Jaan hazir, par vo...... (Updated part lV page 17) completed - Page 11

Originally posted by: virangna2005

maarne ka toh bahut mann hai😡😡

but chal tujhe bakash diya.....

par next part me shiva agr kuch kiya nhi toh....👊🤛🤛

btw nice update

Next part mein toh abb shiva ko kuch krna hi padega nahi toh isss baar nahi bachungi...........

Thank you for reading 🥰🥰

Will update soon😇

Amazing ❤❤

Maybe ashok in more bad light......

Also Shiva coming with full proof plan...not just maar peet....

Raavi is a sweetheart.....

Waiting for the update.....

Originally posted by: Goodluckok

Amazing ❤❤

Maybe ashok in more bad light......

Also Shiva coming with full proof plan...not just maar peet....

Raavi is a sweetheart.....

Waiting for the update.....

Will update soon.......

So emotional just loved it waiting for next update.. Update soon plz itna time mat lagana ab

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

So emotional just loved it waiting for next update.. Update soon plz itna time mat lagana ab

Will try to updare soon😅😅

PART-lll

Gaumbi listened everything that shiva said and says,

"Matlab tujhe fasaya gaya hai....... Par gadhere tune Raavi ko le jane se roka kio nahi......"

Shiva says guiltily and tears in his eyes,

"Main kuch soch samajh nahi paa raha tha gaumbi........... Ki kya ho raha hai........ Ussne mujhe papers dikhaye aur mera dimag blank ho gaya....... Par Raavi vo kaisi hogi.... Vo theek toh hogi na gaumbi...... Main kya karu"

Gaumbi wipes his tears and says,

"Raavi ka jo bhootnath hai vo kya krna chahta hai........... Yeh bol.... "

Shiva's expression turns into a stern look and says,

"Meri raavi ke paas jana chahta hoon use batana chahta hoon ki main uske saath kabhi aisa nahi karunga........ Par gaumbi koii saboot nahi hai...... "

Gaumbi says patting his shoulder,

"Ae shiva tu kabse itna sochne lag gaya........ Jo tu karna chahta hain na vo kar....... Main kal Subah tak koii na koii saboot lae aaunga....... Tu bass jaa aur Raavi ka bhootnath jo kehta hai vo karr........ "

Shiva looks at gaumbi and gaumbi gives him a assuring look and shiva rushes out, Gaumbi smiles a bit and than get on the work to get proof.

Shiva reaches in front of ashok's house he tries to figure out where must be Raavi. He goes to the backside as in front guards were abundant. He looks at the open windows around and climbed up the pipe. He reached a store room there he went near tge door as he can listen 2 gaurds talking,

One said,

"Yeh ashok sahab uss ladkii se pyaar ke daave kar rahe the aur abhi use thappad mar kar aaye hai......... "

Other says,

"Kya lagta hain....... Kya bolegi yeh ladki kal...... Kal tak ka samay hain isske paas nahi toh ashok sahab jabardasti karenge iske saath........"

First one says,

"Chal yeh room lock karde taki ladki bahar na aa paye theek hai aur saath vala store bhi band karde.... "

They locked both the rooms and shiva came to know that Raavi us in next room so he started finding way to the room but he was locked so he again stood on the pipe and flipped to the room's window where Raavi was. He was broken seeing the sight in front of him. Raavi was sitting on the floor her head resting on the bed end and she was hugging her knees closer to her chest and her cheeks were having traces of dried tears she was looking at nothing particular but was lost as if thinking something and shiva go near her and says,

"Raavi...........main aa gya....."

Raavi woke up seeing him and rage filled her eyes and she says,

"Chale jaa shiva.......... Kio aaya hai abb............. Dhara bhabhi ki khushiyaan puri huyi hai jao jaakar celebrate karo.............jaise pichli baar mujhe divorce de kar dhol bajaye the iss baar mujhe bechkar dhol baja lo............"

"Raavi kya bol rahi hai........ Meri baat toh sun plaese........ "

"Chale jaa chale jaa........yahan se mujhe khud ko sambhalne ka time de de......... "

Shiva says,

"Meri baat sun Raavi...... Bas ikk baar please....."

Raavi looks at him tears on brim of her eyes and eyes blod shot her cheek had fingerprints (cause of slap) on side of lip had dried blood she took steps forward and started hitting shiva on his chest saying,

"Kya bolega tu haan...... Kya bolega.......... Kuch hain bolne ko........... Aur kyon aaya tu...... "

tear made there way out of her eyes and she holds his shirt and kneels on her knee crying and speaks in a choking voice,

"You sold me shiva........... Tune mera sauda kar diya......... "

Shiva nods his head in a no. He himself became vulnerable seeing her like this and Raavi continues,

"Tune dhara dii ki khushiyon ke liye mujhe kisi aur ladke ko de diya............. Dhara di ke liye IVF bhut jaroori tha par main....... Main jaroori nahi thi kya shiva itni c bhi nahi........tu mujhe bolta main apne gehne bech deti kuch krti par tune toh mujhe hi.......... "

Shiva says cupping her face,

"Nahi raavi ....... Main aisa krne ka soch bhi nahi sakta........ "

He than narrates the whole scene to her and says,

"Mere pass meri sachai ka koyi saboot nahi hai........ Bass...... Main sach bol raha hoon Raavi main aisi harkat kabhi nahi karunga...... "

Raavi looks at him and asks him innocently,

"Shiva tune sach mein mujhe nahi becha..... "

Shiva nods.

Raavi pounces on him crying and hugs him tightly they both fell on floor and Raavi murmurs,

"Main daar gayi thi....... Shiva..... Mujhe laga ki mera aur dhara bhabhi ke jhagde ki vajah se tu mujhse gussa tha aur tune divorce ki baat bhi ki thi........ Aisa laga tune mujhe gusse mein aakar ........ "

Shiva calms her down and says,

"Main chahe jitna bhi gussa ho jau apni raavi ko khud se dur nahi karunga........... "

Raavi says still in his embrace,

"Shiva ashok ne mujhe mara aur mujhe kal tak ka tym diya hai........ Mujhe nahi rehna yahan..... Yeh bhut ganda hain........ Mujhe bhut bute tarike se dekhta hain....... Please kuch kar............. "

Shiva says by moving his hand in to and fro on her back to comfort her,

"Raavi mere paas saboot nahi hai.......aur agar main aise tujhe lae gaya na toh vo court ki madad se tujhe vapas lae aaega....... Gaumbi ne kaha hai vo kuch na kuch karenge.......... "

Raavi replies,

"Shiva agar gaumbi kuch nahi laa paye toh. ..... Toh kya hoga.... "

Shiva looks at her and says,

"Jo bhi hoga....... Main uss ashok ko meri Raavi ke paas batmeezi karne nahi dunga..... Fir chahe mujhe kuch bhi karna pade........ "

Shiva kisses her forehead. Raavi snuggles more into him mumbles,

"Shiva mera trust mat todna.......... Teri aankhon mein sachai dekhi hai maine aur iss liye tujhpar vishwas kiya......... Please yeh sab jhooth na ho............... Kio kii agar mera vishwaas toot gaya na shiva main khud ko kho dungi.......... Aur aise kho dungi ki shayad kabhi vapas na aa pau......... Please....... "

Shiva holds her closer to him and than pick her up in his arms and places her on bed and was about to leave when Raavi holds his hand looks at him with utmost innocence her eyes were glassy and says,

"I need you Shiva.......... "

Shiva looks at her deep eyes and simply got lost and thought of no ifs and buts and sleeps beside her and raavi hugs him tighter. And shiva thinks.

Innocence is what she us made up of...........

God how can you make someone so trusting, even after this blow she believed me.. . .. . . If someone else would have been in her olace she won't have listened to him either but here she is right next to me in my arms.. . .. . ..

Just give me strength so that her belief is not shaken.. . .. . .

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Hope you all like this guys.. . .. .

This story will have one more part.. . .

Do give your suggestions so that i can improve.. . .. .

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ODETTE_DELUSION

Ufff the way u maintained raavi's characters all throughout the story 💗💗💗💗💗

Usne exactly waise hi react kia jaise woh show me karti hai usse kisi bhi proof ki zarurat nahi bas logo ka sach aankho me padh leti hai

Secondly loved how gaumbi supported shiva

I m too excited to how shiva will rescue her 😃😃

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Ufff the way u maintained raavi's characters all throughout the story 💗💗💗💗💗

Usne exactly waise hi react kia jaise woh show me karti hai usse kisi bhi proof ki zarurat nahi bas logo ka sach aankho me padh leti hai

Secondly loved how gaumbi supported shiva

I m too excited to how shiva will rescue her 😃😃

Raavii💔

Only person she needs in her life is Shiva, she didn't even asked for any proof and trusted his words. That's how she is .

I hope Gaumbi gets some proof and Shiva gets her out of this mess asap.

Loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Raavii💔

Only person she needs in her life is Shiva, she didn't even asked for any proof and trusted his words. That's how she is .

I hope Gaumbi gets some proof and Shiva gets her out of this mess asap.

Loved it ❤️