Musical Yearnings( Completed)

Hey guys, yesterday i got free from my exams and went to my playlist to listen my songs and lay down and relax and than a song which is quite old but my favorite played and i can't stop thinking Shivi in it so just randomly i got the idea.......

It may not be unique or suprising but i just wanted to write this thing........

Fingers crossed hope you all like it.............

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SCENE:- it's hardik and anita's wedding and Raavi had to go to mami's house for prepration.

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It was a great time of happiness for everyone as anita and hardik marriage has been fixed and and in next one month they are going to tie knot. Apart from all this excitement everyone is busy in preparation.

One day everyone was siting in the hall in pandya niwas including mama and mami .Raavi was in kitchen and Shiva was in pandya store ,all were discussing about the functions and than mami said,

"Dhara tere paas toh sab hai yahan mere pass toh koii bhi nahi hai tyaarion mein madad ke liye, anita toh khud dulhan hai toh vo ghar ke bahar nahi jaa sakti.....main soch rahi thi ki agar shaadi tak Raavi wahan hamare ghar chale toh mujhe bhi asani ho jayegi aur main Raavi ke saath samay bhi bita loongi........."

Dhara says

"Haan mami jaroor.......main raavi ko bol deti hoon........Raavi bahar aana........"

Shiva enters in the house and says,

"Kya hua bhabhi uss chipkali ko kyu bula rahe ho...... "

And Raavi comes out of the kitchen her hairs were tied in loose bun and she was looking irresistible and Shiva stood there just looking at her. And Raavi says,

"Ji dhara dii....... "

And dhara says,

"Raavi vo mami keh rahi thi kii tu shaddi tak mami ke pass reh le taki unki tyaarion mein madad ho jaye...... Toh tu chale jaa yahan ka main aur rishita dekh lenge...... "

Shiva registered the words and was in a trance that Raavi will not be here upto a month till the wedding and he looked at Raavi who was busy in listening Dhara as Dhara says,

"Raavi tu jaakar saman pack karle fir chale jana mami mama ke saath "

And Raavi leaves to do the same, Shiva looks at her retreating figure and after some time he made an excuse and went to their room. Shiva looks at her and she was packing the clothes he sits on the bed grumpily and Raavi notices this and goes near him and sit and says,

"Main jaa rahi hoon vo massi ko help ki jaroorat hain baki dhara dii keh rahi thi ki....... "

She was cutt in between by him as he hold her hand and say,

"Raavi shaadi ko abhi ikk mahina hai aur tu ikkk mahine takk...... "

Raavi knew his trance as Raavi's heart was continuously triggering about Shiva but she need to go as it is important. So she clutches their already intwined hand firmly and shiva says,

"Jana jaroori hain Raavi...... "

both look at each other immersed in each other's eyes,

Mujhse judaa hokar, tumhe door jaana hai..

Mujhse judaa hokar, tumhe door jaana hai

Palbhar ki judaai, phir laut aana hai

Saathiya.. sang rahega tera pyar..

Saathiya.. rang layega intezaar..

Raavi looks at his face her eyes looked at him pleadingly and her own eyes fill up seeing a havoc of emotions in his eyes as his eyes are urging her to stay with him and this was making difficulty for her to leave.

Tumse judaa hokar, mujhe door jaana hai..

Tumse judaa hokar, mujhe door jaana hai

Palbhar ki judaai, phir laut aana hai

Saathiya.. sang rahega tera pyar..

Saathiya.. rang layega intezaar..

She nods and tear fell from her eyes,

Shiva wipes the tears and says,

"Raavi..... Vo.... Ik... K... BaAr..... Main.... Tujhe..... "

Raavi understood what he said and she hugged him Shiva wrapped his hands around her and Raavi starts patting his back in a to and fro motion making him relax. He just buried his face in crook of her neck inhaling her smell which is his favorite and murmurs,

"Dhyaan rakhna apna.. . .. . .. . "

Raavi smiles at his words and his unsaid love and humms.

Main hoon teri sajni, saajan hai tu mera

Tu baandh ke aaya, mere pyar ka sehra

Rishita enters the room to check whether Raavi is done or not and sees both of them hugging she coughs to get their attention both seperate and look at her and Rishita says,

"Raavi sab wait kar rahe hai.. . . "

Raavi nods and stood up and was about leave when Shiva hold her hand and she looks at him and Rishita says,

"Shiva, Raavi mami ke hi ghar jaa rahi hai aur tu toh aise kar raha hai jaise

Jaan hi nikal jayegi teri.. . .. . Chal chod jaane de.. . .. . "

Rishita drags Raavi with her and jrish takes bags outside Shiva follows them Raavi's eyes never leaving Shiva's face,

Chehre se ab tere, hat ti nahin ankhiyaan

Meanwhile Rishita kept on teasing Raavi taking Shiva's name and about how they both are looking at each other.

Tera naam le lekar, chhede mujhe sakhiyaan

Sakhiyon se ab mujhko, peechha chhudana hai..

Sakhiyon se ab mujhko, peechha chhudana hai

Palbhar ki judaai, phir laut aana hai

Saathiya.. sang rahega tera pyar..

Saathiya.. rang layega intezaar..

And Raavi leaves with mama and mami shiva kept on looking at her retreating figure and Raavi leaves by giving him an assuring smile.

After Raavi's departure Shiva went to store and afterwards in night he sat on the bed thinking of her and drifts to sleep and he dreams of her wearing a saree and a gajra.

Mere tasavvur mein. tum roz aati ho

Chupke se tum aakar, mera ghar sajaati ho

Ho.. Sajni bada pyara, ye roop hai tera

Gajre ke khushbu se, mehka hai ghar mera

Aankhon se ab teri, kaajal churaana hai..

and he hugs her from back and whisper sweet nothings in her ears. His dream is left incomplete when his phone rang and he standsup with a jolt and looks at his ringing phone,

Aankhon se ab teri, kaajal churaana hai

Palbhar ki judaai phir laut aana hai..

He smiles like a maniac ruffling his hairs.

It's Raavi.. . .. . HiS RAAVI.....

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Thanks for reading this OS guys.. . .. .

I am open for suggestion.. . .. . .

The song is from cult classic "HUM APKE HAIN KON.. . . . . "

https://youtu.be/HRf14sHr4EY

Enjoy the song.......

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION

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PART-ll

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159867632

PART-lll

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159884617

PART-lV

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159901703

PART-V

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159945781

jab maine sirf title pada tha tab mujhe laga ki separation track ka koi OS hai aur bahut emotinal hone wala 😅😅😅

but it turned to this,.....totally different😍😍😍

loved it dear😘😘😘

Originally posted by: virangna2005

jab maine sirf title pada tha tab mujhe laga ki separation track ka koi OS hai aur bahut emotinal hone wala 😅😅😅

but it turned to this,.....totally different😍😍😍

loved it dear😘😘😘

Thanks for reading😘🥰😍

That is soo sweet. In my head, there's continuation of this where Shiva sneaks into Raavi's house everynight and comes back in the morning before others wake up!

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

That is soo sweet. In my head, there's continuation of this where Shiva sneaks into Raavi's house everynight and comes back in the morning before others wake up!

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

That is soo sweet. In my head, there's continuation of this where Shiva sneaks into Raavi's house everynight and comes back in the morning before others wake up!

And a next part is awaiting...........

Can you suggest a song for this track.........

Originally posted by: virangna2005

odette.....please write this one too.......pretty pleaseeeeee

Please suggest a song for this track.....

And a new title please😅

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

surely will continue..........

Please suggest a song for this track.....

And a new title please😅

unchi hai building.......no no just kidding

hum tere bin kahin reh nhi paate

raat ko aaunga main

wait a min.....lagta old gaane sun kar main mom dad ke jamaane me chali gyi hu🤣🤣 let me be back my generation......

dil ko karaar aaya because shiva is restless because of his chipkali......

rataan lambiyaan lambiyaan re because shivi can't sleep without each other

This song is ❤️

You used it so well on them . Loved it😍

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

That is soo sweet. In my head, there's continuation of this where Shiva sneaks into Raavi's house everynight and comes back in the morning before others wake up!

Lols i thought same ...