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Posted: 3 years ago
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Namrata, thank you for writing such a beautiful and happy story in the middle of what is happening in the show.😊

Ab jahan Shiva hoga, wahin to Raavi rahegi”…this line was bliss

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Loved it Namratha❤️! Although their problems haven't completely sorted out, this conversation is a much required kick start to the whole process of it! Kaash aise scene mil jaata show pe... 😒



Thank you ❤️
I did want to address and show how they solve Shiva's anger issues, but it seemed too long for an OS. Maybe I will write another one on it someday.
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: mpks1

Namrata, this is awesome. Raavi come back to get him out of bail, instead ends up being with him in the jail and their conversation is on the right path. Ot would be nice if it plays out this way but unfortunately the makers have decided to take the path of destruction of the relationship and the bonding.



Thank you, Prema ❤️
Yes, I really hope the preleap sets up ShiVi for something good in the upcoming episodes!
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Namrata loved this ❤️❤️

Beautifully you have written about Shiva addressing his anger issues also Raavi being determined as always at time of engagement too she will always be the one who would put efforts till the very end and would do anything to save her relationship with Shiva .



Thank you so much V ❤️
Yes, it's always been Raavi who wanted to be on the good side of Shiva. Bachpan se!
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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: rayt_si

Beautiful yaar. Far better than the show 👍🏼

Would love to read more of your work ☺️



Thank you ❤️
Here are the links to my other OSes


ShiVi OS - Making Amends

ShiVi OS - Aftermath

ShiVi OS - Naya Saal, Nayi Shuruwat

Hope you enjoy them! Do share your feedback there if you feel like.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

This was very beautiful love.🤗❤️ I enjoyed reading this very much.

Thank you for the tag.😳



Thank you so much Pooh! ❤️
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Posted: 3 years ago
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I loved this! I have skipped watching episode since 💇‍♀️sbb came, and wanted to avoid everything related to this track. So glad though that here, Raavi is at least in this together with Shiva! Shiva realized his mistake, but again was going to repeat his previous mistake. So glad Raavi spelled things out to him loud and clear!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iktara22

Hey Namrata!!!


This is soo soo sooo touching and beautiful thing I've read this morning,i just lovedddd the self realisation part and the way she is being chipkali to her chattan!!!


I only wish for something like this,which ik makers won't so yahi se khush hojati hu😩💖



Thank you so much ❤️
Yeah me too. The shows is taking weird turns lately
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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Pritha_31

Shiva realising that pushing Raavi was wrong on her part and Raavi standing up for Shiva is so beautiful but I've a complaint next time you write something, tag me as well 🥺😛😛😂



Thank you smiley27
Done done will tag you from next time 😊
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Scribble19

Namrata, thank you for writing such a beautiful and happy story in the middle of what is happening in the show.😊

Ab jahan Shiva hoga, wahin to Raavi rahegi”…this line was bliss



Thank you so much ❤️
My attempt to escape from the reality in PS

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