Jaan hazir, par vo...... (Updated part lV page 17) completed - Page 9

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

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Originally posted by: Goodluckok

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This was totally unpredictable😲

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Originally posted by: mr.Flawed

This was totally unpredictable😲

Pura ka pura Heartattack deke shuru hua story💔

Interesting plotline.

Please tag me from the next update😃

Will try to update as soon as possible...........

Meanwhile read my thus story i have updated it recently.....

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pandya-store/5261520/love-will-find-a-way-part-8pg-18

Reopening this one cause pls update kardo 😂❤️

Have been waiting for this one since the teaser❤️

aand I’ve been feeling sad for my Raavi baby everywhere need a strong one ❤️

P.S. This post made me a senior member, which is apt cause Ive been feeling like Ive aged 10 years in the past 10 days cause life can do that to a person 🙈. Now toh update yaaar ❤️

Originally posted by: Kristmas

Reopening this one cause pls update kardo 😂❤️

Have been waiting for this one since the teaser❤️

aand I’ve been feeling sad for my Raavi baby everywhere need a strong one ❤️

Actually i am working on various layouts and looking into which gets better into the shell.............

Will try to update soonish........

PART-ll

Ashok dragged raavi holding by her hairs and Raavi had tears in her eyes of pain, of disbelief , of betrayal.

Everyone im the neighborhood witness the scene unfolding in front of them.

Raavi was continuously shouting to leave her and wriggling in his hold. Her hairs were hurting and all the people were observing tge scene and whispering. Raavi was feeling disgusted and embarrassed at the same time and than ashok put her in the car with a thud and drove tge car off.

They reached his house and Raavi didn't budged from the car and ashok said with sugar cotted words,

"Dekho Raavi..... Ikk baar meri baat sun lo...... Main tumhe sab batunga...... Andar chalo tumhara hi ghar hai..... "

Raavi looked at him and said,

"Ashok please mujhe jaane do..... Yeh mera ghar nahi hai..... Jo tum chahte ho vo kabhi ho nahi sakta....... Samjh kio nahi rahe tum....... "

Ashok retorted,

"Raavi pyaar se chalo varna jabardasti krni mujhe aati hai..... "

Raavi didn't reactef ant ashok sogned his bodyguard and they hold Raavi and dragged her inside.

He headed towards the room and his people followed him. Once they reached he said,

"Tum log jayo...... "

Raavi looked at him and as the people left dread settle in her whole being and she was on verge of crying and thoughts of most worst were crossing her mind and than Ashok says,

"Raavi idhar aayo mere saath baitho......."

Raavi shouts

"Mujhe jaane do...... "

Ashok twists her hand behind her back and brings her face closer to him holding either side of her cheek and pressing it and says,

"Pyaar samjh mein nahi aa rha tumhe........ Abb legally tum meri ho...... Main jo marji kar sakta hoon tumhare saath par main cooperate kar raha hoon na.... Tum bhi karo thoda...... Aur meri patience test mat karo agar mera dimag hil gaya na toh main bhut bura ho sakta hoon...... Aur tum acha hai ki adjust krna seekh lo kio kio abb tumhe yahin rehna hai mere saath tumhe koii yahan se lekar nahi jaa sakta...... Yaa main kahu koii lekar jana nahi chahta....... Tumhare pati ne khud tumhe mujhe de diya apni bhabhi ke liye........... 15 lakh diye hai maine tumhare liye............15 lakh ki keemat thi tumhari..........Tumhari family mein se kisi ne ikk awaz nahi uthayi....... Toh tumhe idhar hi rehna hai.... Acha hoga...... Aram se raho varna jabardasti karni toh mujhe aati hi hai....... "

Saying this he leaves Raavi and his feirce self changed in a minute like a chameleon and says lovingly,

"Aao na Raavi"

Raavi just looked at him and was processing his words and was regreting that whatever he spoke was true she can't deny it and the scene was playing in front of her eyes and than Ashok dragged her yo the bed andade sit there and sat next to her on the floor and hold her hand and said dreamily chuckling in between careesing her hand,

"Tumhe pata hai Raavi jab hum school mein the na makn tumhe tabse pasand krta hoon....... Tum toh meri taraf dekhti hi nahi thi.......... Tumhari cute harkatein sab kuch dekhta tha main........

Par tum sara din Shiva ke saath hoti thi...... Ladti rehti thi..... Usko tang karti thi......... Ya fir dev dev karti thi..... Abb batao main kya karta..... Mera bhut dil dukhta tha......... "

He pauses and looks at Raavi and Raavi was looking at him teary eyed as she was not liking the way he was touching him without her consent but she can't do anything as she has been sold to him and a thing can't go against the buyer and he says,

"Yeh dekho tumhari yeh aankhe..... Koii inge dekhkar kaise na pighle...... Tumhare college ke bahar bhi main aata rehta tha......... Tumhe dekhne ke liye.......... Tumhari ikk jhalak aur din pura ho jata tha....... Aur phir ikk din tumhari shaadi ke bare mein pata lgga........... "

He than put his head on her lap and Raavi's tears made there way out and disgust and helplessness was what she feeling she became stiff and ashok encircled hidms arm around her waist still sitting on floor head on her lap and said,

"Pta hain mujhe kitna bura lagga tha........ Par maine na apne dil ko samjha liya.. . .. . .. Phir pata laga ki Dev ne tumhe chod diya.. . .. Sabke samne aise.. . .. . Mujhe itna gussa aaya na.. . .. Itna jyada.. . .. . . Matlab koii tumhare saath esa kaise kar sakta hain.. . .. . . Par phir main khush bhi ho gaya main aane wala tha tumhare paas taki tumhara sahara ban saku.. . .. . .. . . Par tab rak bhut der ho gayi thi tum aur Shiva.. . .. . Tum dono ki shaadi ho gayi thi .. . .."

He pauses and than looks at her and cups her face and says,

"Maine tabse iss pal ka intezaar kiya ki kab tum mere saath aise............ Aur dekho ajj tum mere saath ho...... Mere paas ho........"

Raavi's tears were falling continuously and she joined her hands and said,

"Please....... Ashok mujhe jaane do........ Main tumhe pyaar nahin de paungi........ Please......... Please....... "

Ashok stood up and look at Raavi and said angrily,

"Main tumhe dur nahi jaane dunga....... Khud se...... Tumhe mujhe pyaar karna hi hoga......... Samjh rahi ho tum........ Tumhe mujhe pyaar karna hi hoga....... "

Raavi stands up and says with equal anger,

"Tum samjh kio nahi rahe ho damit........ Main shiva se pyaar karti hoon....... Usne bhale hi na kiya ho par main karti hoon........ Mera dil uska ho chuka hai..... Aur tum jitni bhi koshish kar lo main nahi krr sakti pyaar. "

And the very next moment ashok slapped her and she fell on the floor with a thud and looked at him and ashok kicked the table near by and said,

"Tumhare liya itna kuch kiya maine........ Aur tum uss shiva ki mala jape jaa rahi ho..........

Abb toh meri jidd hai tumhe toh mera hi hona hai...........ajj Raat yahin raho akeli............"

He moves out locking the door and Raavi goes and continuously knocks the door and pleads him to open it and at last sits down crying and says,

"Kio...... Kio........ Itni nafrat karta hai mujhse shiva itni jyada ki tune mujhe bech diya 15 lakh ke badle.........

Isse acha toh mujhe divorce hi de deta na.............. Maana dhara bhabhi ko tu sabse upar manta hai.... Par main mera kya shiva kio kiya...... "

She starts hitting her head woth her palm and said,

"Main hi pagal hoonm... Main hi pagal hoon.......... Mujhe toh vo kuch manta ji nahi. ...... Arre dhara dii se ladai huyi toh divorce ki baat ched di thi usne....... Vo toh mere saath rehna hi nahi chahta........... Aur main sapne sajati rahi.......... Apni jindagi uske saath dekhne laagi........ Aur usne mujhe........... Ahhhh......"

She cries and cries for her fate, and cries for prioritizing these people above everyone.

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MEANWHILE IN PANDYA NIWAS,

After ashok left with Raavi, everyone confronted Shiva. Gaumbi slapped him. And after some drama everyone retired to there places s nothing has happened and Shiva goes to his room helpless he was he was constantly thinking of Raavi about her well being but can't do anything as he was bounded and than Gaumbi enters in his room and come near him and says,

"Shiva sach bata kya hua tha....... "

Shiva cried and hugged and told him everything about how he was trapped.

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it was a short one ...... Plaese do cooperate as i was busy somewhere and woth that i was not able to shape this further if you all have some ideas do share guys.....

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Beautifully written😭

Dard is what iam feeling..for my ShiVi💔

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