with aayan after completing formlities and aayan says,

"Final signature kar dijiye fir bacho ko le jayiye........ "

Gaura sign happily while kids hold there hands all 6 of them leave to there house. Which bow eould have laughter of children there own children.

THE END

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ODETTE_DELUSION

This made me so emotional.

First because I love this story and itms ending 😭❤️🥺 Raavi’s orphan story had not been explored in the story at all, I really wanted a track like this in the show but you wrote it soo beautifully here ❤️

Secondly, the two kids and Gaura getting their jholi of khushiyaan makes me happy. No matter how much we dislike their methods, these two really did a lot of their three bandars and even Raavi, so them getting kids they can call their own is just 🥺❤️

Thanks for this storyy, really lives up to the quote Chal Ghar Chalein in every way possible❤️

Originally posted by: Kristmas

This made me so emotional.

First because I love this story and itms ending 😭❤️🥺 Raavi’s orphan story had not been explored in the story at all, I really wanted a track like this in the show but you wrote it soo beautifully here ❤️

Secondly, the two kids and Gaura getting their jholi of khushiyaan makes me happy. No matter how much we dislike their methods, these two really did a lot of their three bandars and even Raavi, so them getting kids they can call their own is just 🥺❤️

Thanks for this storyy, really lives up to the quote Chal Ghar Chalein in every way possible❤️

Aww sweet ending

Raavi's talk with kids was heartwarming

I am glad kids agreed to be with Gaura.

Loved it Amrit.

Can we have an epilogue please.